BAU BOYS

Reid's POV back at the bau
i never answered sam's question,but no matter what i tell her she wont stop until she catches those people even if she risks her life to do it,i carefully sat at my scrivania, reception waiting for the call to head over to the hospital for the night,then hotch came up behind me but since i had my Musica in i couldnt hear "reid"he called but i couldnt hear him,he pulled my headphones out and i turned around "sam?" hotch looked at me "no" i got up"sorry im just worried about her,she actually wants to go to the hospital" hotch nodded at my commento "i know she's relentless but she wants...

Okay so I wrote a fanfic and i was wondering if anyone wanted to read it... here's the first chapter and here's the link
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Chapter One

Fallon Sawyer stood in line at the Starbucks every morning before heading off on a random adventure; she never deviated from her routine as she was a very precise woman. She ordered her usual, and today for a treat bought a double chunk Cioccolato chip cookie, for later of course. She waited patiently in line to receive her morning pick-me-up. She gazed aimlessly around the establishment. The walls...