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Edward Cullen and the Forbidden Love
Chapter One
    The moon floated like a shiny silver ball in the sky, high above the tall trees. The trees swayed softly making a hushing sound in the midnight breeze. A light layer of fog covered the lush underbrush with a fine mist. Bella sat on a mossy rock beside one of the massive trees. Touching the moss gently, careful not to disturb it, she waited in the gloom for her beloved. Hearing a snap from behind, the kind of snap caused da a twig o pinecone being stepped on, she looked behind her. Seeing nothing but the swaying trees and più mossy stones, she turned back to her stone.
    “Such a beautiful place,” whispered Bella to herself, “I will miss it greatly.”
Edward was moving Bella to a safer location to wait for his return. She would be leaving her grove of tall trees with its silvery moon and light fog, with its surrounding meadow whose tall grasses swayed in the afternoon wind and shined under the bright sun. Although she felt the danger of remaining in one spot for too long, she would miss the comfort of this place.
    “I’m back,” detto Edward with casual confidence, “You look beautiful in the moonlight, good enough to eat.”
“Oh Edward, te know I hate those jokes. Why must te tease me so?,” sighed Bella.
Edward wasn’t teasing, as he slowly walked toward Bella. As he slowly started to grin, he pulled Bella close and planted a tender baciare on first her forehead, then her nose, and finally on her lips. As he lingered on her lips, Bella let loose a sigh. To Bella, this was heaven.
    “Its late, te need to go to sleep,” sighed Edward, “You are tired.”
Edward proceeded to lift Bella in his arms, and jumped to the great heights of the surrounding trees. As he landed among their leafy boughs, he settled Bella down on a branch that would support her throughout the night.
    “Good night, my love,” detto Edward, “I will protect you. Tomorrow, we move.”
As Bella began to fall into a de