name: autumn dasher
age: 17
bio: both parents died when she is 12 yrs old and no sibligs
auto mail: unknown
crush/dating: single
type of alchemy use: nature alchemy
descripition: she has 2 purposely made scars on her hands. fire circle on her right and ice on her left,its so that she does not have 2 recreate the fire and ice transmutation every time.
special powers/abilitys: can produce fire and ice and combine them 2gether 2 create lightning

(Ok, I guess I'll put my characters in)

Name: Cole Jericho

Age: 17

Bio: Cole has lived in a small trading town in the middle of the desert ruins. His father died fighting Drake's Soldiers and his mom is very over protective and hates Alchemy.

Dating: Alice (another one of my oc's)

Automail: No

Type of Alchemy used: Spatio Alchemy(The ability to alter the space around him. Example: Teleporting or Walking through walls), Cryo Alchemy (The ability to alter or create Ice at will)

Description: About 6 feet tall, wears a black and gray hoodie but never has the hood up. He also wears the hoodie to cover up the alchemy tattoos on his arms. Always wears military cargo pants and has short blond hair that looks like he just got out of bed. He also wears a pair of black sneakers.

*In the small trading village, At Cole's house*

*A sound like someone smashing on the door echoes through the house*

Cole: *wakes up, in his room* ugh what the hell is going on *walks down stairs*

Cole: *forgets to put his hoodie on* *opens door* hello?

*Four Drake Soldiers stand outside the door*

Drake Soldier 1: Cole Jericho?

Cole: yeah and your problem is?

Drake Soldier 2: shut up you brat!

Drake Soldier 1: You have been accused of not paying the taxes to live in this town

Cole: well look guys *yawns* I don't pay taxes, not old enough

Drake Soldier 3: Look if you don't pay up, we'll burn your house down!

Drake Soldier 4: and put your family in jail!

Cole: what did you say *getting mad*

Drake Soldier 4: *sees Cole's tattoo's* hey look hey is one of those rebel scum

Drake Soldier 1: You rebels will all die when we get our forces together, and maybe I'll kill you while that girlfriend of yours watches

Cole: *smirks* Shut up! *kicks the soldier into the wall of another house*

Drake Soldier 3: kill the brat!

autumn:- sits outside of her home alone with nobody 2 bother her- god i hate being here at home with nothing 2 do ( her home is in the woods in the west where almost close 2 where ur oc cole lives)-gets up and walks 2 the town where she could go get some of her chores done- this place is quiet and not very much ppl -hears the sound and runs 2 it- ??

*In the small trading village, In the Street*

Drake Soldier 2: *takes out a knife and tries to stab cole*

Cole: *catches the knife, breaks the soldiers arm and knocks him out with an elbow to the face*

Drake Soldier 3: *takes out a pistol and shoots at cole*

Cole: *teleports to dodge the bullets*

Drake Soldier 4: whats going on? Is he using Alchemy?

Cole: *appears next to soldier 3* bullets don't work on me *drops the soldier with a knee to the face*

Drake Soldier 4: ahhh I'm out of here *runs*

*All of the other soldiers run away*

Cole: you guys ever want a rematch, bring more people

Villager 1: whats going on?

Villager 2: Cole is just roughing up the guards

Villager 1: oh

autumn:......-hides behind a tree and watches- omg....-stays quiet-

*In the street*

Cole: they usually have more guys to fight me, oh well

Cole: I better get dressed and go check on Alice *goes inside his house*

autumn: -comes out from hiding and sees every soldier watching the newcomer-.......-glares at them- wat r u guys looking at me 4 some odd reason....

soldier 1: ur not from around here r u little girl

autumn: u dare call me little im beat the living hell out of u

( i hope u like it)

(Ok time to add another character)(Thanks, cool pic)

Name: Alice Markhov

Age: 17

Bio: Alice was only 5 when both her parents became I'll with a strange flu. She was sent to live with her grandma in the trading village. She works with herbs and medicine hopefully to cure her parents.

Automail: No

Dating: Cole (one of my oc's)

Type of Alchemy used: Herbo Alchemy (The ability to alter and control plants at will) and Terra Alchemy (The ability to alter and control the earth at will)

Description: About 5 foot 6 inches tall. Has shoulder length brunette hair. Always wears a green T-shirt with blue jeans.
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*In the Street*

Cole: *walks out of his house with his hoodie on* Ok lets hope those soldiers know when to call it quits

Cole: hopefully Alice is ok *walks down the street*

*At the Market*

Alice: *uses her Alchemy to grow healing herbs instantly* wow I'm getting really good at that *laughs*

soldier 1: -hits autumn-

autumn: -screams and uses her right hand and punches the soldier in the ribs-

soldier 1: -screams in pain and fire appears on his coat-

autumn: i told u not 2 mess with me or i will do worse

soldier 1: -runs away screaming-

*At the Market*

Alice: *sees Autumn fight the soldier* ugh not again

Alice: *walks over to Autumn* hey you better quit that, the military around here doesn't like it when you fight them

Alice: Also we don't like all this fighting in the market, so buy something or get out

*In the street*

Cole: man, its hotter than usual today. That can't be good

autumn: mind ur own beeswax and besides i dont like ppl bossing me around so why dont u just leave me alone -walks away and went shopping-

soldier 1: -runs and jumps in2 the lake 2 wash on the little fire that was on his coat- damn that little girl is powerful

*At the Market*

Alice: What was her problem?

Alice: *runs after autumn* hey I was telling you some advice to get the soldiers to leave you alone. They hate us alchemist users even though they work for one

Alice: my name is Alice, whats yours? *holds her hand our for a hand shake*

*At the gate's to the market*

Cole: well looks like the soldiers have been fighting with the civilians again

Cole: Drake must have ordered security up a peg or two

autumn: -takes 1 glove off and shake hands with alice and puts back on- my name is autumn and i really dont like those dang soldiers wat they did 2 my parents -looks sad-

*At the Market*

Alice: yeah, things haven't been the same since Drake took over the country

Alice: So your a fire alchemist? thats kinda rare around here

Alice: I'm a plant and earth alchemist, I make medicine to help people

*A bunch of soldiers enter the market*

Soldier Leader: All right we are looking for alchemists!

Soldier Leader: Any and All alchemists will be arrested and thrown into prison for the rest of there life

Alice: *to Autumn* there is to many to fight, we have to hide

*At the market entrance*

Cole: crap, the soldiers are on patrol *climbs onto a roof*

Cole: *runs across the roof tops*

autumn: -to alice- rite and i really dont want them 2 find us at all

soldier 1: -climbs out of the lake and joined up with the others- so r we looking 4 the alchemy brats

*In the Market*

Alice: lets go *runs down the aisles of the market*

Alice: I know a path to an underground safe house!

Soldier Leader: there they go! get them! Lethal force is authorized

*6 soldiers run after Alice and Autumn*

Alice: crap, If I get caught again. They're gonna kill me!

*On the Roof tops*

Cole: *running* s*** looks like they spotted someone!

*A guard runs onto the roof, but doesn't see cole*

Cole: *conjures a club made out of ice and knocks the guard out* lights out!

Cole: *runs but falls through a window into a store*

autumn: -runs with alice- why cant they just leave us alone...-keeps looking back more soldiers came 4 to help-

*In an alley*

Alice: *running but trips* ahh my knee, I can't run

*5 Soldiers run into the alley*

Soldier 1: hey stop or we'll shoot!

Soldier 2: *recognizes Alice* hey its that medicine brat that stole the money from us!

Soldier 1: Capture them dead or alive! preferably dead!

*Four of the soldiers run at Alice and Autumn*

Cole: *walks through a wall, into the alley* Don't move!

Soldier 3: whats a brat like you going to do?

Soldier 2: its Jericho! from earlier! Kill him!

autumn: -walks back 2 alice- alice r u ok

(i just wanted to try it~)

Name:Sayaka Kutiel
Age: 20
Bio: Her parents died mysteriously after they disappeared from her.
Auto Mail?:No.
Crush/Dating: Nobody currently.
Type of Alchemy used:Sayaka uses Flame Alchemy.
Pic or Description:Roy Mustang's long lost cousin. (She will soon get automail after a soldier shoots her in the left shoulder multiple times)

Sayaka: -opens a door leading to the alley- What's going on here?! -looks at autumn,alice, and cole- hey, you guys get away from here, I'll hold them off. -gets in a fighting stance-

*In the Alley*

Soldier 1: Who are you? -tries to punch Sayaka-
Sayaka: -grabs his arm and flips him over.- none of ur business
Soliders 2,3, and 4: -grab their guns and start shooting-
Sayaka: oh no you dont! -uses tap snap flare to melt the bullets and burn them-
Soldier 5: No, a Flame Alchemist?! Im outta here!! -runs away-

Sayaka: -coughs up blood- You guys okay? -holds her abdomen- looks like one of them got me... (Sorry, i get impatient sometimes...)

No offense to anybody, but i feel like this was ripped off of my idea.
My forum is called "Rise and Fall" and it takes place after the initial story. So does this one. Not to mention you used on of the words from my title. I honestly think it's a very unlikely turn of events in the FMA timeline, and it's really, as i see it, a rip off of my idea. Sorry, but i don't like it.

autumn: -nods- lets go alice and cole -leaves with them-

Sayaka: -glances at them- Damn...so they just leave me here? i see how it is..-Uses nearby tools to fix her wound-

Sayaka: Man i haven't done that since i used to be a surgon, then...HE told me to stop...

Sayaka:-depressed- Maybe i'll follow them, just in case, since i have nothing else left because of HIM...-starts to follow the trio-

autumn: -sits down 2 catch her breathe- this is not very fun after all i can wield ice and fire -sighs-

Sayaka: Hm? an ice AND fire alchemist? -tries to jump off the roof but lands on a guards head-

Soldier: What th- -knocked out-

Sayaka: Crap....-shoves into a warehouse- Maybe i should ask how she controls ice at the same time...

Sayaka: -starts to walk toward them but the soldier starts to shoot- AGH!! -runs to the trio as fast as she can- ugh..losing blood...-holding her left arm-

autumn: -sees sayaka and runs 2 her and punches the solider with her left hand and ice appears on his side- back off way from her

Soldier: Crap! -runns off-

Sayaka: Thanks for the help...-holding her shoulder- Ugh...might need an automail arm soon...cant lift this arm up at all...

Sayaka: *to autumn* Hey, do u know any automail shops around here?

autumn: yes there is in my village -takes sayaka 2 her village with her friends-

Sayaka: Thanks. -groans- just freeze my arm off so they dont have to cut it off ok? its ok it wont hurt

autumn: ur welcome and are u sure u want me 2 do that -nods- ok -touches her arm an instint her entire arm was frozen in ice- i hope ur ok with this

Sayaka: -groans- No, its okay. Im just really cold now.

autumn: oh im srry i didnt know that

Sayaka: Heheh its okay. How far are we to the village?

autumn: not far my village is beyond those trees -points 2 the forest-

Sayaka: Ah, I see...What's your name? I'm afraid I didn't catch it earlier...