Sneak peek: Chapter 1
3rd Person POV:
She grinned wildly as she ran, getting farther and farther into the forest, farther and farther away from the cops and police sirens, and closer to Oklahoma. Sure, her legs felt like led, but Alice didn't care. All she cared about was to get to her destination: just beyond the Oklahoma line.
“Alice Williams, stop running!”
That was a policeman. This was the third time this week that she'd been through this part of the woods, so she was fairly familiar with the area. Unlike the local P.D., Alice knew exactly where she was going. Each time she went through here, different police officers followed her. They didn't know all the short-cuts like Alice did.
Nobody knew why she kept coming back to Austin, Texas, not even herself. But they all knew where she'd come from.
Alice Williams had run away from her family because they didn't understand her. She wanted to do her own thing, but her opinion didn't matter to them. So, three weeks before her birthday, September 22, she packed her bags and left in the middle of the night.
If there was one thing Alice didn't know, it was the date. The only thing thing she really knew was that it was probably passed the 22nd, passed her birthday.
But if it was passed her birthday, why were the police officers still after her? She was a legal adult.
Alice didn't spend too much time questioning the police. She saw the familiar sigh that said her three favorite words: Welcome To Oklahoma. As she passed into Oklahoma, she grinned even wider, if that was possible, and listened to the cops curse behind her.
"That...Girl...crap! That girl...is waayy to fast..." a police officer muttered, gasping for breath.
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Sooo, what do you think?? Suggestions are great! :D
3rd Person POV:
She grinned wildly as she ran, getting farther and farther into the forest, farther and farther away from the cops and police sirens, and closer to Oklahoma. Sure, her legs felt like led, but Alice didn't care. All she cared about was to get to her destination: just beyond the Oklahoma line.
“Alice Williams, stop running!”
That was a policeman. This was the third time this week that she'd been through this part of the woods, so she was fairly familiar with the area. Unlike the local P.D., Alice knew exactly where she was going. Each time she went through here, different police officers followed her. They didn't know all the short-cuts like Alice did.
Nobody knew why she kept coming back to Austin, Texas, not even herself. But they all knew where she'd come from.
Alice Williams had run away from her family because they didn't understand her. She wanted to do her own thing, but her opinion didn't matter to them. So, three weeks before her birthday, September 22, she packed her bags and left in the middle of the night.
If there was one thing Alice didn't know, it was the date. The only thing thing she really knew was that it was probably passed the 22nd, passed her birthday.
But if it was passed her birthday, why were the police officers still after her? She was a legal adult.
Alice didn't spend too much time questioning the police. She saw the familiar sigh that said her three favorite words: Welcome To Oklahoma. As she passed into Oklahoma, she grinned even wider, if that was possible, and listened to the cops curse behind her.
"That...Girl...crap! That girl...is waayy to fast..." a police officer muttered, gasping for breath.
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Sooo, what do you think?? Suggestions are great! :D