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Dang, girl. Not only would you get an "A" but you could get an A+++

Props for you and two thumbs up.

i like it, but truthfully OTH is not very realistic. it is my favorite show of all time, but it is insanely unrealistic. most high school tutors don't go on rock tours, leaving their husbands, who then drink themselves into a stupor & wreck race cars. & most dads don't father two different children in the same town only 3 months apart. & hopefully that dad doesn't kill his brother because he thinks he tried to kill him when really it was his wife.

it also isn't full on wholesome watching. in the first four seasons there was A LOT of drinking, parties & premarital sex, which is realistic, but is also pretty bad influences, especially since nathan gets away with doing it all since he's the star basketball player.

other than that, i think it was really good & you'd get an A. if it's for a class, your teacher will probably never watch the show & if she does, then she'll only see new episodes that are pretty wholesome, so what i said wouldn't really matter, but it's good writing.

It's Great. You're a really good writer! A+ or in sweden MVG!

Loved it, 5 stars!

And like shearer said, it isn't quite as realistic as you said, but as long as your teacher doesn't secretly watch OTH... lmao you're good!