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I just got done Scrivere this free verse poem will te tell me what te think of it? I would really like some feed back its kinda long though (btw im 13 yrs old)
On the harsh nights of winter they run
running and panting to never return
snow shimmers as it falls in the night
mostrare their breath and falling onto their soft fur
running,and running, to their unknown destination
no one cares from where they come
banned from society to burn
fearing of what comes in the light
torched and left in the dark
howling for mercy in which they never receive
feeling the gruesome pain a ton
left for death at every turn
dripping tears and scattered blood in a deadly fight
easily finding what's wrong but struggling to find what's right
fighting to live, fighting for forgiveness, fighting for love
snapping the twigs as they run seeming forever young
using the pain and regrets to learn
running into the woods out of sight
praying and crying that this horror ends
this is why the Lupi howl
they wait for a chance to be forgiven,
a single chance to be forgiven,
for a crime they never committed...
running and panting to never return
snow shimmers as it falls in the night
mostrare their breath and falling onto their soft fur
running,and running, to their unknown destination
no one cares from where they come
banned from society to burn
fearing of what comes in the light
torched and left in the dark
howling for mercy in which they never receive
feeling the gruesome pain a ton
left for death at every turn
dripping tears and scattered blood in a deadly fight
easily finding what's wrong but struggling to find what's right
fighting to live, fighting for forgiveness, fighting for love
snapping the twigs as they run seeming forever young
using the pain and regrets to learn
running into the woods out of sight
praying and crying that this horror ends
this is why the Lupi howl
they wait for a chance to be forgiven,
a single chance to be forgiven,
for a crime they never committed...
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