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so i was going thru my notebook and i found this single paragraph :

I woke up early in the morning and put on my coat. I walked outside and put my cappuccio up. I began to walk the white snow crunching beneath my feet. I was soon walking through the forest, suddenly a mist came out of nowhere. I could only see a few paces in front of me. The successivo thing i new there was a bag over my head and i was being carried somewhere.