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It is now one giorno after the Coneticutt shooting. Im 12 years old,and im affected da this tragedy as well. In 5th grade,i had something called Kindergarten Buddies. We 5th graders helped them learn to read,and my kindergarten buddy was great. When i heard of the shooting,i only thought of her. Thank god we werent there,because i live in CA. I thought of her getting shot. As i type this, the words im typing just go onto the screen. I just want te all to know my cuore goes out to all of those affected. Please know that they are in a better place now,and letting go is hard to do. I know. Almost 30 people died,most of the ratio children 5-10. Let me know what te think. Im sorry once more,and know that we are più fortunate,so be thankful. How can this be so well written bu a 12 yr old? Well i write a lot. And this is one of the most important things i write. Well,thank te for reaeing. Once more,i hopw te all are praying for those unfortuante families and souls. Thank you.
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look,i worte this to help others. not get ppl saying "well written?" o "what about china?" i do agree the local media should say things about it more,because if they did più young people would hear about it and might try to write abput it like i did. also,say what te want about me,but im nobody to say stuff about others i dont even know. unlike CERTAIN people. bottom line,i only did this to say how i felt,not get crap from random people i dont even know. well thanks anyways for those like Spicekitten. well anyways, thanks.
dbzdude1000 posted più di un anno fa
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one last thing:OF COURSE I SPELL CRAP WRONG. im 12 freakin years old! and this IS well written compared to most kids at my school,even in the school district. and no, im not trying to start something,only defending myself.
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
"How can this be so well written bu a 12 yr old?"Well i write a lot. And this is one of the most important things i write. HOLY FUCK< I"M LAUGHING. No one ever detto it was well written. omfg te aren't self-centered at all.


Okay, First off, I don't pray o believe in it. (cue shitstorm) secondo off, we all know about, yes it's sad, but 22 people were killed in China too, and there aren't shit load of bloody non-questions and domande about that, is there?

Don't get me wrong it's sad, but it's being over-covered.

That's just my opinion :/


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I agree. Too many deaths in too many places
CapShunsuifan13 posted più di un anno fa
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^yes, it sad how the news is mostly focused on America
XxKeithHarkinxX posted più di un anno fa
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I don't mind the government, mainly because I don't have to deal with it wuw
XxKeithHarkinxX posted più di un anno fa
Spicekitten said:
te are Ribelle - The Brave and amazing. I know that your boldness is brightning the hearts of many right now. Thank te for caring and God bless you.
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CapShunsuifan13 said:
Really te felt the need to write this thing. Everyone was affected da it, not just you.
Plus you're under-rating twelve anno olds. Most of them are better writers than you~ just saying. You're missing integral parts of your sentence structure and word choice is off.

But i mourn those who've died. Why te feel the need to play up this one tragedy over others I don't know.
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ikr e_e
XxKeithHarkinxX posted più di un anno fa
egyptprincess7 said:
Hun,you actually misspelled words,and you're sentences are a bit off. Being a little bit self-centered,are we? But anyways,yes that shooting was one of the most tragic things that every happened. I feel sorry for all the kids who Lost their lives. But,there's also a lot of other tragic events that happened but we don't see non-questions about those,do we?
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YES EXACTLY
XxKeithHarkinxX posted più di un anno fa
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lol "non-questions"
CapShunsuifan13 posted più di un anno fa
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^ !!!!
TheLefteris24 posted più di un anno fa
Mindless_Luv said:
:'( Everytime I think of that shooting it just makes me sad. Who would actually hurt a bunch of kids who aren't even 9 yet?????? It's just sad...... :'( *Cries*
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And well written my ass!
Mindless_Luv posted più di un anno fa
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I think some of them were 10.... still tragedy
CapShunsuifan13 posted più di un anno fa
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Meh............They were still kids though
Mindless_Luv posted più di un anno fa
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True
CapShunsuifan13 posted più di un anno fa
Makeupdiva said:
Yes, this was a horrible thing that happened. But te can't dwell on it. People die everyday and this wasn't the first school shooting to have happened. They're in my thoughts, all the families who Lost someone in that shooting.
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baulchs1234 said:
te will still get effected but te do not have to worry about it to much
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