What do te think of my fan made manga

Well there's a successivo page coming up and if te can't read it
Snow: why is it so hard
Snow: my powers are already hard enough but protecting an Iceland
Snow: what should I do
???: well my dear
Snow:what the!?
???: it's so simple
Ok first of all snow is a Angel well typically an ice Angel and the other person well I'll tell te when I make the successivo page if te hate spoilers