Is my character okay?

I postato a domanda about my character a while fa and a bunch of people called him a Mary-Sue. I worked on him a lot and I'm wondering if he's better now.

Name: Ceel

Age: 2007

Sexuality: homosexual

likes: singing, attention, sweets, being alone, Musica (mostly rock, screamo, and metal. artists including sws, bvb, ptv, Kiss, Motley Crue, etc.), acting, his friends, emo cloths

dislikes: bvb haters, stupid people, homophobes, himself, bullies, pop music, modern country music, death, people against any religion, etc.

strengths: good singing, nice, fairly smart

weaknesses: selfish, afraid of people, bad at communicating, close minded

other: he's the ghost of an elf prince and he possessed a girl. He meets his grandson from the future and has to help him so no one is discriminated. He also is trying to become a singer to use his Musica against discrimination. He has musical powers that came from being an elf.
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springely said:
Overpowered and done like 135,196,513 times.

Okay not really.
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What?
misscrazel posted più di un anno fa
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I don't get your answer.
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sieluvzsoul said:
Yeah he's good :)
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Thanks!
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zanhar1 said:
I wouldn't call him a Gary-Stu (as he has some weaknesses and not everyone loves him) plus he has a rather compelling back story.

I would however say he's kind of a cliche emo/scene boy. Which can be off putting to some audiences.

But he seems like a neat character over all.
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Thanks! He is a little emo, but I try not to make him cliche.
misscrazel posted più di un anno fa
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No problem.I'm sure you'll find a way to sposta him away from the cliches. ^_^ Good luck on your writing.
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Thanks!
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