one più after this one plz leave a commento on what te think I should name the squil
Renesemee's pov
I saw a brown haired vampire leaning over uncle Jasper's neck I jumped at her and pinned her on the ground.Are te sure Renesmee te want to do that I heared a vocie hiss"Nessie don't look away from her"Adam yelled to me.I kept my eyes on her .I felt a cold hand Grab my shoulder and pull me away ."Get away from her" dad detto I looked up at him,he looked different.His golden eyes were an emereald green and his puipils were hazle.I looked over at her again I didn't see a differentsI looked over at Adam and his eyes were Brown with swirly puipils.I slid out of his grib and ran over to Adam " get her Adam " I looked at him he grabed my arms and pulled them behind my back " thank te darling" she detto "Adam ,Adam please snap out of it"I pleaded as he thitened his grib "who are you" I asked" looking over at her."I Renesmee am Adam's twin sister Alana and your wosre nigthmare".
Ok now I didn't really discrbe Alana She has long Brown hair Red eyes .She's 5ft tall and her ability if te haven't notice is kinnda like hypntising but it's an advance form of Adam's .She's a minet older than Adam and She looks 16 Adam looks 18.That's all foks.
Renesemee's pov
I saw a brown haired vampire leaning over uncle Jasper's neck I jumped at her and pinned her on the ground.Are te sure Renesmee te want to do that I heared a vocie hiss"Nessie don't look away from her"Adam yelled to me.I kept my eyes on her .I felt a cold hand Grab my shoulder and pull me away ."Get away from her" dad detto I looked up at him,he looked different.His golden eyes were an emereald green and his puipils were hazle.I looked over at her again I didn't see a differentsI looked over at Adam and his eyes were Brown with swirly puipils.I slid out of his grib and ran over to Adam " get her Adam " I looked at him he grabed my arms and pulled them behind my back " thank te darling" she detto "Adam ,Adam please snap out of it"I pleaded as he thitened his grib "who are you" I asked" looking over at her."I Renesmee am Adam's twin sister Alana and your wosre nigthmare".
Ok now I didn't really discrbe Alana She has long Brown hair Red eyes .She's 5ft tall and her ability if te haven't notice is kinnda like hypntising but it's an advance form of Adam's .She's a minet older than Adam and She looks 16 Adam looks 18.That's all foks.
