Lois & Clark // Everybody's got to Amore today (persuasion)

Lachlan Luthor (b. 1916) was the father of Lionel Luthor. He and his wife lived in Suicide Slums and he scraped da doing petty crime. In 1961, he was hired da Sheriff Billy Tate to kill a mysterious stranger, Joe the Drifter, but instead killed Louise McCallum. However, he was never convicted of the crime because Tate had to prevent anyone from finding out his involvement. Lachlan and Eliza were killed in a tenement fire. It was later revealed that Lionel Luthor and morgan Edge set the fuoco in order to collect the couple's insurance money.
Eliza Luthor (maiden name Meehan) was Lachlan's wife...

My first ever clois fic and this is an AU taking place after season 8's episode "Bride". I would REALLY like some feedback!! thanks!! :)<3


Chapter 1: The Lois Factor


She crawled into letto as tears rolled down her cheeks. She just lay there choking back sobs; feeling paralyzed as memories of that giorno came rushing back to her with a whirlwind of heartbreak. Her cover had been blown, she could no longer pretend she didn’t have feelings for the dorky farm boy when all she wanted to do was run her hands through his thick dark hair and baciare him. Her hands gripped her blanket tight as she thought...