SpongeBob PLANKTONS VICTORY

darthzeus posted on Aug 12, 2012 at 07:06PM
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più di un anno fa darthzeus said…
laugh
one day spongebob was working a double shift. THE NIGHT SHIFT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!
"see ya tommorow boys " said Mr.Krab. 'But Mr. Krab i dont want to stay with this yellow freak of nature"
said squidward. meanwhile....
*tonight plankton will put a gang of fish in a shoting act at the krusty krab. then he will call the police and blame squidward , while spongebob will be too shocked to move. plankton will then succed*
at12:00 plankton put his plan to work at 12:30 squiwar d,the gang ,a nd the policewere gone at 1:00 plankton went into the krusty krab and ......

More chapters coming soon please chech in spread the word
più di un anno fa darthzeus said…
crying
write please reply
più di un anno fa ChocolateGuy123 said…
smile
That was good,but it could definitely use some work.I suggest making the chapters longer and adding more detail about what's going on,and a little more dialogue.I love the plot,though!And sure,I'll spread the word!:D
più di un anno fa darthzeus said…
laugh
thanks ill take that into consideration talk to me if you have ideas or any suggestions
thanks again and yeah please spread the word
più di un anno fa darthzeus said…
hello
più di un anno fa darthzeus said…
... chapter 2
patrick went in and snuck around spongebob he unlocked the door to mr. krabs office
 ... chapter 2 patrick went in and snuck around spongebob he unlocked the door to mr. krabs office
più di un anno fa darthzeus said…
hi