CLONE WARS episode 9 mantello of Darkness

Nakoma sat nervously in the Jedi head quarters. She knew she was in DEEP trouble. Anakin was angry at her for doing such a thing. Obi-Wan couldn't believe she didn't listen. Padme tried her best get over the shock. What exactly DID Nakoma do, te might ask? Secretly go out with a Sith Lord!

Dontel seemed to be nice. He was on an undercover mission for the Sith when he met Nakoma. The più the two got to know each other, the più Dontel used her as bait for his evil plans! Dontel was just bad news all around. That's just sad because Nakoma liked him. Here's what else is sad, because he only used...

This is about my Original Character, Lorrettai Hunalo.
Wondering how to pernounce that? Lor-et-tie, Who-n-all-oh. :)
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Intro:
Anakin was running. Not for his life o anything big like that, just for some peace and quiet, away from Ahsoka and Obi-Wan. He turned a corner and pressed up against the wall.
“Uh, sir, what are te doing?” Rex had been walking da when Anakin made his appearance.
“Uh… nothing, nothing at all, why, what are te doing?” Anakin replied quickly, walking away. Rex stared after him, completely bewildered.
As soon as Anakin knew...

I looked down at the valley below from our cliff position. Tens of thousands of droids massing up for a full scale attack I presumed. "Echo!You might want to see this!"I shouted to Echo. "What is i-By the force!Thats alot of clankers!"Echo detto through the comm. "What do we do now?"I asked curiously. "We fight Lieutenant and we link up with the 501st".Echo said. "Echo Wraith this is Rex!We need to your cover fire!Where the hell are you!"shouted Rex over the comm channel. I could make out explosions and laser blasts in the background. "Hurry!Patching coordinates to you're HUDs."said Rex. "I...