Ok, this is the last chapter I know it took too long.... This is a very short chapter, anyway, I hope te like it!
TONY’S POV
I hold her in my harms, I feel her cuore beating and her inconsolable sob.
-Calm down…. –I say, passing my hand through her hair. –I… I shouldn’t have kissed you, I’m sorry Ziva… I didn’t want te to stay like this, ok? Stop crying…
Finally I set her free from my harms, she’s looking at me with her beautiful brown eyes tired of crying.
ABBY’S POV
-This is kind of sad…. –I say.
-Abby, I’m not sure if this will result… -McGee says.
-Shut up McGee! It will…
ZIVA’S POV
I close my eyes and take a very deep breath, I’m not very sure but I really think I’m going to say it:
-I… I Amore you. I can’t believe I actually detto this, but I did, so please, please, could te say something?
This is the definition of silence, damn… he got say something!
He approaches and softly he fits his lips on mine. I sigh into his mouth.
-I Amore te too… -He says.
He kisses me again, his tongue sliding on my mouth, his uncontrolled breath…. I put my arms around his neck while his hand travels from my waist to my shoulder and makes the strap of my dress down over my harm.
ABBY’S POV
-See McGee! I told you! ciao thanks for your help Tom! –I shout.
-You welcome, Abbs….
-Ah ah ah, it was time to this two to get together!... But I can’t hear nothing…
-That’s because they’re kissing, McGee!
-Oh… So maybe I should turn this off…
-YEAH, maybe McGee we don’t want to hear inappropriate sounds!-Gibbs says.
-Do te think they…?
-Don’t know, don’t want to know McGee! –He says while he kisses my cheek.
-Bye Gibbs…. I can’t believe they’re actually together!!!! Vance can’t even dream that we did this….What do te think they’re doing now….?
-I don’t know…. But we can find out!
-No, Mcgee! They need some time, just the two of them…
TONY’S POV
She’s sleeping, so beautiful… This time I’ll stay with her, forever, I’ll never let her go.
It happened, I still don’t know how but I did fell in Amore with her. And she’s the only one that I need.
Three o’clock, I’m still awake, because I rather to see her sleeping successivo to me, than to fall asleep and rest. The lights are down and the starlight come in through the window, on the tavolo there’s a movie, a very special one, in the DVD’s box te may read “Dirty Dancing”.
TONY’S POV
I hold her in my harms, I feel her cuore beating and her inconsolable sob.
-Calm down…. –I say, passing my hand through her hair. –I… I shouldn’t have kissed you, I’m sorry Ziva… I didn’t want te to stay like this, ok? Stop crying…
Finally I set her free from my harms, she’s looking at me with her beautiful brown eyes tired of crying.
ABBY’S POV
-This is kind of sad…. –I say.
-Abby, I’m not sure if this will result… -McGee says.
-Shut up McGee! It will…
ZIVA’S POV
I close my eyes and take a very deep breath, I’m not very sure but I really think I’m going to say it:
-I… I Amore you. I can’t believe I actually detto this, but I did, so please, please, could te say something?
This is the definition of silence, damn… he got say something!
He approaches and softly he fits his lips on mine. I sigh into his mouth.
-I Amore te too… -He says.
He kisses me again, his tongue sliding on my mouth, his uncontrolled breath…. I put my arms around his neck while his hand travels from my waist to my shoulder and makes the strap of my dress down over my harm.
ABBY’S POV
-See McGee! I told you! ciao thanks for your help Tom! –I shout.
-You welcome, Abbs….
-Ah ah ah, it was time to this two to get together!... But I can’t hear nothing…
-That’s because they’re kissing, McGee!
-Oh… So maybe I should turn this off…
-YEAH, maybe McGee we don’t want to hear inappropriate sounds!-Gibbs says.
-Do te think they…?
-Don’t know, don’t want to know McGee! –He says while he kisses my cheek.
-Bye Gibbs…. I can’t believe they’re actually together!!!! Vance can’t even dream that we did this….What do te think they’re doing now….?
-I don’t know…. But we can find out!
-No, Mcgee! They need some time, just the two of them…
TONY’S POV
She’s sleeping, so beautiful… This time I’ll stay with her, forever, I’ll never let her go.
It happened, I still don’t know how but I did fell in Amore with her. And she’s the only one that I need.
Three o’clock, I’m still awake, because I rather to see her sleeping successivo to me, than to fall asleep and rest. The lights are down and the starlight come in through the window, on the tavolo there’s a movie, a very special one, in the DVD’s box te may read “Dirty Dancing”.
i need help cus i have writers block and i need help chapter 2 was complet crap so some one give me ideas
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter o try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter o try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter