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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 3
    The interview
    Approximately two days and we were off. Ashlynn was excitedly working on the script and Sasha was helping with the budget that the teacher just wouldn’t help with. Even with Fern’s influence she still didn’t trust us, maybe a little bit more, but still not that much. We were still undecided about the whole interviewing thing-y so we’ve just been searching on the internet and getting some old released police records.
    “Okay, so the horror ora is looking pretty good,” Sasha mutters as she skims the pages we’ve got done. “Surprising, I thought you’d suck, Ashlynn.”
    “Shut up!” Ashlynn snapped, snatching back the papers. “I’ve got a lot of work to do, don’t bug me.”
    “Whatever,” Sasha said, walking to a seat.
    RT frowned. “Don’t we have to write a boring segnala too, cause the video’s our visual?”
    Lila shrugged, “I don’t know.” She smiled at him sweetly. “But since te suggested it start writing.”
    “No! I’m just saying!”
    “And I’m telling,” Lila says, giving him paper and pencil. “Unless te prefer typing.”
    It’s funny how a whole of two days can bring an oddly like of group of Friends together, we already had crack jokes and what-not. And now, there’s no holding back our insults, because it doesn’t hurt. Maybe it’s because most of us were a bunch of loners, o maybe because were just friendly and easily welcoming.
    Fern snatched the papers out of RT’s hands. “Let the nerd do it.”
    “Hey Leader!” Chauncey called out.
    “It’s Lewis.” I say, coming to her.
    “Yeah whatever, anyways Leader should I research more, I should I just…”
    “Well…what do we know so far?”
    It’s a rhetorical question, because everyone who’s lived in this town for più than a anno knows, but Chauncey risposte me anyway. “Nothing, this guy’s a ghost, no DNA, no…nothing, nothing whatsoever.”
    “Surprising,” I say sarcastically. “Anyway, maybe we can keep searching.”
    Chauncey shrugged. “I was thinking of going to the police station, asking them, te know, più easier for our project.”
    “And they won’t suspect?” I ask, critically.
    “I’ll bring a camera to record everything, come on Leader! Let’s find out the masked killer, we could unmask him.”
    “I don’t know,” I say doubtfully. “The last time kids asked police, with o without a camera, they got arrested.”
    Chauncey grinned at me. “But they didn’t have conformation from their teacher, did they?”
    I smile, getting what she’s hinting at. “Then I guess we should do it?”
    
    “Um…what?” The police officer asked again, squirming.
    “What did te do? Did te cerca for clues o what-not?” Ms. Arthur asked.
    Jordan squirmed, and Lila looked like she wanted to ask something, but not with the teacher here. What happened? Well, it was surprising when she detto yes, however, I did expect her finding a way through it. She was her to ‘chaperone’, which in her language meant to follow us there, ask all the questions, and act like it was her project. Each time we tried to ask something she would shush us and make it seem like we were stupid, upon inspection it looked like she made the police più uncomfortable.
    “Well is there anything-”
    “Excuse me Ms. Arthur?” Lila said, unable to control herself, gave her a dashing smile. “But can I please interrupt for a second.”
    “No actually I’m-”
    “Why thank you, lovely teacher.” She smiled again. “Um, anyway, te detto that there appeared to be no DNA on the victim, can te explain that to us please?”
    The police man, looking relieved nodded. “Yes, of course, when we examined the body there appeared to be nothing from the killer left on the victim, it was crystal clean.”
    I could see Chauncey zooming the camera in, excited for something remotely interesting happening.
    Lila nodded, looking like a reporter. “Crystal clean? Hmm, well, we all know who the victim is, was there anything else strange?”
    The police nodded. “Well, it seems like all the victims had some sort of link o connection, like a pattern with the killer, as if there was an important reason as to why the killer did this. And all of his victims were usually clean, none of there stuff with them that they had when they left.”
    “And te detto they were crystal clean,” Ashlynn murmured. “No marks, as if they were literally cleaned.”
    The police man nodded. “This person…is very clever, they know what there doing, they know how to play just right.”
    “Um…okay. Can I ask one più question?” felce said, even looking reader to add Mr. in it.
    “Yes, of course.”
    “Do te think the killer’s still here?”    
    The police man froze at a Lost for words, there was a pause before he spoke. “For your guys sake, I hope not. But I wouldn’t think there not here, but let me tell te one thing, all of his victim’s were young, and all were for a reason, it has to be in what we found. And if you’ve got guilty conscience you’ll be successivo on his never ending lista of victims.”
     *Thanks for reading, please don't copy, hope te enjoyed! commenti and fan would be lovely!*
posted by Max277
Chapter 4

I slowly open my eyes. Everything blurry for a second. I blink a few times and my vision becomes clear. I see the gang, All beat up. Not looking so well. I didn't want to know what I looked like. Probably scare someone. I looked around. I was chained to the wall, so was everyone else. Great. I try to yank at the chains as hard as I could but they didn't budge."Well someone made sure these suckers weren't moving" I muttered to myself. My eyes landing on someone who was on the outside of the cell. We stared at each other for a long minute."Who are you?" I asked."who are you" the tall...
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posted by alicia386
 Book Cover
Book Cover
This is a modern giorno remake of the classic Cinderella. I hope te guys like it.

Chapter One - Being Average

I thought today was going to be a cloudy, grey day. It would match my mood, but, as usual, it was sunny and blue. For one day, can it not be so perfect and beautiful. I am positive that the weather truly despises me. Everyone despises me.

Except for my best friend, Carlie. She must be the only one besides my mom who loves me and cares for me. She has been with me since I moved out here in Georgia. She must be the only one who can imagine what I'm going through. We both Lost our mothers....
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This an except from the articolo How to Get Out of Your Own Way When Writing. This is consigli from an accomplished autore named Elizabeth Knox

"I prefer reading, and writing, in the third person – “he walked along the shore,” rather than the first person, “I walked along the shore.” Many novice writers start Scrivere in the first person. There are some very good reasons for that. For a start, we’re all used to telling stories with ourselves at their centers. Also, using a first-person voice can be a kind of playacting. They narrator is a “not-you” you’re pretending to be.

Why I...
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posted by alicia386
Thursday

Kyle is the worst boyfriend ever! The party ended with me in a coma. Apparently there was alcohol in my drink. I had an overdose and it almost killed me. Kyle swears he didn't do it. I want to believe him. I really want to. I know Kyle had done it because I know saw him poor something in there. At first I thought it was water o something to make it sweeter. It wasn't water. I couldn't go to school today because they were pumping the alcohol out of my system o something. I'm not entirely sure what happened. All I know is that for a couple if minuti I was pronounced dead. My heartbeat soon started thumping again but I was in a coma. My parents were so worried. I thought for sure they would be dead from shock. Kyle is banned from coming near me. My dad implied that rule. My mom kept crying whenever she talked to me. All she could manage to get out of her mouth besides whimpers were muffled words. I don't think I'll be seeing Kyle for a while now.
posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 1

The successivo day, a knock came on the door.

"Is it them??" Lucy asked frantically.

Emily went to the door, and answered it.

"Hello!" Nick Wolfe, a half lupo male detto to the surprised Emily.

"Who are you???" Emily asked Nick Wolfe in a surprised manner.

"Well...I am Nick Wolfe, I go to every Hotel and free it's captured mutants" Nick answered in a very egotistical way.

"Oh?" Emily asked curiously.

"Is Nick Wolfe the god?" Lucy asked her mother.

"Well..." Emily tried to respond. Emily had felt that it would be right to talk to Nick Wolfe first, and then tell Lucy.

"You can think of me as whatever...
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posted by alicia386
What a change Such a dramatic change

Once I was small and ignored

Now I'm called when their bored

o looking for a friend

To talk to till the end I use to be invisible

Now I feel invincible

They can't hurt me

Look at what I can be

This is new

Something almost true

That great feeling

Was somewhat appealing

But soon disappeared

Whenever I neared

Now I am small

No longer tall

Completely ignored

Always bored

It happened so fast Invisible in the past

Then became invincible

And immediately back to invisible

It changes everyday I don't know what to say

Maybe it won't stay the same

I'll be forever lame
posted by BlondLionEzel
Prologue

It is the anno 2468, Half-Animal, Half Human beings have been captured and locked up in facilities called "Hotels". They are experimented on and live in small cages. But the mutants believed there would be a god who would bring them salvation. And in a place called Hotel 93, the legend would come true.

"Mommy...I'm really scared..." A young Half Snake Girl told her Half Snake Mother. She had rosa hair, a green tail and brown eyes.

"I am too Lucy..." The Half Snake Mother told Lucy. This mother's name was Emily, she had blond hair and a Diamond Rattleback snake pattern tail, and green...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Nick was now adjusted to his life as Melanie's sex slave. Last Monday, Melanie pinched his nipples and got on superiore, in alto of him. Today was different though.

"Nick...I was thinking..." Melanie asked Nick, "Do te want to go hardcore?".

"Hardcore? What do te mean?" Nick asked Melanie.

"Well...I'll mostra you..." Melanie responded as she took off her shirt, causing Nick to blush.

"Do te like what te see?" Melanie asked Nick, noticing his blush.

"Yes I do..." Nick responded shyly.

"Good!" Melanie detto as she quickly took off her bra, revealing a pair of huge, green, D cup breasts.

"Oh my god..." Nick...
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posted by alicia386
Friday

L. J can make me so mad sometimes. Today he told me to stay away from Kyle. I asked him why and he detto that Kyle was not the guy I thought he was. I told him to elaborate but he just shrugged his shoulders. How dare he tell me to stay away from the cutest guy ever? Besides, we have like 7 days left in school before summer comes. I probably won't ever see Kyle again. I need to make my sposta soon. Forget what L. J said. With the thought of L. J in my head, I walked up to Kyle and kissed him on the lips! Yes, I know that was wild and crazy and stupid. Trust me, the minuto I realized what...
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posted by alicia386
Sunday

My mom and dad are atheist so I don't have to go through the constant struggle of attending church once a week o those annoying pastor and church anniversaries. Today I decided to go to the mall with my Friends Jennifer and L. J. The relationship between my two Friends is a very complicated one. For starters, everyone thinks they hate each other. Then there are times when te think they are flirting. I doubt they are ever going to get back together, but it is fun to watch their famous disputes. Today they were talking about Kyle. Jennifer was saying how much she believes that Kyle is...
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posted by alicia386
May

Wednesday

This is obviously my first blog. I really don't know what to write about. Maybe I can start with some identification. Hello, my name is Laurie Bailey. This is my last anno in middle school. I won't go into too much detail about my location because I don't want creepy men looking for me. Well, anyways, I guess that is a good first blog. My sister, Velvet, thought I should express my feelings so I don't go walking around with unsettled feelings. I think she might believe I am going to strangle someone because I'm angry. Velvet bought me a journal and I was like blogging is so much...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective


A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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TORN
Derek’s Perspective


I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. I look around my extremely messy room with dirty clothes all over the floor. Carter happens to be sleeping on a few shirts of mine. My eggshell colored walls, which used to be white, are clearly covered in grime. There is a strong stench of wet dog, pizza, and some kind of rotting Cibo from underneath my bed. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind...
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posted by alicia386
"Oh god," groaned Luca Edgewood. He glanced at his watch,. It was already past 8am. He dropped his skateboard, got on it, and rode away down the busy streets of Brunswick.

"Be careful today!" His mother shouted at him through the screen door, but he was to far to hear her warning. Lucas's mom was very suoerstitious woman who believed in witches, ghosts other Supernatural creatures. Luca thought all of this happened when his dad left.

Luca pushed back hard as he could with his right foot. He was already late. With all of his focus, he was barely able to dodge pedestrians, seeding cars, and occasionally,...
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Prologue

The sun is just minuti from rising and the night is growing lighter. An alter made entirely of blue marble, jade, and amethyst is illuminated. Two tiny bambini lie on superiore, in alto writhing and screaming in discomfort. They are naked, only a few days old and the chill of the stone slowly seeping into their Bones will surely kill them. The larger of the two will not stop screaming while her twin just sobs quietly.
Their frail mother stands a few feet away determined to finish what she came here to do but her eyes are bloodshot and red raw from her constant tears. But she is not alone. Her husband...
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posted by juliet98
In the anno 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied da a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone Lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It detto that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...
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Prologue
She never knew she had an uncle until her parents died. It’s strange how- sometimes in life when te lose important people in your life te gain some more.
Her mother and father died in a house fire. No one knew how it started except the one daughter who managed to survive.
But she was in no state to tell. She suffered mild burns but her mind suffered worst of all. She never spoke again.
She was kept in hospital for six months but eventually she was packed off to her uncle Scipio. She was thirteen years old and many detto it was a crime sending a child off to such an evil man as Scipio....
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posted by riehlemarie
Once there lived a normal middle school girl, o so she thought.She had long brown hair, green with a hin of blue eyes. Her name is Elizabeth. Elizabeth's mother, Rebecca, has blond hair, and blue eyes. Elizabeth always pondered about it.

When Elizabeth was 5 years old she asked her mom about it. Rebecca had to think fast so she made up a little story for Elizabeth so she wouldn't want to ask about it. So Rebecca told Elizabeth "Lizzie", [ Elizabeth's nickname] " te look just like your daddy, but daddy left us." Rebecca thought Elizabeth would be fine without knowing the truth, that Elizabeth...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Lawrence and The Dragon Princess now were thinking about their relationship, as they heard screaming outside.

"How dare te take Lawrence away from people!" Adele yelled as the Townsfolk started to break down the walls!

The Dragon Princess had been taught Love, Compassion, and other nice things while with Lawrence, but now, she had just seen red. She attacked the Townsfolk.

"I shall destroy you, Bloodthirsty Beast!" Adele roared as she slashed the Dragon Princess!

"No..." The Dragon Princess thought about her doom, and that she would really never have true love.

"Now...to finish what i...
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Zoë
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I stormed down the steps, into the closest empty classroom, and over to someone’s seat. Then I sat down, buried my face in my hands, and sobbed.
    “Why are te such a jerk, Ash?” I yelled at the ceiling. There was a faint echo.
    I jumped to my feet. The chair crashed to the ground. I kicked it as hard as I could.
    “You okay?” someone asked.
    I jumped, spun around. Lisa.
    “I’m fine,” I...
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