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Felix's mother was worried as hell.

Not ONLY was her son almost run over da an 8 ton truck, he disappeared after the accident. She worried he might be under the huge pile-up of cars, but after several hours of car moving, his body was nowhere to be found, nor was Alice's.

Of course, Alice's father wasn't much support. Hell, he wasn't even here, where the accident was. Lazy, inconsiderate, horrible excuse of a father was probably still at home with a birra in his hand and his butt glued to the couch. Her mother was probably out gambling again, wasting all of Alice's hard earned money from her part time job. She only talked to Alice to "borrow" cash. How Alice grew to be such a nice person, not even God knows.

The police were still looking high and low for clues as to where Felix and Alice might have gone, but nothing turned up. Felix's mother's other 4-year old son, Seth, started sobbing. She crouched down and wiped the tears from his adorable face.

"Don't worry, sweetie. The police are looking as hard as they can for your brother," She reassured. Seth nodded and gave his mom a hug, which she gladly accepted and needed.

"Andrew, I wish te were here. te were so good at this." she thought. Unfortunately, he wasn't there, so she had to be strong enough for herself and Seth. Felix, where are you?

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When the light faded, Garren was standing in an old, worn out coliseum, which would've been cool, except he was the entertainment.

A voice rang throughout the whole area, "Show us your strength, supposed savior." At once, the air a few feet from him began to shimmer. Instinctively, he drew the sword, but it felt awkward now. Its weight too great for Garren, he nearly dropped the sword on his foot. He managed to wield it like a 2-handed sword, despite it meant as a one-handed.

The air stopped shimmering, and a large, winged beast let out a large screech. Its head resembling an eagle, with razor-sharp talons, two powerful, snow-white wings, and the body of a lion, even the most unobservant of people would notice this 14 meter long beast.

A gryphon. Great.

With another screech, the gryphon took to the air, the force of the flapping wings pushing Garren several feet. Garren lifted his sword once more, watching his predator in the sky. The gryphon did the same, carefully examining his prey, trying to get under his guard. Suddenly, it dived, the sharp beak aimed straight at Garren's heart. Garren swung with all his might into an upward slash, but the gryphon quickly swerved back up, narrowly avoiding the sword's arc.

Again, it flew, trying to find a hole in his defense. Garren positioned himself with his back to the bacheca of the coliseum pit, as to not be attacked from the back. Again, the gryphon dived and Garren swung, but he was too slow. The gryphon scratched and pecked at Garren, ripping his clothes and giving him several deep cuts before taking off once più to avoid the coming swing. His breath grew heavy, and his eyes began to blur. The pain was something he couldn't imagine.

Still in a daze, the gryphon swept by, hitting Garren point-blank in the chest with the beak. He slammed into the wall, nearly passing out, and fell to the floor. He slowly stood up, and forced himself to concentrate. He began to think, and decided to abandon the sword. No longer burdened, he was able to dodge the gryphon's successivo attack. Again, it took to the air, its sharp eyes watching the defenseless teen.

Again and again, the gryphon dived, but Garren was able to dodge every swoop.

The gryphon began growing impatient. He wanted to kill the slippery human and feast on the flesh. With another loud screech, he dove, this time coming around to hit Garren with the wing and send him flying across the arena.

Garren anticipated this attack. This time, he didn't dodge, but took the attack head-on. Instead of flying across the arena, he clung to the feathers of the wing, holding on for dear life to the edge of the wing as the gryphon attempted to fly higher. But the extra weight was too much, and both beast and man went sprawling across the ground, right where the sword was.

It took all his willpower not to black out, as he knew that would kill him. Instead, he quickly got up and picked up the heavy sword. The gryphon made to escape, but Garren quickly gave it several hard kicks, and forced it to do nothing but writhe in pain on the ground. He raised the sword above him, strength somehow coursing through his arms. With a terrified look, the gryphon let out another loud screech. Garren swung down and the gryphon moved no more, blood pouring from the gaping hole where a neck and head used to be.

Garren collapsed to the ground, exhausted. He quickly inspected wounds, and found several bruises and cuts everywhere. His ribs hurt like hell, and he found that several were broken. Before he could do anything else, the voice spoke once more.

"Pass. Let us continue with the Hero tests." And with that, a light blinded Garren once more.

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posted by Max277
Chapter 4

I slowly open my eyes. Everything blurry for a second. I blink a few times and my vision becomes clear. I see the gang, All beat up. Not looking so well. I didn't want to know what I looked like. Probably scare someone. I looked around. I was chained to the wall, so was everyone else. Great. I try to yank at the chains as hard as I could but they didn't budge."Well someone made sure these suckers weren't moving" I muttered to myself. My eyes landing on someone who was on the outside of the cell. We stared at each other for a long minute."Who are you?" I asked."who are you" the tall...
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posted by alicia386
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This is a modern giorno remake of the classic Cinderella. I hope te guys like it.

Chapter One - Being Average

I thought today was going to be a cloudy, grey day. It would match my mood, but, as usual, it was sunny and blue. For one day, can it not be so perfect and beautiful. I am positive that the weather truly despises me. Everyone despises me.

Except for my best friend, Carlie. She must be the only one besides my mom who loves me and cares for me. She has been with me since I moved out here in Georgia. She must be the only one who can imagine what I'm going through. We both Lost our mothers....
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This an except from the articolo How to Get Out of Your Own Way When Writing. This is consigli from an accomplished autore named Elizabeth Knox

"I prefer reading, and writing, in the third person – “he walked along the shore,” rather than the first person, “I walked along the shore.” Many novice writers start Scrivere in the first person. There are some very good reasons for that. For a start, we’re all used to telling stories with ourselves at their centers. Also, using a first-person voice can be a kind of playacting. They narrator is a “not-you” you’re pretending to be.

Why I...
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posted by alicia386
Thursday

Kyle is the worst boyfriend ever! The party ended with me in a coma. Apparently there was alcohol in my drink. I had an overdose and it almost killed me. Kyle swears he didn't do it. I want to believe him. I really want to. I know Kyle had done it because I know saw him poor something in there. At first I thought it was water o something to make it sweeter. It wasn't water. I couldn't go to school today because they were pumping the alcohol out of my system o something. I'm not entirely sure what happened. All I know is that for a couple if minuti I was pronounced dead. My heartbeat soon started thumping again but I was in a coma. My parents were so worried. I thought for sure they would be dead from shock. Kyle is banned from coming near me. My dad implied that rule. My mom kept crying whenever she talked to me. All she could manage to get out of her mouth besides whimpers were muffled words. I don't think I'll be seeing Kyle for a while now.
posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 1

The successivo day, a knock came on the door.

"Is it them??" Lucy asked frantically.

Emily went to the door, and answered it.

"Hello!" Nick Wolfe, a half lupo male detto to the surprised Emily.

"Who are you???" Emily asked Nick Wolfe in a surprised manner.

"Well...I am Nick Wolfe, I go to every Hotel and free it's captured mutants" Nick answered in a very egotistical way.

"Oh?" Emily asked curiously.

"Is Nick Wolfe the god?" Lucy asked her mother.

"Well..." Emily tried to respond. Emily had felt that it would be right to talk to Nick Wolfe first, and then tell Lucy.

"You can think of me as whatever...
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posted by alicia386
What a change Such a dramatic change

Once I was small and ignored

Now I'm called when their bored

o looking for a friend

To talk to till the end I use to be invisible

Now I feel invincible

They can't hurt me

Look at what I can be

This is new

Something almost true

That great feeling

Was somewhat appealing

But soon disappeared

Whenever I neared

Now I am small

No longer tall

Completely ignored

Always bored

It happened so fast Invisible in the past

Then became invincible

And immediately back to invisible

It changes everyday I don't know what to say

Maybe it won't stay the same

I'll be forever lame
posted by BlondLionEzel
Prologue

It is the anno 2468, Half-Animal, Half Human beings have been captured and locked up in facilities called "Hotels". They are experimented on and live in small cages. But the mutants believed there would be a god who would bring them salvation. And in a place called Hotel 93, the legend would come true.

"Mommy...I'm really scared..." A young Half Snake Girl told her Half Snake Mother. She had rosa hair, a green tail and brown eyes.

"I am too Lucy..." The Half Snake Mother told Lucy. This mother's name was Emily, she had blond hair and a Diamond Rattleback snake pattern tail, and green...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Nick was now adjusted to his life as Melanie's sex slave. Last Monday, Melanie pinched his nipples and got on superiore, in alto of him. Today was different though.

"Nick...I was thinking..." Melanie asked Nick, "Do te want to go hardcore?".

"Hardcore? What do te mean?" Nick asked Melanie.

"Well...I'll mostra you..." Melanie responded as she took off her shirt, causing Nick to blush.

"Do te like what te see?" Melanie asked Nick, noticing his blush.

"Yes I do..." Nick responded shyly.

"Good!" Melanie detto as she quickly took off her bra, revealing a pair of huge, green, D cup breasts.

"Oh my god..." Nick...
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posted by alicia386
Friday

L. J can make me so mad sometimes. Today he told me to stay away from Kyle. I asked him why and he detto that Kyle was not the guy I thought he was. I told him to elaborate but he just shrugged his shoulders. How dare he tell me to stay away from the cutest guy ever? Besides, we have like 7 days left in school before summer comes. I probably won't ever see Kyle again. I need to make my sposta soon. Forget what L. J said. With the thought of L. J in my head, I walked up to Kyle and kissed him on the lips! Yes, I know that was wild and crazy and stupid. Trust me, the minuto I realized what...
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posted by alicia386
Sunday

My mom and dad are atheist so I don't have to go through the constant struggle of attending church once a week o those annoying pastor and church anniversaries. Today I decided to go to the mall with my Friends Jennifer and L. J. The relationship between my two Friends is a very complicated one. For starters, everyone thinks they hate each other. Then there are times when te think they are flirting. I doubt they are ever going to get back together, but it is fun to watch their famous disputes. Today they were talking about Kyle. Jennifer was saying how much she believes that Kyle is...
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posted by alicia386
May

Wednesday

This is obviously my first blog. I really don't know what to write about. Maybe I can start with some identification. Hello, my name is Laurie Bailey. This is my last anno in middle school. I won't go into too much detail about my location because I don't want creepy men looking for me. Well, anyways, I guess that is a good first blog. My sister, Velvet, thought I should express my feelings so I don't go walking around with unsettled feelings. I think she might believe I am going to strangle someone because I'm angry. Velvet bought me a journal and I was like blogging is so much...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective


A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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TORN
Derek’s Perspective


I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. I look around my extremely messy room with dirty clothes all over the floor. Carter happens to be sleeping on a few shirts of mine. My eggshell colored walls, which used to be white, are clearly covered in grime. There is a strong stench of wet dog, pizza, and some kind of rotting Cibo from underneath my bed. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind...
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posted by alicia386
"Oh god," groaned Luca Edgewood. He glanced at his watch,. It was already past 8am. He dropped his skateboard, got on it, and rode away down the busy streets of Brunswick.

"Be careful today!" His mother shouted at him through the screen door, but he was to far to hear her warning. Lucas's mom was very suoerstitious woman who believed in witches, ghosts other Supernatural creatures. Luca thought all of this happened when his dad left.

Luca pushed back hard as he could with his right foot. He was already late. With all of his focus, he was barely able to dodge pedestrians, seeding cars, and occasionally,...
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Prologue

The sun is just minuti from rising and the night is growing lighter. An alter made entirely of blue marble, jade, and amethyst is illuminated. Two tiny bambini lie on superiore, in alto writhing and screaming in discomfort. They are naked, only a few days old and the chill of the stone slowly seeping into their Bones will surely kill them. The larger of the two will not stop screaming while her twin just sobs quietly.
Their frail mother stands a few feet away determined to finish what she came here to do but her eyes are bloodshot and red raw from her constant tears. But she is not alone. Her husband...
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posted by juliet98
In the anno 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied da a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone Lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It detto that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...
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Prologue
She never knew she had an uncle until her parents died. It’s strange how- sometimes in life when te lose important people in your life te gain some more.
Her mother and father died in a house fire. No one knew how it started except the one daughter who managed to survive.
But she was in no state to tell. She suffered mild burns but her mind suffered worst of all. She never spoke again.
She was kept in hospital for six months but eventually she was packed off to her uncle Scipio. She was thirteen years old and many detto it was a crime sending a child off to such an evil man as Scipio....
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posted by riehlemarie
Once there lived a normal middle school girl, o so she thought.She had long brown hair, green with a hin of blue eyes. Her name is Elizabeth. Elizabeth's mother, Rebecca, has blond hair, and blue eyes. Elizabeth always pondered about it.

When Elizabeth was 5 years old she asked her mom about it. Rebecca had to think fast so she made up a little story for Elizabeth so she wouldn't want to ask about it. So Rebecca told Elizabeth "Lizzie", [ Elizabeth's nickname] " te look just like your daddy, but daddy left us." Rebecca thought Elizabeth would be fine without knowing the truth, that Elizabeth...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Lawrence and The Dragon Princess now were thinking about their relationship, as they heard screaming outside.

"How dare te take Lawrence away from people!" Adele yelled as the Townsfolk started to break down the walls!

The Dragon Princess had been taught Love, Compassion, and other nice things while with Lawrence, but now, she had just seen red. She attacked the Townsfolk.

"I shall destroy you, Bloodthirsty Beast!" Adele roared as she slashed the Dragon Princess!

"No..." The Dragon Princess thought about her doom, and that she would really never have true love.

"Now...to finish what i...
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Zoë
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I stormed down the steps, into the closest empty classroom, and over to someone’s seat. Then I sat down, buried my face in my hands, and sobbed.
    “Why are te such a jerk, Ash?” I yelled at the ceiling. There was a faint echo.
    I jumped to my feet. The chair crashed to the ground. I kicked it as hard as I could.
    “You okay?” someone asked.
    I jumped, spun around. Lisa.
    “I’m fine,” I...
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