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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood Leggere the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

te are to segnala to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one giorno after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The scrivania, reception was occupied da a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in domanda watched silently. “Do te remember what it was te did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no sposta to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the scrivania, reception had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And te know why I have to punish te for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have Lost years ago. Is that what te want! To be ruled da self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the scrivania, reception to shout in the traitor's face.
“” He was silenced da the man as he stood and gripped him da the throat.
“I new te were a ratto the giorno te were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came inoltrare, avanti and grabbed him da the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having secondo thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, te got the guts to do this o are te going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the scrivania, reception and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way o we can drag it out.” He pulled from his cintura a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor successivo to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man detto something to him before he started walking back to his scrivania, reception to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did te do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know te don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance te get out of this place find the main road until te reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead te the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are te helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a bacheca where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if te guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got più seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had dato him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be home free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his giacca and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was mostra them.
Chapter 13
    The whole gang
    “So…? Um…would te rather, live on an island for a anno but then be saved and become a billionaire, o get stuck on a cruise ship for a three months with no money whatsoever?” I ask.    
    Ryler ums, while Beth scrunches up her eyes, the others just boringly blink. Beth risposte first.
    “Stuck on a cruise ship.”
    “Why?” I question.
    “Well…think about it, I’m going to have to find food, clothes,...
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~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 31
        Close to perfect: A few months later
    Adam wrinkled his nose as Ryler grabbed for my hand once we seated. “Can te guys stop with the lovey dovey, it’s gross to see my best friend and roommate romancing my sister.”
    I stuck my tongue out at him. “Like your not romancing Sage up in front of me.”
    Adam’s cheeks pinkened a little, and I smiled victoriously. Yes, my dear readers, Adam and Sage are a couple, yeah, surprised me too....
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posted by 1999jacko
Ricks parents and lawyer were sat either side of him as the two detective continuously asked domande that rick would only say no commento until they sai one that he could," how old are you?" One called Johnson asked and rick simply smiled,"12," he detto knowing that even though he was twelve the lawyer he had was the best in town and he can't be beaten. Detective Johnson had a hard glare on his face as he spoke," we'll boyo you've been seved and if te fail you'll be put in juvy for 2 years with no pribation o early sentences, got?" Rick still smiled confidently and said," yep" his voice happy...
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posted by E-Scope90
This song is about braking up with someone. Please unisciti my club E-Scope90 if te like it. I'll post some più if I get enough views.
Oh Caysee
Casee, Caysee,
Can't te see
Your Amore isn't fit
For te and me
Caysee, why won't te understand
I don't want to take your hand
Why can't te find someone else,
Oh Caysee?
Caysee, don't feel so blue
te can find a boy for you.
(repeat 2x)
Caysee, why cant te see
You're just not the one for me.
Just please understand
Our Amore isn't grand.
I don't wanna make a fit in front of the Musica stand
Can't te see
You're not the one for me
Caysee, oh Caysee
Oh, can't te see???!!!
te can never be...
the one....
for me...
posted by 1999jacko
because I like to have lots of stuff on at once heres a prologue of one of my new stories

The prologue
I ran inoltrare, avanti into nothing things being erased in the path of the other kids behind me, the world is crumbling before my eyes. MY Friends that have already died bodies appear on the nothingness in front of me I shove them away from my eyes and jump high over them.Too high I feel the pain shoot up and down my leg searing a hole of pain in my head and then that's all I feel, think and hear..Pain and that's when I know they are right behind me haunting me for all the bad things I've done I just...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take te to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow knew he had failed. UFS soldiers were dieing around him as the Bellators struck them with everything they had. Raza had played him like a fool and Talow knew it. He held the plans to his chest regretting ever joining the army, he should have stayed away the first time he had gotten away. He watched as battalion V35, his battalion was turn to shreds as they tried to take on a group of Bellators larger then themselves. He watched them fall, blood smeared and broken. Luca stood fighting hard with a tall Bellator dressed in navy, a badge glistening on his own breast. I diviso, spalato secondo was all...
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posted by alicia386
August 29

      Chloe's throat started closing. She couldn't breathe. Her vision was getting fuzzy and the world started closing in around her. She tried getting up but the weight of the air forced her to fall on her hands and needs. She hears distant screaming but couldn't tell who it was. There were sirens and people shouting orders. The world blended together. Her entire body ached. She was weak and tired and death seemed like a very welcoming idea. She couldn't understand what was going on. The screaming was forcing her to loose control. Then she realized . . . it was her.

Eric was literally...
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[verse 1]
you called me the other night and i didnt know wat to do so i answered the phone and detto hel-lo
you detto te were sorry and that wanted to come back to me but i told no cuz

i cant take it no più te break my cuore then te say te wanna come back i put up with this toro crap enough of times

im sick of te and im sick of the way te treat me and im sick of your Amore and oh how i've been able to live my life the way i wanted to

[verse 2]
i moved on from te i forgot about te te never come to my mind your out of sight and out of mind i dont think about te anymore

i cant...
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posted by IlovePatch97
te step into the ballroom were the annual midnight gala is being held. It happens every summer, August first, the anno is 1884. The wealthy family of a well know over seas business holds the party in there estate hall. Only the rich, flamboyant, fashionable and educated are invited. You, being a business partner and fitting all descriptions continuously receive invites. te are not particularly fond of large gatherings though. te would much rather prefer to be at home doing work, perhaps reading, o maybe lounging da a fuoco in your own mansion. Despite the hot days the nights are rather chilly,...
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posted by 1999jacko
3 miles away

Gemini woke from his sleep, his wand in his hand with an old brown tendril half out of it as though he had been fighting someone. He slowly detto under his breath," samantanes," his voice rough and gravely from a thousand years of unconscious, after a secondo of waiting a huge water hand shot from his body clearing his way backup to the surface. He grabbed the wand and jumped up onto the surface as 18 of his ( former) captors came towards him tendrils flying everywhere. He could see the fiery robes of his worst enemy Virgo at the front, but as they ran inoltrare, avanti Gemini saw the flabby...
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posted by rory2011
David crawled towards Kat
" what's going on ? " David asked Kat
she moved her eyes looking at him and detto , " remember why mom died ? ,Mac want to kill Hayley for the same reason ........ in the same way "
Hayley was sitting right successivo to Kat ,what she heard hurt her so much ,but she knows that she is a girl without a father loving her o caring about her
" I want to get out of here " detto David
the door opened , that was Mac carrying a chair with his hands and there was a man of his guards standing near him
" spread them up " Mac told his guard ,the man pulled Hayley strongly ,Hayley tried...
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posted by Dhampires
The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's cuore whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...
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posted by rory2011
David couldn't take all his pain since Jack has been taken to jail from three years fa ,witch made him very ill ,David now in 47 and almost to 48 years old ,but he looks older because of his illness ,he refused to face people after what Jack did ,all the people in the country knows who's David miller is ,he's the father of the most dangerous criminal in the country, Jack got crazy in jail ,because of a lot of things happening and happened to him
Jack was getting tortured every night ,which made him crazy and pushed him kill three of the cops and two prisoners ,plus he tried to escape so many...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
(Sorry if it's not that great. It's my first time Scrivere a story for fun and not for school)

“Mom! Phone!” Where was she? I slowly dragged myself off the leather couch, knocking my libri to the floor. I watched as my pencil rolled under the armchair. Oh well, I was done with it anyways. I grabbed the phone on the eighth ring, “Hello?''
“Julie, babe. I thought you'd never answer. It's been like what? Three hours since we last chatted?” It was my slime-ball of an ex-boyfriend, Ryan.
“Ya, sure. What ev.” I replied while examining the nail polish chipping off my nails. “I got to...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Breathing hard beneath the shading leaves of countless exotic trees, Talow could hear the sounds of men shouting to each other and pain induced shrieks. He crawled behind a large trunk, peering back at the village; from here he could see what was going on. Neighbours, some of which he had had a good relationship with were being forced on their knees as men wearing pale gray uniforms tied lengths of rope around their wrists. Buildings were burning; livestock could be heard squealing as fuoco licked flesh.

Talow pulled back from his viewing point, taking inventory of his hastily thrown together...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 8: to the Future

The anno 3020, Kitsunes and Humans live in peace, because of Amber and Jay's triumph over tyranny...

"Amber, do te think about having children?" ghiandaia, jay asked Amber.

"I do, sometimes" Amber responded, as the doorbell rung. Amber went to see who was there, but all she saw was a pair of baby Kitsunes in a basket.

ghiandaia, jay walked down the stairs to be with her, and saw them. "Who abandoned a pair of baby Kitsunes?" ghiandaia, jay thought to himself, as Amber picked them both up.

"Jay, can we adopt them?" Amber asked him.

"Of course, they are our children" ghiandaia, jay replied.
posted by Problematic129
Chapter 3
    The interview
    Approximately two days and we were off. Ashlynn was excitedly working on the script and Sasha was helping with the budget that the teacher just wouldn’t help with. Even with Fern’s influence she still didn’t trust us, maybe a little bit more, but still not that much. We were still undecided about the whole interviewing thing-y so we’ve just been searching on the internet and getting some old released police records.
    “Okay, so the horror ora is looking pretty good,” Sasha mutters as she...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
    Now, I’m not saying I was scared o anything, but I couldn’t help but feel a chilling sensation when I saw the stone again, still glowing, but brighter than before. It was like some twisted sick foreboding object, something that, as beautiful as it was, I didn’t ever want to see o touch again. We all stared at it, trying not to get to memorized as before. We were at some deserted park Terry use to come when she was a child, but after a kid died her parents shunned her from the place.
    How nice.
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Chapter Eight: Hello, Stranger Please Don't Betray Me

      The guy stood in front of us. We needed to give him answer and fast. He was a spy and he probably knew più then he was letting on. This make sit hard to trust him. Courtney immediately detto yes. I gave her a glare and shrugged. Raven was nodding her head as while. It made me think. Were they up to something? Did they know the guy? They could have known him because he goes here for school. Actually, he seemed much older then the rest of us. He had boyish features but he certainly was someone who looks much older then 18.
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