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ciao do te like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and Amore in his eyes
made her feel sicuro, cassetta di sicurezza
when she smiled
it brightened his giorno
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of Amore
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
Amore is like the wind
te cant see it
but te can feel it
Amore folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

 twilight_lover9 posted più di un anno fa
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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:
I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum più stuff bout like Vampiri#From Dracula to Buffy... and all creatures of the night in between. haha that would be interesting..
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te could just go to the request a peom domanda and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip
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Little_Cullen said:
Amore it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual Scrivere is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel sicuro, cassetta di sicurezza and her smile brightens his day. I Amore it. Keep it up!
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thank-u so much
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twilightgirlNo1 said:
i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.
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twilight0girl said:
it's a perfect poem about them.
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 it's a perfect poem about them.
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Twilightpup said:
Its really good , te should make one about Bella and Edward
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emilyemmett said:
That is really good!! te should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow o Jacob and Renesmee o something!
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sessa123 said:
Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, Vampiri#From Dracula to Buffy... and all creatures of the night in between. anything lol KEEP IT UP HUN XX
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zXwolfgirlXz said:
aww i like it

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Brysis said:
It´s cute ♥
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LovelyDragon said:
Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)
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