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I wrote a poem can u plz tell me if its good?

Im just a girl
he was just a boy
thats what everyone else saw....
but they saw so much più in each other..
to him she wasnt just a girl she was an Angel that had taken his heart
to her he wasnt just a boy he was her soulmate, who'd left his cuore with her....
it hurts me because all that Amore is gone he's found somone new who he has dato his cuore to.......
Amore is rare
hold on to it.........
my cuore is broken.....
in to little peices......
im mostrare you.....
what you've done to me......
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??? wow someone has relationship issues. that is so depressing. I dont really like it its really sad .
9twilightlover5 posted più di un anno fa
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well im telllng a story this happened to my friend,,, so i just wrote it idc if u dont like it im just try=in to point out that Amore dosrnt always work..... but tnax for ur commento
twilight_lover9 posted più di un anno fa
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wow !!!!!!!! omg !!! ♥♥♥
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jennyjen said:
it is awesome i Amore it.... its great.......i Amore it
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thank u
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