Okay, I have never done anything like this before, so please do not laugh, but constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks <3
This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on superiore, in alto of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that diviso, spalato secondo what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I detto it, Edward Cullen! In the diviso, spalato secondo it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on superiore, in alto of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that diviso, spalato secondo what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I detto it, Edward Cullen! In the diviso, spalato secondo it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
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Let me start off da saying that I think Dakota Fanning is a fabulous actress. That being detto here are my reason why I don't think she would make the best Jane. Their are a bunch a little problems and one big problem with her playing Jane. The big problem for me is her age. Dakota Fanning was born on Febuary 23 1994. That would put her at 15 years old when she starts filming in March. Thats only 4 years younger the Kristen(Bella) who was born in 1990 and only 2 years younger the Taylor(jacob) who was born in 1992. Jane is ONLY surpost be 12-13 years old and NO WHERE near Bella's age.