!!!IF U HAVE ALL READY READ THIS SKIP TO CHAPTER TWO FOR THE successivo PART OF THE STOTY.!!!!!!!!!!
chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i detto sighing pushing the domanda on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
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"nessie te cleaned your room write sheel be her in 5 miniutes i can here the car" the tyres rubbed against the gravil path emmett and jasper had laid so ellie and her mum hannah wouldnt get Lost on the way to the house.
"nessie that camicia has a stain go change it"
i shouted over my shoulder whilst i fluttered around trying to clean the front room.
edwards arms caught me.
"stop paniking the house looks fine we always have seth and the licantropi round enclouding sue and te go shopping in the local stores full of humans te can do this" he whispered into my hair.
there was two taps on the door as ellies mums delicate hands.
i ran to the door with nessie da my side.
"hey mrs barkley we will drop ellie home if you'd like?" i offered as edward came to my side.
"that would be great if te could how old is this house its beautifull" she told me looking up at are cottage.
i smiled "edwards mother esme made it with the help of edwards brothers and of corse some più men. they made it for a presant for my birthday and wedding presant".
"wow !... anyway i will go let the girls play.
i shut the door after ellie had stepped in the house and waved goodbye.
chapeter 2
we went to the clearing with a gazebo already set up bye jasper and emmett for if it rained (witch it did)
we sat on the blankets and pillows we had braught as we watched rosalie and emmett play with nessie and ellie they loved it because emmett swung them round and round they squeled as he spun them to the floor then bringing them up before they crashed.
then we heard it. they were running.running to us. not stopping. we all stopped. froze. it was to late to run. to late to hide only time to waite. it was to late ellie was now in the secret we had no way to stop are secret becoming hers aswell...
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every seconf i get older every secondo i die a bit più no spazio for unhappiness no time to wait the sunshines when u smile so make every scond a smiling one te are my sun te are my stars te are my moon te are my world the key to my cuore rests in your smile.
the poum i had written for nessie on her 5th birthday.But the thought poissened my mind the thought of the faces of the people stood infront of me slowly smothered the memory of my daughters smile of edwards face of emmett of rosalie my mind trailed through the members of my family now in danger.
we stood there Frozen still until the youngest one stepped inoltrare, avanti probably a teenager when she was changed. her long straight white hair curled into ringletts so the purpil underneath slithered through looking very much like the poisson i saw leaking like black ink over the pictuers of my family,but leacking through her hair soacking up until it reached her routs. her ruby red eyes focussed on mine hers was playfull her eyes matched her face she was very much still a child.
her long pupil mantello swept to the floor lose and to big whilst her corset and trousers fit like a secondo layer of purpil skin.
"i call dibs on the human" she sang skipping towards us everyone croached ready to attack pushing ellie and nessie to the middle.
she stopped in the middle of her dance towards us her face froze a smile playing on her lips.
"you dont honestly wish to fight me...do you" she chalanged playing with her hair.Edward hissed when she looked at nessie as did everyone else i put up my shield ready for the attak but not one of us moved to chalange us. she crackled and burst into laughter not even te emmett even te are going to turn down a fight. Her piercing eyes turned to his face he stood his ground but did not sposta towards her he simply moved his arm and with a slight movment in his wrist pushed rosalie behind him.she burst into another giggle fit once again becoming the child but this time evey one of her gaurds roared with laughter. that was when it finally hit me with a bump that the altarlas were here and they would leave and none of us would not one vampire who has chalanged the altarlas had survived più than an hour. we were doomed but this time we were killing the Lupi and ellie's family and charlie renee everyone everyone we have ever nown o loved will not live to see the light of giorno again the only way they will live longer then an ora was if we managed to keep ivory the beautifull teeanager infront of me bizzy for longer.
CHAPETER 4
the altarlas story
chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i detto sighing pushing the domanda on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
******
"nessie te cleaned your room write sheel be her in 5 miniutes i can here the car" the tyres rubbed against the gravil path emmett and jasper had laid so ellie and her mum hannah wouldnt get Lost on the way to the house.
"nessie that camicia has a stain go change it"
i shouted over my shoulder whilst i fluttered around trying to clean the front room.
edwards arms caught me.
"stop paniking the house looks fine we always have seth and the licantropi round enclouding sue and te go shopping in the local stores full of humans te can do this" he whispered into my hair.
there was two taps on the door as ellies mums delicate hands.
i ran to the door with nessie da my side.
"hey mrs barkley we will drop ellie home if you'd like?" i offered as edward came to my side.
"that would be great if te could how old is this house its beautifull" she told me looking up at are cottage.
i smiled "edwards mother esme made it with the help of edwards brothers and of corse some più men. they made it for a presant for my birthday and wedding presant".
"wow !... anyway i will go let the girls play.
i shut the door after ellie had stepped in the house and waved goodbye.
chapeter 2
we went to the clearing with a gazebo already set up bye jasper and emmett for if it rained (witch it did)
we sat on the blankets and pillows we had braught as we watched rosalie and emmett play with nessie and ellie they loved it because emmett swung them round and round they squeled as he spun them to the floor then bringing them up before they crashed.
then we heard it. they were running.running to us. not stopping. we all stopped. froze. it was to late to run. to late to hide only time to waite. it was to late ellie was now in the secret we had no way to stop are secret becoming hers aswell...
******
every seconf i get older every secondo i die a bit più no spazio for unhappiness no time to wait the sunshines when u smile so make every scond a smiling one te are my sun te are my stars te are my moon te are my world the key to my cuore rests in your smile.
the poum i had written for nessie on her 5th birthday.But the thought poissened my mind the thought of the faces of the people stood infront of me slowly smothered the memory of my daughters smile of edwards face of emmett of rosalie my mind trailed through the members of my family now in danger.
we stood there Frozen still until the youngest one stepped inoltrare, avanti probably a teenager when she was changed. her long straight white hair curled into ringletts so the purpil underneath slithered through looking very much like the poisson i saw leaking like black ink over the pictuers of my family,but leacking through her hair soacking up until it reached her routs. her ruby red eyes focussed on mine hers was playfull her eyes matched her face she was very much still a child.
her long pupil mantello swept to the floor lose and to big whilst her corset and trousers fit like a secondo layer of purpil skin.
"i call dibs on the human" she sang skipping towards us everyone croached ready to attack pushing ellie and nessie to the middle.
she stopped in the middle of her dance towards us her face froze a smile playing on her lips.
"you dont honestly wish to fight me...do you" she chalanged playing with her hair.Edward hissed when she looked at nessie as did everyone else i put up my shield ready for the attak but not one of us moved to chalange us. she crackled and burst into laughter not even te emmett even te are going to turn down a fight. Her piercing eyes turned to his face he stood his ground but did not sposta towards her he simply moved his arm and with a slight movment in his wrist pushed rosalie behind him.she burst into another giggle fit once again becoming the child but this time evey one of her gaurds roared with laughter. that was when it finally hit me with a bump that the altarlas were here and they would leave and none of us would not one vampire who has chalanged the altarlas had survived più than an hour. we were doomed but this time we were killing the Lupi and ellie's family and charlie renee everyone everyone we have ever nown o loved will not live to see the light of giorno again the only way they will live longer then an ora was if we managed to keep ivory the beautifull teeanager infront of me bizzy for longer.
CHAPETER 4
the altarlas story
For those of te who don't know me, o have never read my fanfictions, I'm renesmeblack. I write a story from Renesmee, Jacob, Mine, and occasionally Emmett's POV. Now, I have a ton of bad ideas, and some of the things te read from me are crash tests. Thankfully, many of my readers enjoy my fanfictions. The dummy is saved!
My stories are for girls who can't stop Leggere the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I Amore Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. te wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, te read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fan I have, thanks for the support and I'll see te in the Leggere section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
My stories are for girls who can't stop Leggere the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I Amore Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. te wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, te read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fan I have, thanks for the support and I'll see te in the Leggere section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
Here's New Moon Confessions. like I detto before, I don't any of these, I just postato them for people's enjoyments.
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice ha rubato, stola my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my preferito vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my Cani after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I secondo Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please commento and rate!
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice ha rubato, stola my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my preferito vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my Cani after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I secondo Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please commento and rate!
When she walked into the dull room i did not notice at first. But suddenly a gush of wind blew her sweet and beutiful scent tingling down my throat. Never had i felt such pain and anguish yet the thrill of a new adventure. She clumsily walked over to the sede, sedile opposite me and offered a big smile. This was when i could have killed her, this innocent girl looking at me through the locks of her deep brown hair. Her eyes looked deeply and yet shallowly into mine. This was the moment when i knew i could not ravish her. This was the moment i started to fall in love. The mystery of Love.
Please commento and rate!!!! :)
Please commento and rate!!!! :)
'Twilight': Which 'New Moon' scene should debut on the MTV Movie Awards?
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | da Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's MTV Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The domanda is: Which one do te most want to see? If te haven't read the secondo book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- o Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the lupo Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | da Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's MTV Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The domanda is: Which one do te most want to see? If te haven't read the secondo book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- o Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the lupo Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
My preferito scene in new moon is the breakup. Now, before te say I'm not a TRUE twilight fan, think about it. If Edward didn't leave, Jacob would cease to exist(metaphorically speaking, of course). Then, Bella would be staying human. No Renesmee, no wedding, and no Jacob Black. te might be thinking,well, Edward would change her sooner o later, right? Wrong. I hope I'm not spoiling anything, but remember in eclipse when Edward detto he got over his taste for her blood? Do te remember why? If he didn't leave, he would be too afraid to try. New moon is all about the breakup, and Jacob edging his way into Bella's life. Yep, I'm talking to you, Team Jacob. If te really like Jacob, te see things like me.
i hope te like my story sorry for the spelling and stuff like that im trying my best!!!!!
Rennesme POV
When te Amore the one, who left te no options at all,and change te campletely how can te fight with the world to not lose him?
What about if your life depend on the person, what would te do to tell him what te really feel about him and that te want to be with him FOREVER!!!!!!
And te have just one più chance to do it!!!!
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Rennesme POV
When te Amore the one, who left te no options at all,and change te campletely how can te fight with the world to not lose him?
What about if your life depend on the person, what would te do to tell him what te really feel about him and that te want to be with him FOREVER!!!!!!
And te have just one più chance to do it!!!!
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