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write a poem o some sad thing but IT HAS TO RHYME !

mine :
" Depression is when te hate everyone around
Depression is when te don't want to make a sound
Depression is when all te want to do is cry
Depression is when te feel like you’re dying inside
Depression is when your thoughts wonder all the time
Depression is when te can't sleep even though you’re tired
Depression is when te don't want to go on
Depression is when te can't stop shaking outside
Depression is when te hide who te are
Depression is when te put on a mask to hide what te feel
Depression is when te feel weak all the time
Depression is when te give in to everything around
Depression is when te don't care what happens anymore
and is just another giorno in my life ... so lets take a coltello ... "
 fanofzeldafan posted più di un anno fa
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FeelmySwagger said:
I feel weird in a world unknown
I pray to my savior in different a tone
how i hate living and just want to end it
but am still held back with accomplishing it
''ur just beginning'' he says
dont follow that outer voice astray
it leads to oblivion
i keep on opening like an onion
I find truth in His words
as i heal i feel their words like swords
poking me inside
still He will not leave me aside
i keep on rising and rising
and now I sing


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posted più di un anno fa 
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the sing thing was totally random
FeelmySwagger posted più di un anno fa
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kk
4422 posted più di un anno fa
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*best answer*
4422 posted più di un anno fa
hobbit1121 said:
The dark ground is stained red
Where all the Ribelle - The Brave soldiers bled
Their weapons were useless
The enemy was ruthless
All those tears were in vain
The men knew death was release from the pain
On their graves the poppies grow
And to this giorno they still blow
The soldiers are at peace
As they knew the enemy's fuoco did cease
To this giorno we pray for them
And we know their souls are as priceless as gems
[Copyrighted]
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posted più di un anno fa 
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Wow. That really was sad.
melidogs posted più di un anno fa
POPclogger216 said:
Cani dying*
Kids lying**
Girlfriends crying***
I, myself sighing.****











































*Their pelliccia blue: It's the new brown.
**On the ground, laughing their heads off at a joke
***for joy, seeing that their boyfriend just proposed to them.
***** Because i can't make a sad poem to save my life.
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posted più di un anno fa 
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That was really funny! I can't write sad either. :)
melidogs posted più di un anno fa
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the same here :D
ItComesToThis posted più di un anno fa
melidogs said:
Birds fly up so gentle
like a feather on the breeze
Like the rain that falls so softly
like the snow up to my knees

What is their inspiration?
How do they find their soul?
And nothing but their smile
Is gonna make me whole.

Some giorno I will do my best
While looking to the sky
I'll find my cuore once hidden,
Grow my wings and fly.
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Amore it:);):];] I also❤smilies!!!!
hobbit1121 posted più di un anno fa
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thanks! :D
melidogs posted più di un anno fa
4422 said:
Super sick
i hate the way i feel cos im sick
i cant eat, i cant drink my mouth stinks.
Mum force me to go eat,
but im not fit...
Crazy fever, when will u leave
wen its sunny u make me shake
my leg shake, my head aches
i cant think, im now thin
my eyes hurts n guess what
im now blind, i cant see wen u stand ..
So Dear God, i need my health back!

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posted più di un anno fa 
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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted più di un anno fa
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0_0 rubbish
4422 posted più di un anno fa
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i wrote rubbish
4422 posted più di un anno fa
Lady_Rebel said:
Bravery

Standing in the light
Looking at the night
What is your fright?
The feeling that my path is not right.

Do te keep going?

Standing still as the dead
Looking at the names of the dead
What do te dread?
I fear the fatality of death.

Do te continue?

When te are faced with the grave
And yes, off course in the night
And Frozen with terror,
If te keep going through the fright
We will name te “brave”.

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posted più di un anno fa 
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not really sad...
Lady_Rebel posted più di un anno fa
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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted più di un anno fa
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kk
4422 posted più di un anno fa
DarkCEpitome said:
Suddenly, the rod breaks and pierces her
Blood of my dreams splatters on the wall
The pieces of her hang in the air
Shards of her, where she looks out and stares
Watches her pieces dance all about
And when each little piece breaks off, the shard
shall give out a shout
Yes, the girl watches herself
She watches them all
Then briskly and briefly wonders
why the torn, broken pieces of her
strangely never fall...
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posted più di un anno fa 
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Sorry if it doesn't make too much sense....I just got over having writer's block, I'm slowly getting back to the whole turn of things :(
DarkCEpitome posted più di un anno fa
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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted più di un anno fa
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That was cool
EvilPineapple posted più di un anno fa
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