A Mistake Screenwriters Make When Structuring Their Screenplays da Gary Goldstein

Marley was bleeding from his wound, he was fighting the same sort of creature as the others, it was small but it was fast plus its forearms are used like clubs. The creature had marks all over its body, due to Marley’s elbows and knees. It swung its arm again, hitting Marley straight in the shin, Marley was quick to react and Slash up the creatures face. It left four claw like marks on its face; Marley looked at his hand and notice that his nails had pointed, as the creature wiped it’s eye he looked at Marley and saw that his eyes had become yellow. Marley quickly struck the creature in...

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The last of the cena guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have cena parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people o parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries o not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...

Chapter 12
6 mese later
School was boring as always everyone in the school looked at us like they did with the Cullen's and as for me and matt we got closer! I really liked him ,almost loved him but not the kind of Amore my cuore held for edward it was different like he can complete me we went to are medow every giorno after school and talked and other stuff as te know but I never slept with him not know I wasn’t ready I just have this stupid stupid idea like I'm cheating on him but that isnt true he leaft me and got over me and started dating another vamp that I'm sure was Tanya.i hate him I...

“Train us? For what?” Opal Asked. Grito didn’t say anything; he started pointing, first at himself then to Marley, Alec, Mia then Opal. “Train us to fight of creatures” detto Mia. Grito nodded, and then he looked at the fairy on his shoulder. The fairy nodded and flew up into the air and created a square in the air, like a movie screen. On it pictures of demons and humans being attack appeared, much to the four friends’ disgust. “What the hell is going on here?” Alec Asked. “This is why I was sent to train you, so this stops happening to innocent humans” detto Grito. “When...

Okay I should very careful. If I mess up I could get very hurt I think.
I sigh and I raise my hands. A sand storm starts forming. So far so good My hands control the speed of the sand. When I wiggle my fingers it controls where it will go. It starts going to my right.
It sounds like a horrible hurricane. I wiggle my left fingers and it moves towards my house.
Oh crap! That's not good. sposta your fingers Sam! MOVE!
My sandstorm picks up my house and it starts spinning around.
I hear screaming coming from my house. It's probably my mother.
I raise my hand. To stop it which is impossible because I'm...

Alex froze up as his hunter came near him with his bag. Alex started crying again but silently. His thoughts were raging out of control Should I tell him? Nah then he'll just kill me and my family Alex looked up in time to get slapped again.
"Tell me where your family is Alex! o else," Alex's hunter roared raising his hand again
Alex started to shake bad.
"N..No I will not Dude just kill me now so at least I can be in a happy place," he detto looking down his tears dripping onto the hard wooden floor
The hunter laughed a big belly laugh. Alex looked up in time to get slapped again. Alex glared...

We both stood there in awe. I closed my eyes and then opened them again to check if he was real. He looked just as shocked as I was. He moved closer but I moved back. “Sadie, please” he begged, I shook my head. “You’re not dead” I stated, he nodded. I know it was a stupid thing to say, but at this moment it was the first thing that went through my mind. “Please, let me explain” he pleaded. I didn’t answer, I just stood there. “But, Dawn” I said, he nodded. “Dawn saw what I wanted her to” he simply said. I looked up at him with disgust. “What do te mean?” I asked...

Dawn’s p.o.v

“What?’ I asked, closing my mouth. He smiled, sending a shiver down my spine. “I need to speak to my new slayer to be” he told us. Rebecca eyed him. “Why, we have taught her the basic and the rules” she said, he now looked annoyed. Why was he doing this? I thought to myself. “Now, young ladies I would like to talk to her in private” he said, but before we could go Billy had walked in. “Derek” he simply said. My father turned to him. “Billy, how have te been?” he asked. Billy snickered. “Just great, now what do te want with Lilly?” he asked, my father...

I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing toga, abito and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years fa she was the outcast, her...

Life is an iPod. The different melodies, the ups and the downs, the changes in tempo, every song, and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, meaningless lyrics, and soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; repetition, a song meant for young ears, nothing to think about, nothing to ponder, just to breathe and to live. One song flows into the next, changing subtly, barely noticed. Then the words begin to gather più depth; the beat becomes a little faster, a little louder. The Musica plays, slow and monotonous during the school day, dragging...

Everyone knows no one is normal. Everyone knows everyone is the same too. But do te know what it's like to have nothing normal about you? From the way te dress from the way te talk? I do. My name is Elizabeth Mills. This is the story of my life. It all started when I was five. Thats the giorno I became the opposite of normal.

I was just a little girl. I was in my own world. Thats a lie. Every little girl is in a world of her own. I acted as if I was five years older than I should be. I'm not normal, remember? Well I was at my Grandmothers house to spend the weekend. My cousin always prefered...

Who is Mary Sue, te ask?

She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the fan fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings o Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In fan fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified da the following traits:

1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting...

Scott is my preferito boy character in total drama revenge of the island and Courtney is my preferito character in all total drama, so I like this couple better but I was once a Duncney fan so... enjoy!

Scott: I wasn't scared to jump off the cliff into the water with sharks! I was just thinking that I would scare the pee out of the sharks, and make the challenge easier. Well, that's not my plan! Hehehe

Challenge ended elimination time

The villainous vultures won so the heroic hamsters had to vote and Courtney and Lindsay were at risk, but Lindsay got the boot

After 3 challenges Courtney got switched...

Prologue

Slowly consciousness came back to me. My head was pounding, it felt like it was going to explode. Especially at the back of my head something was wrong. I knew it, I felt it, yet I couldn’t get my head around how I got it exactly. I tried to get my hand up to touch my head and make out what was going on exactly, but soon found out I couldn’t get it up. It was strapped onto something. Slowly I took a deep breath, held it and let it go. The pounding didn’t stop, but it did help me to be able to start make out some stuff around me. I couldn’t open my eyes yet, but my ears gave...

Lisa Tyler was weary after a long,hard giorno at the pottery factory where she works.But as she approached her home in the English city of Stoke-on-Trent,her cuore lightened:soon she would be having a nice cup of tea,putting her feet up and watching Friends,her favourite TV series.But first,she needed to change out of her work clothes and pick up her 3-year-old son from his grandmother's house nearby.

As Lisa walked up her garden path,she noticed a light flashing on and off in an upstairs bedroom.A shiver went down her back.What if it was a burglar?Quietly,she crept round to the back of the house...

The Japanese film director Hayao Miyazaki is one of the greatest animators in modern cimema.Films like Heidi,and Marco,3000 miles in cerca of mother have made him famous all over the world.

In 1971 Miyazaki left Toei Douga animazione and worked with several other companies.He made Heidi,and Marco,3000 miles in cerca of mother wich were shown as TV series all over the world.

In 1952 they moved back to Tokyo.When Hayao was at secondary school he saw his first cartoon film,The Legend of The White Snake.He felt in Amore with the heroine,Pai-nyan and cried all night.It was this film which started...

Chapter 1: Annabeth

Annabeth paced up and down the deck of the Argo||. For the first time ever in living mermory, her mind was a mess. Being the brightest daughter of Athena, Annabeth was used to being calm and collected. But that was a thing of the past. Ever since Percy went missing, her mind and emotions had been going crazy. Annabeth felt like crying. Percy. Her brave, sweet, occasionally smart, seaweed brain boyfriend. He went missing eight long, nightmare filled months ago. She could still remember the last night she saw him. They had finished cena da the campfire and were walking along...

Night arrives once more. I notice that my hands and feet are tied up. As i look up there is a dark figure holding a gun to my head. I ask him what he wants and why he has me tied up, he risposte "I want the powers that te posses inside of you. The abilities that your soul has. i would like to suggest that te agree with me and hand over the powers." Confused about all of this i ask him about what he is talking about. he risposte "You have powers kid. The less te know the better. Hand them over wilingly o i will have no choice but to force te to hand them over." With me replying no to cooperating...

____after school_____getting ready in Lulu's bathroom
I was listening to "Bella's Lullaby"from my faveorite Robert Pattinson flicks.It was blasting through the speakers.Andria was applying baby blue eyeshadow.I was putting on mascara.I popped my lips when the song was over.The successivo song that came up was Ke$ha's "Blah Blah Blah".I looked over towards Andria.We loved this song.We started singing.Halfway through the song I heard my phone Canto "Fearless"by Taylor Swift.That meant it was Rob.I picked it up and put it on speaker."Hey Rob!"I said."Hey,Lu."he said."Andria's here too."He chuckled."Cool.Hey...