A Mistake Screenwriters Make When Structuring Their Screenplays da Gary Goldstein

CHAPTER 1



I opened my light blue eyes to buttery sunshine flooding through my window; no surprise despite the fact it was December 7. I live in Atlanta, Georgia, an always warm, always sunny place. The trees were always a brilliant green, the air always warm, and clouds rarely blocked the sky.
I detested it. Nothing against Atlanta itself, it was just too green, too bright, too hot. . . The air was thick and the humidity was high, and the unforgiving sun constantly beat down on my forehead. Maybe it's just me, but I fail to understand how anyone could possibly live in a place with even this much...

Chapter One: Before

A warm late Augusts’ evening was upon Hultimore, the secret area which humans that held no gem upon their left palm were not able to see. Gemmers believed that if they visited this area for any amount of time at least once in life, they will be born a più powerful Gemmer after death.
No one stepped upon the streets of Hultimore after dark. It was forbidden. Most obeyed this rule and stayed indoors. Yet, the silence of Hultimore was broken, as a lone traveller stepped out across the barrier between dry, barren land and a city full of magic.
His footsteps echoed in the empty...

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What is he doing here? I turned on him, and ended face to face with my follower, "What are te doing here?" i asked. He smiled evily and shrugged his shoulders. I am so sick of lies, so i punched him. His smile grew wider, and he pretended to be hurt.
"Ow, Belle that hurt, was there any need for that?" he asked cowering away from me. Boys drive me insane, all their secrets and leis,alll their nonsense.
"Cut the crap, Damon. What. Are. You. Doing. Here?" I stepped a little...

Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter Two: Parties at Dusk
        Tucker liked parties. So he threw one for Kaylee on her birthday. He told her they were going to his house for a “special night”. Kaylee was very excited! She wore her arancia, arancio strapless dress with a blue scarf. When she got their she was so surprised that Tucker threw her a party. Haley was there, Anne was there, and Hannah was there with Jacob. At first Kaylee was having a great time-and then Ally started flirting with Tucker and Jacob. Kaylee was so mad because she thought Tucker...

Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter One: BEST PROM EVER
It was December on Natale Eve. Tucker and Kaylee were on their way to the midnight prom when, they ran into Ashlynn and Luke. They were on their way to prom too. Then they all went in the same car. On their way they ran into Hannah and Jacob, so they all rode together, when they ran into Anne and Jordon, then they went to prom. When they got there Haley was taking pictures about 10 minuti later Haley went up to Sean, the DJ, and Haley asked Sean to play a pop song. Then, Haley’s boyfriend, Zack came and they danced.
        Later...

On a beautiful Friday after noon the students prepaired to leave school for the day.
{In Katherines P.O.V.}
{In the last class}
"Hmmm..."
"Whats wrong Kate?" Asked Krista.
"Nothing..." Replied Katherine.
"I've been your friend since kindergarden... I know when somethings wrong! Now spill it."
"Okay well...I want to tell Chris I Amore him but I'm so afraid of what he'll say..."
"Ugh! I've heard so many rumors from his Friends and everyone else...he loves te too!"
"Its a rumor! Sometimes rumors are false!"
"Yes but some are true."
"Yeah SOME. It would be nice if he told me..."
"Ugh fine, i'm not gonna...

Chapter 2
The successivo morning I woke up feeling tired and worst than usually. Swollen feet, aching back, I was up all night long treating people who thought they had the flu. I knew I had to get up and go to work, I lived alone for now and somebody has to pay the rent. And right now, it's me. Just as I was about to get up the phone rang. "Hello?", "ohh thank goodness I caught te before te left. Listen jasmine, I know te really need this job to keep your rent up but you've been working yourself crazy down here at this clinic. You’re pregnant and I think te should really take the giorno off, stay...

Alexis LaRcca was a average 12 anno old girl,she had friends,was pretty good at school,played soccer,sang in chorus.But Alexis had a secret shame,her dad.you see her dad was put in jail when she was a baby,and everytime he got out he would go straight back about a anno o so later.when she was young she thought nothing of it,she went to visit him,he wrote him and she talked to him on the phone.the last time he got out he tried to be a better father to her.But once again he went back.

This time she was old enough to understand.She cried and never went to visit him,it was just to painful for her.She...

This one is pretty short but I've been so busy, hope te like it commento and tell me what te think.

Elena’s POV
I woke up to find the curtains being draw open and Stefan gone. Every thing seemed a little fuzzy. I could see a figure walked towards me. I sat up in letto and rubbed my eyes.
“Good morning sleeping beauty.” Damon spoke softly. When things came back to focus I saw Damon half dressed, wearing just a pair of sweats.
I ran my fingers threw my hair pulling it out of my face. “Where’s Stefan.” “Not here, in fact it’s just te and me. Hungry?”
He got up and headed for the...

Chapter 1.
    I had just moved into forks, Washington, me and my brother Eddie were
close so after our parents died Eddie didn't leave me out of his sight.
I was unpacking and going through my things when I heard the door campana, bell
ring. I knew who it was because every time I moved the people successivo door
would come and welcome us. Well I figured it was our neighbor.
    I heard the door open and heard talking. I looked like a slob in my
baggy t-shirt and my shorts. So I changed into jeans and a long rosa
tank top. I walked down stairs and detto my hellos I let...

Tayce’s p.o.v

Belinda’s face was full of horror as she glared down at Ruby’s limp body on the floor. “I didn’t choose her!” She screamed I gave her a questioned look. “What do te mean te didn’t choose her?” I asked, she ignored my domanda and knelled down to Ruby. Kale did the same; he had a worried expression on his face. “Shit, get Bobby” I did as he asked and ran downstairs, Bobby for some reason didn’t run up with us when we all heard Belinda scream. I motioned him to come upstairs, he followed. His face softened when he saw Belinda and Ruby. “What the hell...”...

Elena's POV

"Why don't te sit down and we can talk." I was pressed tightly up against the counter. "No need to be scared." Katherine was smiling as she took steps towards me. "Katherine this is between Damon, Stefan and te not me." Katherine tilted her head and shook it tell me no. "Honey this is about you."

Damon's POV

"How the hell could te do that? Damon I asked te to do this for Elena." Stefan was furious. I just rolled my eyes. "Your just upset because she may also have feelings for me to, just like Katherine."

Stefan sat there shaking his head. "Don't te get it Damon Katherine never...

This chapter is dedicated to another great friend, PC..x Thanks for being so supportive.

There were people rushing about everywhere but I could distinguish the difference between my vampire family and my werewolf family but the almost invisible flashes of light and the più slow galloping thuds of my werewolf’s footsteps. Kate stood in the middle of Alice’s massive bathroom whilst Rose, Alice, Mum, Tanya and I all applied her makeup, pulled her hair up into an elegant bun and literally made every surface of her body look even più beautiful than usual- which is extremely hard with a vampire....

There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be più adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, o even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...

morgan Sterns was sipping up the last drips of her coffee. She was going to need every last drop if she was going to work late enough to finish all of her reports. She had reports on all kinds of things. Serial killers, counterfeiters, asassination attempts, the lista went on and on.
Why do the FBI get handed everything, she wondered. But what she really wanted to know was why she was the one always stuck with work when most of the other agents and anaylists were just standing around telling jokes and drinking coffee. morgan got back to her sede, sedile and pushed her mandorla hair out of her eyes and...

"Why would te want to any way?" Hellena asked.
"She's cute." Ash answered his sister.Ellen went to her first class.
"Alright every one we have a new student starting to giorno who would like to mostra her around?" The teacher said.A bunch of guys raised there hands.
"Miss.Terra would te like to mostra her around?" The teacher asked.
"Alright teacher." A girl with long green hair put up in small pig tails detto standing up she was wearing a green dress,She walked over to Ellen.
"Hi my name is Hana." She said.
"I'm Ellen."
"I know." She detto the went back to her seat.
"Miss.Collins please take a seat."
"Yes...

Ellen Collins is Moving to a new town.which means a new life,new house and new friends.Her new home was in the middle of town.It was huge.
"Mom...I don't like it here no one will like me." Ellen detto to her mother concerned her partners were separated.It was a tough time for her.
"Not now hunny I'm on a very important business call.Why don't te go to school?" Her mom said.Her mom was a very impotent business women
"Can I have some money?For some food." Ellen said.
"Yeah yeah here's a twenty." Her mom detto handing her a twenty dollar bill.
"Thanks."
"Go,go."
Ellen went in town,She stop a girl around...

Marley was bleeding from his wound, he was fighting the same sort of creature as the others, it was small but it was fast plus its forearms are used like clubs. The creature had marks all over its body, due to Marley’s elbows and knees. It swung its arm again, hitting Marley straight in the shin, Marley was quick to react and Slash up the creatures face. It left four claw like marks on its face; Marley looked at his hand and notice that his nails had pointed, as the creature wiped it’s eye he looked at Marley and saw that his eyes had become yellow. Marley quickly struck the creature in...

The guards walked back and forth in their normal sweeping motion that they always used. This made Joseph smile watching them through his hotel window with his state-of-the-art night-vision binoculars. just routine as usual, at least that's what the guards thought. Joseph looked at his watch, 12:23a.m. only seven più minuti till he had to go. Joseph grabbed his bag of ammunition and various other things. His small, light smg. He also put on his body armor, his cammo, and grabbed his combat knife. And of course his baby, he'd never forget his baby. His baby was a 9.mm beretta. Aims like a dream...

Okay, so this might sound boring, but its been on my nerves for a long time and this is the only place to spill it out so here it goes.

So at my middle school whose name shall remain secret (La villa Middle School), theres this kid whose name shall also be kept secret (jose guerro) and is real jackass. he smells horrible, he gets into fight with guys AND girls, says stuff that make us want to crack his neck, and he sent lots of people to the office for something he did, and the teachers dont do anything but tell him niclely tobehave and get after the people who he made pissed. the other day...