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Hourglass - Chapter Two

posted by alicia386

Chapter Two

Olivia Meyers hopped in her used brown truck. Today was the giorno she was going to prove everyone wrong. She wore her purple capestro, cavezza dress with a thick, black cintura around her waist. She also had some fishnet stockings and black boots that almost reached to her ankles. Her mom had left this outfit out on her letto this morning. Olivia felt wrong for not wearing it but it made her feel too exposed so she wore a gray giacca also. Her strawberry-blonde hair was extra curly today then usual. It was also extra thick.

She cranked the car four time for it to finally start running. It was her dad's...

The 7th Grade Guide: A Story and Guide on how to survive 7th grade- Part 1

posted by Poppygirl9904

For the 3rd time already today i was checking the mailbox to see if my scedule had arrived yet. I went through all the mail, the contents was nothing but bills, bills, and a magazine with a school supply sale. i went back inside, dispointed.
Ugh, I said
What's wrong, my mom asked
Oh, nothing it's just that the school schedule still isnt here, I said
oh well it should be here soon, well the mailman is probably late.
Yeah i guess, I said.
I then i went in the cucina to get a bowl of some cereal, we had, frutta Loops,Lucky Charms, Cinnamon crostini, pane tostato Crunch, Frosted Flakes, and some boring adult stuff...

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Boy of Soul chapter 1 part 2

posted by FURRY

As I awoke the successivo morning Mother was already hard at work makeing breakfest and cleaning the house even though it was already spotless, "Mother are te alright?" I asked comeing from upstairs still kinda dizzy from last night's ordeal, "Yes dear just doing some cleaning." Mother replied as she started to clean the bookshelf, "Mother it seem's something has spooked you." I detto siting down at the tavolo "It's nothing Max!" she replied with fear in her voice I looked at her with great concern, *Barking* "What is it boy?" I detto with a worried tone as I reached to pet him but something was wrong,...

Transition, Ch.1 (be niceee!)

posted by MerlinLemon

1
~ Beginning ~

Me and my best friend, Leo, both work at the same dumb pizza negozio mostly every night of the week, we both get paid the same amount and work the same number of hours. The only difference – I do the deliveries.
I ride this crappy little flat-tyred around the neighbourhood – which, da the way, is so small I memorised it da the age of seven – delivering pizza after pizza. Sometimes I wonder how such a small town can order so many pizzas. I deliver about twenty each Thursday night… to the same houses. Still, they know me so well the tips are considerably higher.
But moving...

My True Amore Final Chapter. Nessies POV

posted by Twilightsauce

HEY! SORRY I HAVEN’T postato ANYTHING IN SO LONG, IT’S BEEN LIKE A anno SINCE MY LAST POST. I DON’T REALLY HAVE ANY EXCUSES BUT DON’T WORRY I’M BACK NOW! ANYWAY THIS WILL BE THE LAST CHAPTER IN THE MY TRUE Amore SERIES- I’M SO SAD! ALTHOUGH I Amore IT VERY MUCH AND HAVE REALLY ENJOYED Scrivere IT, I FEEL THAT I HAVE EXHAUSTED NESSIE’S STORY NOW. BUT I WILL BE Scrivere ANOTHER, TWILIGHT RELATED SERIES WHETHER IT WILL BE ABOUT NESSIE o NOT, I DON’T KNOW. ANYWAY THANKS FOR STICKING WITH ME FOR SO LONG AND I KNOW THIS HAS BEEN A VERY LONG MESSAGE BUT IF ANY OF te ARE GOOD AT ART OR...

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 2

posted by jacob_lover5253

Nick looked around. "Hmmm. How 'bout we play the Wii. I bet I can bet you." I smiled. "You're on!" We played bowling and he beat me. We played golf and I beat him. My mom came in. "Karleigh, come here for a minute." "Coming." I yelled. "Nick, just keep playing. te can take my turns if te need to." "Mmhmm." I walked into the kitchen. "I'm taking te and your sisters to the movies. We are going to see Toys Story 3!" "Yay." I detto lamely. I walked away. "What was that all about?" Nick asked. "My mom wants to take me and the girls to go see Toys Story 3. I-" Nick interrupted. "I wanna go see...

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The Hunt for the Thirteenth, Chapter One

posted by booklover13

Chapter One
Ashelyn (Ash):

The first thought I had waking up in the morning was, today’s finally the giorno I’ve been waiting for all my life.
Pushing away my thoughts, I rolled over on my bed, and wiped the sweat off my brow. Pushing aside the velvet curtain that covered the hole in the bacheca that was my window, I squinted in the early morning light.
It was mid-September, and the heat was something awful. Even now, not even eight hours into the day, I could see the sun beating down on the ground. Dirt from the paths swirled in the air, making it...

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Poem: Lonely Girl

posted by emmett

Lonely Girl

So peaceful in sleep she lies
Brown hair spilled across her pillow
I can picture her beautiful eyes
Looking into her dreams…

She looks like she’s not listening
But really she’s deep in thought
Remembering forgotten memories
When she lived life as she ought

Stolen kisses in the night
Laughing with her friends
Little did she know back then
This is where it all would end

Her cuore is filled with regret
Always looking back
She wishes she would just forget
And find happiness once più

I don’t think she’ll ever forget you
But for now there’s joy on her face
She keeps reminding herself
It’s not a race, to be the first to find your place

Now as the sun goes down
She’ll say a prayer
Wishing perhaps for you
But really, life’s not that fair
There’s nothing this Lonely Girl can do

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Broken Dreams Epilogue

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

There isn't a lot left to say. I guess happy endings can happen, but the struggle to get there isn't always that straightforward.

It wasn't that easy. And I wouldn't wish it was. Because that made it worth it.

I glance down at my hand for the umpteenth time that day. The small circular stone set on a silver band.

I'm twenty six...so that's seven years. Seven years since...

I never have and never will regret any of that.

"Serena, are te even listening to me?!" Kayla shrieks from the other side of the dressing room door. "Come on! You've been in there, what, fifteen minuti now?"

She graduated...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 34

posted by BellaSwan636

Ashleigh

We got to go the hospital. A nice lady wearing white stuff gave us lollipops, and we got to play teaparties. There was another girl there, and she was five. I wanna be five. But I'm turning four in, um, I think mommy detto a month? I dunno. But te have to be four before te can be five, I think. Why can't I just skip it?

Anyways, now there is a big girl living in the guest room. She says her name is Kayla. She has shiny goldish hair. Like Jamie's mom, but with brownish stripes in it. It's long. Like if she sits down, she almost sits on it. My hair is only halfway as long.

My mommy gets...

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My unfinsished story (no titolo yet) chapter 2

posted by coolcatsRus123

Chapter two: Secret Lab
The doors of the elevator swung open. The three walked in slowly curious on what was in that room.”This place is really dusty” Kylie said. She got her special clean handkerchief and dusted off an area in the dirty room. Under the clump of dirt she dusted off, was a big bright blue button. The button detto “Lab generator”. “What’s that?” asked Alia. “Well, only one way to find out” Daniel said. He pushed the button and the room began shaking. “Whats-up-with-you-and-pushing-buttons” asked kylie as she began shaking with the room.
The room stopped shaking....

Ugh! Stupid Rockstar!

posted by karah1999

Willow May Rains. 15 Yrs Old!:)

Tik Tok on the clock,but the party don't stop!!Tik Tok!"

I covered my ears so I wouldn't hear the rest of that horrible song.People must be tone deaf to actually like it.

I watch as my sister went to turn off her alarm clock.That's when I remembered. Today we were going to see that horrible band in concerto because my bestfriend got tickets.My sister likes them too.The band name is Snakebite.I think they are a horrible band that are wanna be screamo/rock popstars.They suck ass.

Let me introduce myself.

I'm Willow May Rains,your regular fifteen anno old girl.I Amore screamo and rock bands.Real screamo/rock...

Diferent and Alone (a poem)

posted by Rae-Ash

Do te know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

As we wish upon the stars
For the very first time
We stand there
Like time is ours
In a world
That's speeding by

Do te know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

So here we stand
In the wake of our dreams
Hoping and wishing
For a day
That they can come true
Hoping for a world
Where I can fit

Do te know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

Now I sit here all alone
In a world where I just don't fit
I sit here alone
Never knowing...

War for the freedom chapter 1

posted by juliet98

In the anno 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied da a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone Lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It detto that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...

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True Of The Unforgotten Past: Chapter 4 kidnap For The Deal

posted by MadagascarGirl

After Skipper and Katherine told the story to Kowalski and Rico, they went to theirs beds. But when penguins went inside to their HQ, they noticed Private wasn't in his bunk. The TV was turned on.
"Hello peng-you-ins" detto a familiar voice. Penguins lookes at the TV.
"Blowhole!" detto Skipper in angry.
"I kidnaped someone, do te who?" asked Blowhole and he laughed evilly.
"Private..."said Skipper "If te hurt him I'll kill te Blowhole!"
"Oh, I'm scared" detto Blowhole and laughed again "If te want save him, te must come here, alone, without your team"
"I'll came"
"But Skipper..." detto Kowalski.
"You...

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 2

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my Friends or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz mostrare up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade almost...

short murder story wroten da me secondo CHAPTER

posted by juliet98

the first part: www.fanpop.com/spots/true-writers/articles/171410/titl...ter

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help te sir, are te sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank te i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- risposte Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask te some question...

American and British English

posted by ZekiYuro

If you've learnt British English and you're travelling in the States,or if you've learnt American English and you're travelling in Britain,you'll notice some differences.An obvious difference is the accent,but most travellers find that they don't have too many problems with this.There are some grammatical differences,but they shoudn't make it difficult to understand people,or to communicate.That leaves differences in vocabulary,which can cause misunderstandings.Sometimes the difference is only the spelling,for example,in British English 'center','colour',and 'travelled',and in American English 'centre','color',and 'traveled'.But sometimes the word is completely different in British and American English,and it's good idea to be prepared.

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The Holy Robbery (oneshot)

posted by thetscfan121

Please comment, I need the comments, writers feed themselves from comments, so if te don't want to kill me of starvation, please comment.

Lots of bad things happen these days. War, violence, corruption, people confusing SFX for SEX, drugs, death, car accidents, etc,etc,etc. Peter knew of them and detto that popolare line in puertorrican youth language, "ME IMPORTA UN BICHO!!!" Literally translated, "I care a dick." That's the way things are and that's the way I tell you. Well, Peter had one point against him: he was a catholic. Confirmed, conbined and sealed in paper, he was supposed to be the...

How to Avoid Common Grammatical Errors

posted by IloveMyLord

using correct grammar will make a difference between appearing professional and educated o uneducated and ignorant. Many people make common grammatical errors when they write and when they speak. Use these steps to avoid the most common errors and sound intelligent and well informed

Tips:

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Make sure that verb tenses match. If the subject is present tense, then the verb must be as well. The same principle applies to past tense subjects and verbs.

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Think about whether the subject is single o plural. Words like don't, aren't, were, are and were belong with plural subjects. For example, "It don't...