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Vampire Bites and Amore Songs

posted by kacimay72293

Chapter One

My name is Kitty Prince. I was borne on July 22, 1809. I was the young daughter of a lord. I was loved da all even though I was the third daughter.
My older sisters were Elizabeth at age twenty-one and Sarah Maine at age nineteen. they were both very beautiful. Elizabeth had golden brown eyes and deep brown hair that curled around her face. She loved Musica and art. Sarah was very plain with brown eyes and hair. She loved to read hated parties.
I had fair blonde hair like my late mother's and ocean blue eyes. I loved to dance, sing, and grow a garden in the back of our manor. I was...

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Phase.[Poem]

posted by HarryPLover

Here I phase
Here in my old age
Here I run with no place to go
Here I stand with no purpose
Here I am with no show,
No lights,no cameras,no grace
Here I am with this world having me in it's tight embrace.

But I won't give in.
For God Loved me so.

Here I am in this place,
Here I am just watching the world race.
Watching the world fall apart,
Here I am just waiting for a new start.
As this breaks my heart,
I know I will unisciti God's cart,his army,his people and I will live in heaven above.

Here I am asking you,
What will te do?
Here I am watching te phase,
Here I am watching te turn to old age.
With no place to go,
Here I am telling te don't want to low.

As we change and as we grow,
This world will face judgment,This I know.
Don't turn to old age,
Don't get Lost in the world's maze.
Save te self.
Don't let yourself phase.......

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Whisper: Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

I never knew. My whole life, no one had the courage o the right to tell me what happened. I had to find out the hard way, and that nearly cost me my life.
Last December was an important time for me. I never moved before, and it was all brand new to me. Moving boxes wasn't the challenge. The hardest part was coming into school during the middle of the anno and not having a clue what the people were like. So far, my only friend here was the next-door neighbor Joselynn, some seventy-year old lady that had her grandkids over as much as possible. My mom encouraged me to meet them and possibly play...

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Forsaken

posted by Kimi4312

Chapter Five:Past
Hayley's Journal, I decided to see what my friend's mom had been doing then I watched through the window then I saw Maddie's mom beat her and broke her nose, it is scary to watch someone get hurt like this but te know te wouldn't do anything about it, well unlike Hayden, I'm always a tough one and she's like always wanting a unusually life but our lives are changing since we met our mom, we didn't know she was our actual mom because she looked so young and well she was 15 but she is between 29 o 30 right now, I seen Maddie get burned da matches da her mom, it scares me to...

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A Sea Tale - Chapter 2

posted by avatarluver990

GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY, I WILL BE RE-WRITING A NEW ONE!!! IT WILL COME UP SOON!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICE!!! Thank you.

Benedic hated the trip! It wasn't that bad though, it was at the beach, with rides and fast Cibo restaurants and cool sights; except that where him and his family were going to stay for summer vacation was at an old castello that it once belonged to a prince. It was old and delapadated, it needed some paint and it smelled like someone died at the front steps of the castle.
"Dad," he grumbled. "Do we have to stay here?"
"Well all of the hotels are booked." his father explained....

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A Sea Tale - Chapter 1

posted by avatarluver990

GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY!! I WILL BE RE-WRITING IT! IT'LL BE COMING UP SOON!!!!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICLE!!!!! Thank you.

Not too long ago, probably this time period, deep below in the sea, where no human had ever crossed, was a kingdom; a kingdom strong and powerful which was ruled da a great sea king named Octlantus; he was a powerful ruler, along with his trident. The people respected the Sea King that named the kingdom Octlantia in his honor. Octlantus and his wife, Sea Queen Lynsca, had seven beautiful daughters: Jinsya, Kynlana, Otsyncia, Renya, Tsyniana, Isynlana, and Nynxa. The Sea...

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black moon chap 19

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 19
I followed the voices and saw aro and caius talking
-hi dear Bella
-hi caius
I detto shyly
-dear Bella its great to see you!
He shook my hand.thank god he didn’t hug me I’m getting tired of that!
-oh Bella I heard your staying with us.
-for a while
I said
-well te know we will be happy if stay
-sure sure..
-oh Bella its so nice to see te upright!
Heidi detto rushing towards me and …hugged me.
Ohhhh god I hate hugs …..eee but I didn’t want to offend her and hugged her back lightly
Me, jane ,alec and rennata were sitting on a black sofa talking about everything that happened in the 100...

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black moon chap 16

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 16
200 years later
Me and matt traveled the world and had a great time we even met some other covens like the irish coven,the romanian coven and the amazon coven we lived with them for 49 years and then took off cause it was getting kind of boring we went to paris and lived there for a cuppel off years then we went to new york,spain,egypt,germany,china,italy we even met the voltury they werent that nice! But kind of kreepy, specialy there hoods!but then we went back to london.
I got off the letto and got dressed matt was sitting on the divano Leggere a news paper and watching t.v
-what are...

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black moon chap 15

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter15
Tanya looked at me coldy,full of hate……like she wanted to rip my head off if she could.i couldn’t stand her looks so I just turned around and pulled matts hand to follow me I took off running I heard tanyas voice I think she detto cagna under her breath I heard her saying other stuff but I tuned her out and ran faster I ran faster and faster thinking about edward I hated him so much but some part of me still loved him and deep down I knew the amount of Amore my cuore held for him will never be the same with matt but I Amore matt so much and I want to spend my entire life with him...

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black moon chap 14

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 14
Bella pov
Me and matt went home and changed I took out the left ravioly out of the fridge and warmed it up for charlie I went upstaires and fiond matt lying on my letto Leggere romeo and juliet
-that's one of my faves!
I sat down beside him and read a few pages with him when I heard Charlie's incrociatore coming near the house I got up and went down stairs matt followed me he kissed my forehead and went and sat on the divano turnning on the TV watching baseball ugh! I I don’t get that game and it reminds me of old times.
I ran up stairs and took romeo and juliet and went back down stairs in...

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black moon chap 13

posted by joe-edwardfan

I WANT TO THANK leisha4 FOR HELPING ME!
Chapter 13
6 months later
Edwards pov (from what happens in the last chapter)
I was so dipresed its been 6 months scince bellas missing I am sitting on the coutch watching nothing. my family was dipresed too so jaspered went out a lot not wanting to be in the same room as us he tried to cheer us up but it didn’t work rose was less concerned and acted like nothing had happen Emmett and Alice were mostly like me they loved Bella as their sister Emmett alwas made fun of her and made her blus, Alice was so dipressed più like me ,now she hated me less and tried...

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Elle - Chapter 1: Encounter

posted by OCFan123

Author's Note: Okay, so the plot of the story is probraly the most cliche plot ever. Bad boy likes good girl, fall in love, bad boy has secret, blah blah. However, I wrote this a REALLY long time ago, as when I wrote the most cliche stories ever. But, I decided to put the first chapter here. I'll only continue if people want me to. Hope te enjoy :) And any constructive critsicm is welcome!

1. Encounter

If people would ask about me, Elle Summons, they probably say "who?" o if they did know me, o at least who I was, they probably would say "Biggest outsider ever" o "Loser of the Century"
Because...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 2-part two

posted by summerfrog

Skiro
“So your on the Track team?” Murphy detto as he sat successivo to me.
“Yeah,I have been since I was a freshman. I liked it a lot but I'm worried about this new team.” I detto thinking about the way they looked at me when I walked in. It was my hair,I shouldn't have braided it-too much just like always. “I don't think they take well to-” I started to say but Savannah sat down across from Murphy.
“What are yall talkin' about?” Savannah asked
“Skiro's on the Track team.” Murphy detto excitedly
“oh really?” Savannah looked at me “And did Murphy tell te that he's going on...

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Forbiden Amore - Chapter 2

posted by ashesandwine

Thanks to MISSLOVATOSTAR1 for the "snow white skin", to Emmett4ever for convincing me to keep it going and for believing in my writing:D But still you're better than me, hon!!! I Amore your story:D Be sure to check out Emmett4ever spot and her story... It's AWESOME!!! Thanks to everyone for the support and for the comments:D

"Daniel's POV"

My all life as been turned apart, but I have to believe that we will find a way to stay together... Our Amore is strong and I will not give up until I'm dead o she back in my arms!
I'll remember her full lips, her beautiful green eyes, her light brown hair...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Seventeen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Seventeen

After she applied about two coats of Julie’s tube of black-brown mascara courtesy of Cover Girl, Jamie closed the tube and was about to give it back to Julie but when she saw her little sister, Julie was busy flirting with a man with short gray hair that somewhat looks like their father o of what Julie might saw the man in front of her, Anderson Cooper. Jamie was about to puke when she saw those two and making sure that she doesn’t do that, Jamie Thomas just slipped the small tube into her borsa and after she threw the half-filled plastic cup of coffee into the wastebasket,...

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The last minuto (chp. 1)

posted by nEvEr-tHe-sAme

A flock of raging crows quickly swifted down the eerie tree. Filling every possible spot on it's long dead branches. With the wind gushing, and the fall season coming to an end, the changing leaves have slowly made its way down the cold, wet grass. It had been a depressing day, the sun hiding behind the fluffy grey clouds, and the weather so cold and so warm at the same time... with rain slowly falling at ease, its the perfect time to mourn.

----x--X--x-------->

Awakening slowly to the cold air I felt all around me, I slowly open my eyes. With my body feeling like it'll explode any second,...

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The Fugitive-Chapter4: Robert helps me

posted by sahour95

chapter 4:Robert helps me
The night was so lonely and scary. I was hoping that the sun rises fast, as I was very frightened. It finally happened after that dark and lonely night. I was very tired as I walked all night, but I was surprised when I found myself not very far from Ema’s house. I sat on my bag thinking of everything happened, but mostly thinking about the way I feel about Patrick. I was wondering what made me think that he loved me. Is it because he detto I’m beautiful? Well lots of men told me that I’m beautiful but that doesn’t necessarily means that he is attracted to me....

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Broken Dreams Chapter 11

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

Three months later, we were apparently "an item".

She had me twisted around her little finger. She could have made me jump in front of a bus, all that was needed was one look from her "love me, te know te want to" Cioccolato brown eyes.

I paid attention to her every move, her every word.

**************************************************

When I first told her I loved her, I was expecting rejection, but she surprised me. She kissed me, and detto she loved me too. The sun revolved around where she stood.

Nothing else mattered.

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The Disappearance of Claire Daniels

posted by Lindy52

A little something that I wrote for English class but actually, it was my final and I got 100% on it!! Enjoy!!

The Disappearance of Claire Daniels

I don’t know where my daughter went. One moment, I was holding Claire’s little hand while doing some window shopping but a few secondi later, I spotted something at a clothing store window and was into it and wondering if the store have any chance that they have it in my size that I didn’t noticed that I didn’t felt little Claire Daniels’s hand slipping away from mine.

When I wanted to go into the store and see if they got that little black...

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Hazed

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

HAZED
BuffyFaithfan1

INTRODUCTION...
You have just entered a world. A world like no other! This world is not like TWILIGHT o House Of Night o HARRY POTTER o any other world te are thinking of right about now. This world is way different. Where only a good bunch of people in the population live. The world has been divided into six parts: the WaterLands, the EarthLands, the AirLands, the FireLands, the ExtraLands, and the NoOneZone. Only one hundred people make up our world. And only 16.666666 people live inside each part. It sounds pretty depressing, I know, but this is how this world is! The...