i need some help with a fancharacter. - Young Justice

Young Justice I Need Some Help With A Fancharacter.

nymph_tonks posted on Feb 26, 2011 at 03:55AM

i dont know how to introduce her in the fanfic! help me out. i have two ways to do this so the firsdt one:
"hey girl, wake up."
again? this happens all the time. i faint after a battle, acedentilly open a portal, and end up in some random walmart. another guy said "i think she's dead."
"well then what do we do with the body?"
i woke up."no,no i'm still alive."
i saw a guy with a mask on. "oh great. am i at that costume festival again?"
"no." the kid said, confused.

you like it?

second version:
a girl walked into the room. she was a younger version of the woman next to her. "this is my daughter, amasa girl." the older woman said. megan realized something and said "hello megan!" and amasa girl put a knife to megans throat and said "dont ever say that again unless you feel like dying!" the older woman pulled her away and said " I apologize for my daughter."

vote which one you like best!

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più di un anno fa puppip said…

I like the first one :)

più di un anno fa Denelys said…

the first one though take the walmart part out ok

più di un anno fa nymph_tonks said…

i aint taking the walmart part out.

più di un anno fa Starlight1o1 said…

I think the first one is better because the beginning kind of misleads you and then you figure out what happens. I didn't really understand the second one though i hope my opionion helps you.

P.S. i am horrible at spelling so if there are any mistakes you know why.

più di un anno fa RavenclawQueen said…

i like the first one,
but the second one made me laugh when she had a knife to megan's throat.
First one though. :D

più di un anno fa nymph_tonks said…

i also have other questions. like should she like kid flash or robin? and should kid flash or superboy like her?

più di un anno fa RavenclawQueen said…

have her like wally, and superboy like her. she likes the funny ones, not the brooding ones. :D

più di un anno fa nymph_tonks said…

what should megan think of her? should she hate her, or be her best friend?

più di un anno fa RavenclawQueen said…

mhhhm, well i think mega should be her best friend, like she is with artemis, only because she's not aware that superboy likes her. then when she finds out that supes likes her, she'll be mad for a bit. but they end up friends again.

più di un anno fa miss-martain said…

sounds good.

più di un anno fa Denelys said…

fine im just saying my opinion jeez(people can get so melodramamtic)

più di un anno fa miss-martain said…

its not like she was screaming at you.

più di un anno fa Denelys said…

not to be rude or impolite or anything and not to ofend ya but umm WHY DO YA CARE! ITS BETWEEN A ND B SO CYA...dont ttake it personaly just dont jump walls!

più di un anno fa nymph_tonks said…

uh, miss-martain is my third acount.

più di un anno fa Denelys said…

what does that mean!

più di un anno fa RavenclawQueen said…

it means mss-martian and nymph tonks are the same person. And not to be rude or impolite or anything, but when you post something here, it then involves the whole alphabet.