Dexter
Dexter Critique my Dexter poem
TruthSeeker posted on May 12, 2011 at 03:50PM
I'm at it again
It's like a welcome old friend I can't deny myself The justifiable sin I stock my prey I lye in wait For the perfect moment To seal his fate The place is ready The trap is set I better double check my work 'cause there's no safe bet The trap has sprung His fate is met I take him to the place On the table his lifeless body I set You waken to me Staring down in your eyes I see who you are I see through your disguise You scream out to me But it's always the same "who are you"? "what's going on"? "why am I to blame"? And I say, "look at your actions"! "I'm sure they asked why... as they layed on your table... getting ready to die"!! Now it's your turn As I draw blood from your face One more trophy to add to my collection The blood of the innocent replaced The time has come I pick up my blade With a deep breath and a calculated thrust The incision is made The weight of the world is lifted My soul feels release Is it for me or for the innocent I feel so at peace But I must clean up now And be on my way I'll answer that question some other day I lift the bags from boat And drop them in the sea But now it getting late I must get home to my family Am I a monster? Can I be saved? It seems to get clearer and clearer That my path has been paved Maybe Harry was right I can't help who I am I'm a righter of wrongs According to his plan He says I have too much to juggle Is it all for not? If I don't keep it together I'm gonna get caught But for now it seems It's all under control All this is neccesary To fill the gaping hole Because my innocence was taken from me My soul is lost So I must juggle what I must juggle No matter the cost |