《Audrey's P.O.V.》

I board the train and sit as far away from the other passengers as possible. The ride would be long, but I had to catch up on some reading. I pulled a book titled 'Rivean Alchemy: Laws and Basics' and began reading. My eyes flew over the words and the pages were quickly turned. I pulled my bag closer to me and my cappotto tighter as I saw a man nearing my seat. He asked in a kind voice, "Is this sede, sedile taken, Miss?" I say, "Please, sit somewhere else..." He looked confused. "Is something wrong?" I look up at him and growl, "Just sit in another spot!" He held his hands up. "Alright,...

《Edward's P.O.V.》

I ask, "What do te mean, it is everyone?" Audrey merely says, "To know what I mean... te have to have seen what I have seen and felt what I have felt..." She shivered again and I reached over and put my hand on her left shoulder. Her eyes widened and she looked like she was about to scream. "D-Do-Don't t-touch me!" She manages to say. I pull my hand back, confused as to why she had reacted that way. I look out of the window. "We're almost there." She says quietly. I nod. When the train finally stops, we stand up and get off. She pulls her cappuccio closer. "Let's find the...

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《Audrey's P.O.V.》

I walked through Central, heading to the Command Center. I pulled my black and white cappotto cappuccio tighter over my head. I held out my trademark pocketwatch to mostra the guards I was a State Alchemist. I went into Roy's office. A golden-haired boy sat on the couch. He turned to look at me as I walked in. I said, "Hello, Colonel Mustang. What do te have for me? And who is the boy?"

《Ed's P.O.V.》...

《Ed's P.O.V.》

Tatsumaki said, "6 years ago, when she was 7, her parents were killed in front of her in a torture chamber. Last year, her aunt died of an illness and this anno her grandmother was killed- she was stabbed twice and pushed down the stairs. Her neck twisted. Kutsuu wants to become a better alchemist, though she has amazing talent, and avenge her murdered family. Even if te don't see it, she's suffering." I looked down. "Wow..." He sighed. "It doesn't end there. After her parents died, she tried Human Alchemy and nearly died from what happened." He was going to continue when...