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I wrote this poem who's devoted to my ex boyfriend i used to love. So,what do te think?

Sometimes....
When i look into past,i see you,
i see us...
The way te loved me,
the way i loved you,
so pure and strong...
But...
All te gave was built on lies,
your Amore was fake...
So fake while my Amore was so pure...
And te left me nothing but pain
and dreams of us....
Us,but we never existed!
Now,when i look at te from a distance,
i think that's the best way i can really see you...

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

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reneemonique said:

i Amore it!!:) full of emotion,you can kinda see a picture in your mind of whats going on. your a very good writer:)

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posted più di un anno fa

Well,yes,i'm very emotional person,deep and i wrote that straight from my heart...Thanks a lot.

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

brokenheart2828 said:

oddly enough, that exactly how me and my ex were...and i hated how it ended...

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posted più di un anno fa

Mmh,that's the worst ending. When te think that te know the person,but actually te don't...

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

lailalove said:

no wordssssssssss can say how amazing it is it fantasticcccccccccccccccccccccc like i detto no wordssssssssss

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posted più di un anno fa

Aw thank te so much.... <3

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

Abilei said:

I think its good. I also think te hit everything right on the head for the most part.( =

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posted più di un anno fa

Thanks....

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

inexplicable said:

It´s a very good poem. te are a good poem writer! ;)

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posted più di un anno fa

Aw thanks.... ;-)

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

_Frida_ said:

that was awesome,I felt the same when it happened to me

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posted più di un anno fa

Thanks.....

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

Vixie79 said:

Wow, very wavering but the Scrivere itself has a loveliness all its own.

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posted più di un anno fa

Thank you... <3

irena83 posted più di un anno fa

You're welcome. ♥

Vixie79 posted più di un anno fa

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