Would te read my book knowing this guy is one of the main characters?

It's in the victorian era and he's eating some pane from the bakery that he grew up working at. He's poor, and about 14-16 years old. He doesn't really know how old he is he stopped keeping track when his mother died. His father is an abusive drunk so he doesn't really go home much.

This is literally a quite sketch I did of him as I got the idea for him. :P
 Would te read my book knowing this guy is one of the main characters?
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egyptprincess7 said:
It sounds kinda like other stories. Especially the whole abusive drunk father thing. It's really a repetitive theme. So..no. I don't think I would like to read it so far. Now if the other characters are interesting with a unique background then sure.
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EgoMouse said:
Sounded interesting until "father is an abusive drunk". I'm already tired of that theme already >>
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Well I had to have a reason for him to run away o perhaps he'll get kidnapped… I don't know these was just an quick idea.
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Kidnapped sounds più interesting. Abusive drunk is too saturated. There's hardly any character with a kidnapped father.
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x-Yumi-x3 said:
Sure, nice drawing.
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
it kinda sounds like a lot of other books,
now that's not saying it's bad, but it really doesn't sound interesting to me.
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