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Loryn's POV 

I had been in the hospital for a couple of hours that i knew of. I just remember waking up here in the hospital. I knew I was in Australia for the Solar Blue Surf contest but I didn't know why I was in the hospital but I shortly found out what happened when Bec walked into my room. 
ciao Loryn. How are te feeling? Bec asked. 
Fine, I guess. I detto shrugging my shoulder. 
I winced in pain. My shoulder was hurting, my ribs were hurting and then my ankle was hurting some but not to much. 
Bec, what happened? Why am I in here? I asked. 
Well, Loryn te were surfing and your pearled, fell forwards off of your board. She told me. 
Oh. I said. 
The doctors detto that when te fell inoltrare, avanti that te put your arms out in front of te to catch yourself but ended up popping one of them out of socket, then te sprained your ankle and then when Jake was giving te CPR it broke some ribs. Bec told me. 
Wow. I've never done this much damage to myself before. I told her. 
Loryn, can I ask te a question? I don't want to offend you. Bec said. 
Yeah sure. I said. 
Have te ever surfed that big of waves before? Ec asked curiously. 
No, I haven't. I detto looking down. 
It's okay. We can work on that. I just wanted to know. She said. 
How long have I been in the hospital? Do my parents know that I'm in here? I asked. 
Yes they do. And te have been in here 3 days. Bec told me. 
Wow. Three days! Why aren't they here? I asked. 
I dont know. They detto something about, te can take care if yourself. Bec told me. 
Oh okay. I said. 
If te need anything, Loryn, just ask. Okay? Bec said. 
Don't worry. I will. I said. 
Gary stuck his head in the door of my room. 
Do te feel like company? Gary asked. 
Umm, yeah. I detto trying to smooth my hair out. 
te look good, Loryn. Dont worry! Bec said. 
 I smiled at her. 
Loryn! How are te feeling? Lila asked as she walked through the door. 
I'm okay. I told them. 
It was somewhat awkward because we all didn't know each other well o they didn't know me well. 
What have y'all been up too? I asked. 
Just boring school. Don't worry your not missing much. Leo said. 
The tone of his voice indicated that he hated school. I just kind if chuckled at his remark. 
That's good, then. I said. 
Okay, let's, let Loryn get some rest. Gary said. 
Oh we brought te some flowers. Cam detto while setting them down on a table. 
Awe, thanks. They are lovely. I said. 
And we brought te some magazines!! Emma detto while Paige handed them to me. 
Thanks yall. I said. 
What does y'all mean? Leo asked with a weird look on his face. 
Sorry, its a southern word for saying te guys o just sometimes talking to one person. Sorry it's kinda hard to explain. I said. 
It's okay. Well go home and research it. Paige said. 
Okay, we have got to get going! Bec said. 
Everyone detto goodbye and Leo told me goodbye y'all even though it wasn't in the right context. 
Jake didn't say goodbye to me he just quietly slipped out of the room. 
Bec, is Jake okay? I asked. 
Yeah, I think so. Why? She asked 
I don't know, just wondering. I said. 
Okay, get some rest. I'll see te tomorrow. Bec said. 
Bye. 
I laid there thinking about so many things. How my parents weren't here on my first major wreck off my surfboard and then how Jake didn't talk to me at all. 
I kept making excuses up for why my parents weren't here. Like they don't have enough money for trips out to Australia o they can't just get up and leave their jobs. All while I was thinking that Jake kept popping up into my head. I had all these domande like; why didn't he say anything to me? o why did he have that look in his eyes? Did I really die and did  Jake really bring me back to life? And then there was did my death and then did my coming back mess with Jakes mind? 
I fell asleep pondering  all of those questions. 


The successivo morning I woke up really early. I was getting out of the hospital. The doctors gave me crutches to use until I could put weight onto my ankle without it hurting. I thought Bec was coming to pick me up but Jake walked into my room. 
Hey, Bec and Gary got tied up in a meeting so they sent me to pick te up. Jake said. 
Oh okay. I said. 
Here are some clothes to change into. He said. 
Are te okay? I asked. 
Yeah, I guess. He responded. 
No your not. I can see it in your eyes. I told him. 
I'm fine. I don't know what your talking about. He said. 
Sorry, I usually can tell when people are upset. I said. 
I'll leave so te can change. He said. 
Something was wrong with him and I was going to find out but first I just had to find a way. I thought.  
I changed clothes and told Jake he could come back in. A nurse walked in pushing a wheelchair. She helped me get in it and then pushed me to the van. Jake had grabbed my back and my crutches. 
I can hold my stuff, so te don't have to carry it. I told Jake. 
It's fine. I've got it. He said. 
When we got to the furgone, van he opened my door for me and helped me get in and then he sat my stuff in the back of the van. 
So where is everyone else? I asked Jake. 
They are at school. He said. 
Oh okay. I said. 
Lila, Paige and Emma wanted me to tell te that they are going to share a room so te can get the rest te need. Jake told me. 
Oh. I said. 
When we got to the house Jake grabbed my back out of the back and then handed me my crutches. 
Thanks. I said. 
He was treating me different, like he didn't care about me. It was different than before. I got inside and Jake was walking downstairs in his swimsuit. 
Do te need anything? Jake asked. 
No, I'm fine. I said. 
Okay I'm going surfing. He detto and left. 
I hobbled up the stairs and went to my lonely room. There weren't any posters on the walls and my stuff was still pretty much in my suitcase. I went to the other girls bedroom and looked in on it. They had it so cutely decorated. I hopped back to my room and looked at the time it was 1:00pm. So I had a couple of hours before everyone would be home. Jake was pretty much ignoring me, my parents hadn't called me to see how I was and it was all starting to get to me. I could feel the tears filling up in my eyes. I didn't want them to escape but they started rolling down my face and I couldn't help it. I pulled my scrivania, reception chair up successivo to the window and sat there with my leg propped up on my bed. I could see Jake surfing from my room. I saw a bunch of other kids surfing too. They were trying aerials and they didn't have on a leash. I saw one kids board fly up into the air and land on Jakes head. I got up and ran towards the spiaggia as fast as I could which wasn't fast at all. When I got to the edge of the water Jake was paddling in. 
Are te okay? I asked 
Yeah, I think so. He said. 
How did te get down here so fast? He asked.I was looking out the window and saw what happened. I was worried that te were hurt. I said. 
I was putting all of my weight into my leg that wasn't hurting and I was trying tj slow my breathing down but my ribs were killing me. 
So te are okay? I asked 
Yeah. He said. 
Okay, well I'm going back up then. I said. 
Okay. He said. 
I couldnt believe that he hadn't offered to help me back up to the house. It took me forever to get back up to the house da myself and when I got back, I sat in the same chair And propped my leg up on my he'd like before. 
Now I was crying out of pain. I had really hurt my ankle when I jumped up and ran down to the spiaggia and then my ribs were hurting from running. I tried taking deep slow breathes but it wasn't working. I moved over to my letto and laid down to see if that help and it did some. 
When my breathing slowed down, I got up and went to the cucina to get some ice for my ankle and ribs. 
When I walked into the kitchen, Jake was just sitting at the tavolo looking down. I saw a tear drop onto the table. 
Jake-I detto but I couldn't finish because he got up and let the room. 
Me being the kind of person who cares about how people feel, followed Jake. 
He stopped walking once he heard that I was following him. 
What do te want? He snapped at me while turning around to look at me. 
I just wanted to know why te were crying. I said. 
Go away and stop trying to pry into my life so much. He said. 
I'm sorry. I whispered. 
With all that detto I turned around and walked back to the cucina and grabbed some ice and headed for my room. 

Thanks anynomous for making me write again!!!! Please commento and/or like my story so I know who is all reading!!! Thanks!
posted by surfergal
That night me and Nathen talked all night, and not once did it attraversare, croce my mind again that Nathen from what I understood had imprinted on me. It did attraversare, croce my mind that Nathen never told me where he lived in La Push. It was sorta weird at first but then I totally thought about how he was always coming here, never had to be anywhere, he didn't have anywhere to live.
Once I finally thought about it I had to ask him if I was right but I didn't know how to come about it. I didn't want to be all weird o acuse him of something he wasn't. So I went to Carlisle, o I had that planned. That morning I had...
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When I woke up, Nathen was still da my side except this time his head was lying back on the chair. Everyone was still in the same posistion as they were when I woke up the last time except Edward and Bella were there. I was thinking to myself, I wonder if Nathen has even left and Then I looked at Edward and he shook his head no. Poor thing he must be exuasted everyone must be. This is what I was saying before how everyone had to worry about me. I was sad that this happened to me but I was glad that no one else would have to go through it, I mean like I could take the pain but someone else might...
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When I woke up I was lying in a hospital. Alice and jasper were sitting on a loveseat holding hands and Emmet was sitting in a chair and Rose was sitting in his lap and Esme was standing da the window with Carlisle. Nathen was sitting in a chair right beside my letto holding my hand with his head down like he was asleep. Everyone looked cena worried and then all of the sudden everything hit at once all the flashbacks of what happen a coue if days ago. Carlisle came over to my letto and ask;
Hey Addi, everything is gonna be okay. He said.
It feels like a truck hit me in my side. I told him.
Do...
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posted by surfergal
That morning I woke up and Nathen had left me a note saying:

Dear Addi,
Jacob is making us do some patrols. I'll meet te at school.
Love,
Nathen.
I thought it was so sweet. I looked over at my clock and it detto that it was 7 oclcok. I was running late again. I found some clothes and then pulled my hair into a ponytail, knowing that it would have to come done when I put on my helmet. I put on some mascarra and then headed downstairs to get something to drink. Edward had me a glass of sweet tè on the counter when I walked into the kitchen. Once I told everyone bye I walked into the box auto, garage and...
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rode for two più hours before stopping to get gas for my bike. I drove up into a gas station and pulled off my helmet, and shook out my hair. I found a credit card from Carlisle and Esme and a cell phone Alice had provided me with. I called Alice.
Hey, Alice. I said.
Hey Addi. Alice said.
I'm sorry, I couldn't take it any più and I didn't know what to do. I said.
I know, I saw it coming. There is a credit card in your your giacca with cellphone and your ipod. I figured te could use some Musica for the drive. She said.
Thanks so much and I'm sorry. I told her again.
Its ok, she said.
Well...
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posted by surfergal
Sam's story chapter 3 

Nick and I talked for a little bit on the spiaggia and then he kissed me. 
I'm sorry Nick, but I don't know te really well. I told him. 
Oh, come on te know me enough to make out. He said. 
No, I don't. I said. 
He just pulled my face closer and started baciare me. 
Nick! Stop. I said. 
He continued trying to baciare me and then he push me back and I fell backwards, I was now lying on the sand with Nick kissig me più than ever. I tried pushing him off but he was too strong for me. I yelled stop again and that's when I heard Oakley's voice. 
Oakley pulled Nick off of me and...
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posted by surfergal
I layed on the deck for about ten minuti until I couldn't take it anymore, I had to see the beach. I got down da myself from the ladder. I went and put on a t-shirt and shorts and called Oakley to see if he would answer his phone. He did. I was lucky. 
Hey Oak. Can te come pick me up and take me to the beach? I ask him. 
Yeah sure. I'll be there soon. He said. 
Cool thanks. Bye. I said. 
I went and told mom and dad that Oakley was taking me to the beach. Dad told me not to get my cast wet and not to get any sand down in it. I detto I wouldn't and I figured that would be hard to do but I didn't...
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posted by surfergal
It seemed forever sinse we had left the house and I was scared to death. It got cold really faast and it was beginning to thunder storm. We were walking now, well I wasn't Emmet was told apperently that I needed to be carried. I so didn't want to be carried, Emmet was kinda of cold to tell te the truth.
Emmet, can I walk. I ask.
No, te will leave your scent on where te are walking. Emmet had told me.
Oh, can I have jacket? I'm sorta freezing. I said.
Yeah,Emmet detto while Rose handed him another sweartshirt for me.
Nathen came out of the woods from infront of us and ask:
Do te want me to...
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posted by surfergal
Rose and I talked for the longest and then Alice came in and Alice detto that the guy I had met on the spiaggia was going to be at school tomorrow. I got so nervous, I hardly knew this guy and I was liking him already. We picked my outfit out and then Rose told me how she was going to do my make-up and hair for tomorrow. I then had a thought about how it was goi g to look I de I took off my helmet. We thought the best ways to fix it and if it would mess up in anyway. If it did end up looking like help st hair call Rose and she would come down in a hurry to fix it. I was excited there were hardly...
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I surfed for 3 più hours and then I got out and went back to the hotel and took a shower.
Thanks Alice and Jasper that was great. I told them.
No problem, I'm glad te had fun. Jasper said.
Soon we were packing back up so we could head back to Forks. It was great going on spontanous trips. I sleep the whole way back, luckely I got to the divano before Alice o Jasper could but I think Alice saw that I wanted the couch. When I woke up we were landing, which ment I needed to look alive o at least look lik I hadn't sleept the whole 2 hours that it takes to gret back. I came back with an extra...
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posted by surfergal
The jet that they flew on to Cali.
I stayed at Max's house for a couple of weeks, I went home every so often. Max could pick stuff up now sinse his shoulders were heald now.. I was finally able to sleep in my own bed, instead of being on an air mattress. School was starting within three days and I had nothing to take. When I did get into the door of my house Alice came straight to me and ask:
Hey, Addi Do te want to go school shopping? Alice ask me.
Yeah totally. Let me go up stairs and take a doccia though frist. I detto
Okay, great. Alice said.
I loved going shopping Alice, she pick out...
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This story almost goes with my last one, Another Story but it is different. Addi and Nathen moved from Forks, Washington to Coconut grove Florida to keep Samantha and Oakley (their kids) sicuro, cassetta di sicurezza from vampires.  



My name is Samantha, I'm 16 years old and I live in a small town called Coconut Grove, Florida. My family and I moved here from Forks, Washington when we were just little kids. Meaning my twin brother and I. My twin's name is Oakley, he has really dark skin like my dad and blonde hair like my mom. My dad tells me that I look just like my mom, blond hair and blue eyes. My hair is natural...
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posted by surfergal
When I got to the hospital Carlisle met the ambulanza people people and me at the entrance andax went a different way than me. . Carlisle e-rayed my my shoulder. He ended up telling me that I had torn a ligament ing shoulder. Carlisle told me that he could call someone at home to come and pick me up but I told him no thanks that I was going to stick around and see if Max was okay. I ended up finding Max in his own room with an I.V hooked into him and oxygen mask on him. His shoulder was all wrapped up in a ace bandage and had an ice pack on it.
Oh Max, I'm so sorry. I said.
For what? He ask....
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posted by surfergal
When I woke up, I turned over and looked at my clock and it detto it was 6 am. I couldn't believe i woke up at six! I decided to get out of bed, I went over to my computer and checked the surf as I usually did. I saw that the waves are going to be great so I put on my bathingsuit and sweat pants and then a sweat camicia on. I grabbed my wetsuit out of the colset and went downstairs and ate breakfast. Alice was in the cucina when I walked down.
Hey Addi, Whatcha doing up this early? she ask.
Oh, just the usual surfing all day. I told her.
I ate and then left for the box auto, garage got my bike and board...
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posted by surfergal
Once I got up stairs and into my room I checked the surf segnala and it detto it was flat. Great what am I gonna do now. I can't stop thinking about Cody he kent so much to me and he was always there for and always protected me from everything from other vamps o just tripping and falling. He was always there to catch me and now he wasn't and I didn't know what to do. I went back to my letto and just lyed there thinking of Cody. I couldn't help it, we had been together ever sinse we meet. I guess the pull the Amore I felt toward him was only me. I feel asleep crying again. I hated when that would...
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posted by surfergal
I woke up and got out of letto and I stretched, I learned that swimming will make te sore. I jumped into the doccia and when I got out I didn't really feel like dressing up so I pulled on my oh so awesome sweat pants and a long sleeve t-shirt. I had to drive my motorcycle to school because once I got out of school I had to go to swim and do dryland. Dryland are where we workout on dry land for a little buit doing,push-ups and running. IT all helps with swimming and that was something I loved.

Weeks passed and Cody and I were close and I was doing great in swim until one night when I was in the...
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posted by surfergal
The successivo morning when I woke up I had a note on my cuscino successivo to me. It read:

Dear Addi,
I didn't want to wake you, but I will meet te at school. Amore you.
Cody

I got up after Leggere the note and went to take a doccia did the whole getting ready for school thing, a.k.a the usual teen girl morning routine. I got on my motorcycle and drove to school. The weather was finally getting warmer as in th 65 degree range. Once I got to school I saw Cody leaning againsted his car, his car. He looked so hot. He walked over to my bike and helped me off of it, which was so sweet of him.
"Thanks". I said....
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posted by surfergal
The following morning Alice woke me up for school. I was putting on perfume when cody knocked on my door.
"Come in". I said.
Hey, te Ready ? He ask
Yeah,hold on I have to brush my teeth I told him.
Ok. He detto as he went towards my letto to sit down. Once I was done brushing my teeth, Cody grabbed my bag and put me on his back and toted me down the stairs. My cruches were downstairs because Carlisle didn't want me to go up and down them. Cody help me out to his car, my was totalled sadly. When we got to school cody walked me to class except he didnt leave my side when we got there. It was still...
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We didn't talk much on the way to school. When we drove up to school before we got out of the car I ask. Is there something wrong Michae?? No. he said. ok. I said. I could tell he was lying. Michael walked me to my first class like always and then I watched him walk to his class. Once he was out of site, I went and called Alice.
Hey, Alice I said.
Hey Addi, why are te not in class? She ask.
i had to ask te something. I detto
Okay, well ask away. she said.
Is there something wrong o anything because me and Michael didnt talk mcuh at all this morning? i said.
No. thers nothing wrong. Alice...
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posted by surfergal
When i woke up in the morning Michael was lying successivo to me. We were lying on the divano in the sorta same spot. We were spooning and nothing happen I swear! I just layed there watching him sleep until I noticed what time it was which it was around 530am. Why is the sane world would I be up on a Sunday morning at 530am. I got up very carefully and went upstairs and grabbed another blanket.Alice was in my room when I walked in, I made a loud gasp for anyone to hear, but no one came. Alice, I detto te scared me to death! Oh Sorry she said. Why didnt te wake me up, why did yall leave us on the...
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