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 "Kill the Flaws!" - Garth
"Kill the Flaws!" - Garth
Okay..

As I remember there's one for Kate, Lilly and Humphrey as well.

But I don't know if these stories are still able to be found.
Keep in mind. I read these a long time ago.
Way before being a Brony, and discovering fanpop shortly after (though the reasons for each, are not at all connected).

I would be willing to review the messed up one that was for Humphrey.
He loses his sight, and than his SANITY.
As he kills Winston, and then, fully snaps.

But if I were to disguess a story about Humphrey snapping.
I would do that delated one, I think was called "cold wind blows"
it ties with ROCKET TO INSANITY, for being one of the sadest creepypastas I ever read, ever.
Plus, their both about a protagonist losing all forms of sanity.
For Humphrey, Kate dies, and he starts killing Eastern wolves.
Thinking their ALL as bad, as the to jerks that laughed about Kate's death..

But. Anyway.
Getting off track.

The one I'm here to disguess, isn't about Humphrey going evil, it's, GARTH going evil.

Now..

To be quite honest.
I never really cared for Garth.
After all. One of my most popolare stories, VENGEFUL SPIRIT, has Garth becomes possessed, and his body used to go graphically murder others.

But even 'I' didn't fully enjoy seeing him go insane, in the way he did.

Though. At least there's a reason.

Though it's a very stupid one.

Despite Lilly being his wife, he has zero respect for Omegas.
Calling them nothing più than 'flaws'. But eventually, he snaps, and murders one of those berry eating girls, Janice. Simply for being an omega.

From than on, Garth wasn't Garth. He was murderous monster.
Mostly shown when he murders a husband and wife in cold blood, than scratchs the children as 'reminder of him'

Eventually Garth took over the Southern pack, after killing all the omegas, they become his personal army. (something like that, I don't remember, okay!?)

Now.
There be those of te thinking
"Connor? How could te hate this story? It sounds awesome!"

I would agree with you.
If it weren't for the fucked up twist near the end,

For no reason at all.
Kate joins Garth.
She betrays everybody.

God!
Why did everybody hate Kate back than!?
Every story I read, had her become a cagna in some way o anouther.
Everyone cared about Lilly,
But why not Kate.
Nobody cared about Kate.
Obviously, they do NOW!
But. It was depressing at the time.

This always happens in these things.

It's Princess Twilight all over again.
Can't tell te how many times I had to deny invites club decated to stopping Twilight being princess.
Everybody was so over dramatic.
It's a fuckin show!
Why do te give a fuck, what happens to the fuckin characters!
Besides. Twilight is pretty as a alicorn.

Uhhh..

Anyway.
That's all I got.
Please leave responses.

And let me know if there's something te want me to review.
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Source: I found online ^^
posted by SentinelPrime89
Runt yawned loudly during the later hours of morning daylight, stretching his small paws out wide. Kate felt the mild pricks of her youngest's claws touching her upper left side. She spoke out to Humphrey to stop for a moment, then laid on her stomach into the snow.
"Morning, Runt." Kate detto while smiling.
She waited patiently for Runt to get off her back and stood back up. Making a short right turn, Kate lowered her head down and rubbed her chin against Runt's head. Runt hugged her in return and his stomach suddenly gurgled. "I'm hungry, Mom." He said.
Kate nodded and told her pup, "I know....
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posted by frankrivera
heres my last chapter giggity giggity goo. te dare schiaffo, smack me , te motherfucking basterd !!!!!! Eve yelld she smaked him back eve got on superiore, in alto of him chokeing him. She choked so hard she saw blood sqwerting in his mouth and then she stoped and got up humphrey was throwing up blood all over the tana, den . S-top eve please its all over now she gone theres nothing to do about it......its over . Humphrey detto lilly ran to humphrey giveing him a big hug and detto . Oh humphrey i thought te was going to die she said. im not im ok and can i tell te something ? He ask . Sure lily detto humphrey wisperd in...
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posted by frankrivera
its been 3 mounths sence kate died and it was lillys birthday she was turning ( i dont know and i dont care. ) she was depreesd the whole giorno so lillys perents decided to give her a gift it was a bracelet kate had got her when they where kids lilly remembered it like it was yesterday . Lilly hated the fact that her mom and dad kept bringing the whole got ran over stuff . Lillys perants was fighting the other giorno about kate . Why are doing this to me !!!! What have i ever done to you!! Wenston detto . Its the fact that te tell your kid your own fucking kid about kate every giorno eve detto . Please...
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When Mikey and Foxy Girl arrived at Justins house. Mikeys friend. they were staying for a week. ”dude they bombed your place and te survived in a fridge, dude te pulled off a damn Indiana Jones!” Justin detto laughing. ” I know but how else were we going to survive?” Mikey said. ”I don't know, but te can stay here as long as the cops don't track us down.” Justin said. ” sure, Foxy Girl since te cant pay, te have to serve me and my good friend here.” Mikey said. ” WHAT?! f@$# no!!” Foxy Girl shouted. ” ok, I guess we will kick te out!” Justin said. Foxy Girl was...
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Summary: Three years have passed since Humphrey ran away from Jasper after all the heartbreak, now he's a lone lupo living as if it all never happened thanks to a head injury. However he will soon realize just what he has forgotten when he gets an unknown visitor. Will he come to terms with the past that he lost, o will it end up just causing him to break and feel the hurt all over again?

Fragments of a Lost Life – TheChriZ1995

I keep having these strange flashes in my dreams lately, visions that at first seem like only a normal dream but for some reason feel so familiar. I see myself living...
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The Life of Cap            Chapter 22                Long time waiting P2 of 2

    Scene starts in western pack right after the attack on Kate, Humphrey, Garth, Lilly, and Hutch....

        “They’ve admitted to taking Carl They’ve killed three of our own and threatened us We’ll take Carl back and avenge are fallen comrades ” Kate announced as Garth did for his side. They had an uproar...
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posted by CODkiller14
Well this is my new series. I hope te like this when te see this [AN: with something in it] te can skip it but i'm just telling te if u add a song with it at the exact time it could be alike and be cool. I hope te like it and enjoy.
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WARNING: Please Read Ratings:
Violent: 2/4
Sex: 1.5/4
Language: 3/4
Enjoy

Pre-Story:
POV: James
The name is James. Im 19, and what do I do? Well I'm an assassin.
I kill people who hurts Friends o Family, I Steal a lot of things, Wear a Cloth on me to protect my face, Spike Collar. Black pelliccia but my face, chest to my waste...
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Alright, I'm posting this chapter of "Shadow's Life" on this account because for some reason, fanpop didn't like them on that one... And they in no way disturb the "Term of Service" and are completely appropriate...

It was only a few days after that an Alpha found me,"It's time for Alpha School kid" was his only words, he walked out of the tana, den and I followed. I wasn't sure what was going to happen at Alpha school but I wasn't sure it would be fun... Soon we came to a small clearing within the forest, there were fourteen people lined up, and I made fifteen. I quickly got in the line and waited...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Episode 3: Battles

Nick: *walking around with Garth and Lilly*

Lilly: *sees a Bench* What is that?

Nick: Thats a Bench.

Lilly: What does it do?

Nick: te sit on it when your tired.

Lilly: Oh, thats kind of cool.

Astra: Where to first?

Nick: We have to get H Pieces so that i can free Kate and Humphrey.

Astra: *sees a guy with big glasses eying Lilly*

Kricke: Yo! Can i have one of your Dogs?

Nick: These are Wolves, and why do te want one?

Kricke: For Dis...i mean for my Mas...i mean for a Pet.

Nick: Ummmmm no

Kricke: How about we make a Wager?

Lilly: Wager?

Nick: Like a Bet.

Kricke: We do a VR Battle, and who...
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posted by ztarx5
ciao everyone. Here is a new story call The War.
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WARNING: Please Read Rating
Violence: 1/3
Sex: 0/3
Language: 1/3

Ch1 A New lupo in Town

First POV: Stars

5:30 AM
It was a cool night, sleeping outside in the forest. I was a lone wolf, didn't have a relationship, mate, nothing. Just (as they say) Me, Myself and I. It was raining a little bit but kept me cool. Then a lighting shot out from the sky and thunder came out of nowhere and made a loud noise. 'BLAM!' I woke up. "Holy Shit!" Then I just walk around and find Cibo and water for the day. Then voices started around...
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When humphery got up from being thrown da an unknown force he sees kats in her werewolf form he also sees black smoke coming out of a other animal and go into kate." that is what is making her change". he then charged wright to the animal, but all the other animali went in front of him to stop him. Humphery then changes into his werewolf form and slams the animali out of the way, like the tank from the X-Box game Left 4 Dead. He charges to the guy and slams him so hard that makes him fly and hit a rock 5 feet away.
he then sees kate change into her normal self and falls on the ground with a thud. Humphery changes to normal and runs to kate and picks her up in his paws and starts running for his life away from the horrible place and to never return.
Sorry short this all I had so this is the end of chapter 4. Chapter 5 coming soon
continuing the coversation between kate and humphery in the empty den."yes humphery I have what te have"."why did te never tell me"."why didnt te tell me".kate said."the successivo thing that happened they both just fell on the ground and were out cold, no one nows how. When they woke up they were in some kind of ritual, there were about 120 animali around them and some guy was speaking in german: ra-tha-ra-tha-raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! every animal there started yelling. Humphery and kate started to fell wired in there bodies. then kate's eyes started to change color to black. she then collasped onto the ground, humphery then started to run to kate but some kind of fource made humphery fly a few feet away. Kate started to speak in german then started to sit up. She then started saying ra-tha-ra-tha and when they got to the raa kates body changed into the werewolf for ever
END OF CHAPTER 3
One night humphery was in his tana, den laying down with kate cuddling up against him asleep. Humphery got up slowly not to wake kate. He got up and walked outside and started walking away from the cave to garths and lillys den.when he got there he went in side and awoke garth that was asleep with lilly and told him to do him a favor. Garth agreed, so they both walked out side and went into the forest,"were are we going?".garth said."deep into the woods"."whats the favor"."you'll see". After about 10 minuti of walking humphery and garth come to a clearing. "so whats the fav"---before he can finish...
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"did this had to do with that spider? did it lend its abilitys to me? hmm" humphrey thought, then remembered. "Some of the spiders can not be touched, cause thier being tested." humphrey remembered. "maybe the ragno had some chemical o radio active." humphrey keeps thinking about it. "hmm, i should go back to my house." humphrey said.

11:00 at night.

"yes, it works i call it 'web shooters' these device allows me to make webs, abserve!" humphrey thought. he put on the device and put it on his paw, he made a web and made a swing set. humphrey gets on it. "hmm... i should test my abilitys in...
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Chapter 1: Log-sledding
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One giorno in Jasper Park, Canada, two wolves, one of them a slender female with oro fur, brown eyes, a creamy face and legs, and a white underbelly, and the other a thin male with gray fur, a black mane and tail, blue eyes, and a silver underbelly and legs, are seen at the superiore, in alto of a hill, pushing a log toward the slope.

"You ready for this Kate?" the gray lupo says.

"Sure I am, Humphrey, I've done this about 5 times now." The oro one replies.

"Okay," Humphrey says as he gets in the log with Kate following "Here we go!"

Humphrey pushes the log down the slope of the...
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