For Authors Club
New Post
Explore Fanpop
posted by StarPotterRings
This is the plot of my book. I want all criticism, don't spare my feelings. Give me things I can improve on.

A land of peace for many years. A land in which all races keep to themselves, and hate in silence. A land that will be changed forever. For men, whom had not been there in many a century, have returned. Unknowingly bringing an ancient evil. Now our hero must fight for what he loves, but it might just be his feelings that devour him.....

So essentially this story is about a land in which all the races live in hatred, but have a silent agreement not to bring war it. Men came back and brought bad guys. And our hero has to fight