My song-writing "lyrics" ..please read and tell me what u think!

Steady steps and fast heartbeats
look around, there's nothing but empty seats
trying to hold on , to stand on my feet

it's getting dark, closer to the edge
broken hearts, on a broken bridge
where we are, is closer to the end

Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

New hope, with every prayer
From the ones who really care
to someone's fighting somewhere

The World Will BE Better Than Before
When We Create Amore Not War
When We Realize What We're Fighting For


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

I Just Wanna Go Back To The Time
When Everything Was Fine
When There Was nothing Called Mine
It Was All Ours


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

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woooowwww preettttyyyy goooddd
-samantha- posted più di un anno fa
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Thaaank Yooou Sooo Muuuch :D
smsooom posted più di un anno fa
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Would te guys like me to post another song?
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jessy_an said:
Pretty nice I am guessing it's about war,Great subject, In third stanza why did te just wrote 4 lines? There should be also 6? I would like to listen this lyrics te know a lyrics doesn't seem a song until listener listens the tune so I would like to hear it while I was Leggere that it was like I'm Leggere a poem.
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Yeah, it's about war :) Because that was the bridge ;) Hopefully, someday I'll record it maybe :) and I'll post it here for sure
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Darkus-eliox said:
Beautiful Amore it best song ever I would Amore it if u sang it and postato it here
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Thaank te so much :D :D As soon as I record it, someday!
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joanzark said:
Oh it is wonderful!!!! Best song i've seen in fanpop! You've got a huge talent and a big soul!!! What kind of Musica te listen to?
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Thank te so much :D :D :D :D :D ADELE, Avril Lavigne. MIKA, Queen, Taylor veloce, swift
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Oh good! Perfect...!
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:)
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Yuzuri said:
Awesome! Whats the title? Its a really good one!
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Thanks! Closer To Goodbye :) Thanks again!
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celia-chan said:
it's Awesome! (y)
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Thanks :D
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