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I Know it Sucks Dx but What Do te Think?

Of these lyrics I wrote, obviously they aren't done yet but I just want to know if it's still good. I think it sucks because I cannot write lyrics for my life.

"It's time to face the destiny. just stand in time, release the flames. Every giorno te just see the sights,

Chorus

Stand tall, stand now and see what we're fighting for. Die now, die trying. We all just live in big shame, incomplete history. Listen to those who care."

16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa

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BlondLionEzel said:

Nice :)

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THank te :)

16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa

sieluvzsoul said:

Very good

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thanks! :)

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pokemonfan909 said:

Its nice. Why do te think it sucks?

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Because I never wrote a song before and I know I suck at it

16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa

te don't....

pokemonfan909 posted più di un anno fa

misscrazel said:

It's great, if te want any tips on songwriting message me. ^-^

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Alright will do ^^

16falloutboy posted più di un anno fa

True-Finn-Fan said:

i can dig it... te know what's so weird? i wrote a song earlier today for a completely different reason and was just thinking "somebodies gonna post something and mostra me up" XD

coincidences.

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