A peacefull lake scene apears.Everything looks so calm and peacefull.Suddenly,the scene,now revealed as a painting,is torn away da a large looking axe.Chris comes through ,throws the axe somewhere to his left,and looks at the camera.
Chris:Hi!As te can remember,we've had so many fun seasons of Total Drama,but this time around,we're taking a HUGE turn!Brace yourself,and welcome to Total...Drama...Paranormal!
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Theme song plays
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Chris and Chef come into the scene,which has changed into a very ragged looking terain,featuring a series of abandoned metal tool sheds,arguing.
Chef:I thought we agreed no to that name!
Chris:Well,what other name goes for something like this?!
Chef:Well...um...*thinks for a second* How about Believers?
Chris:What?
Chef:Total Drama Believers!
Chris:*sigh*Fine,we'll go for your idea.*faces the screen*Slight Name Change,it's now Total Drama Believers because Mr.Fussy pants has to have his way.
Chris pouted slighty,then continued walking until he stops at what looks to be a poorly made dirt road.Chef walked up behind him and gave him a weird look.
Chef:How exactly they' gonna get here?
Chris:Well,we couldn't exactly afford anything else,sooooomtheir coming da horse!
Chef:Right.And what are we gonna do with the horses?
Chris:......They go back to the trainer walking them here.
Chef:Damn
Chris gives Chef a startled look,then turns the other direction when he hears a noise.
Chris:Ah,here they are!
A line of cavalli stop and someone jumps off.
Chris:Alex,welcome dude!
Alex:Hey!So...uh,the others?
Chris:You were first dude
Alex:Right,I know this,but when are they going to get off?
Chris:Right now!Hey Elita!
Elita blushes,and looks another way
Elita:H-hi.
Chris:Yeah...Storm!Mizzie!Hey!
Storm glares at him.
Mizzie:Hi!
Chris:..Kay..Akward...Jacob!How's it going,dude!
Jacob:Hiya!
Chris:Bree!Lucy!What's up!
Lucy:Nothing.
Chris:...Ugh..Well heres-
Chris is inturupted da three boys arguing.
Boy 1:I detto I wanted to get off first!
Boy 2:It doesn't matter who gets off first,get get your culo off!
Boy 3:Just hurry up!My vodka's getting warm!
Chris:Yeahh...Zatch,Leeroy,and Mr.Fluffykins!You ruined your own Introductions!
Zatch:Sorry.
Leeroy:I told te to get off!
Leeroy spoke in a british accent,that made him sound way più sophisticated than Zatch
Chris:Yeah...Tak!Welcome!
Tak:Yeah...hi...
Chris:...Why is everything so akward here,people!Come on!
Alex:Well,I don't know,maybe because you've gathered a bunch of -
Chris:Up-ba-p-pp!Shh!!!The audiance doesn't know yet!
Storm:Does anybody even watch this show?!
Chris:Yes!!!!Anyways,last,and hopefully least,are Buddy and Buster!
No one got off.
Chris:I detto BUDDY AND BUSTER!
Buster:Hold on,dude!Buddy fell asleep,and I can't wake him up!
Chris gave them a dirty look,and pulled out a blow horn.
Chris:Leave it to me.
Chris walks up to the horse Buddy's on,and the blow horn goes off.
Buddy:Gah!I'm awake!I'm awake!
Zatch,Mr.Fluffykins,and Buster all laugh at him while the others give them weird looks.
Bree:Um...kay?
Chris:Well,now that everyone's here,it's time for a tour!
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To be continued :3
Chris:Hi!As te can remember,we've had so many fun seasons of Total Drama,but this time around,we're taking a HUGE turn!Brace yourself,and welcome to Total...Drama...Paranormal!
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Theme song plays
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Chris and Chef come into the scene,which has changed into a very ragged looking terain,featuring a series of abandoned metal tool sheds,arguing.
Chef:I thought we agreed no to that name!
Chris:Well,what other name goes for something like this?!
Chef:Well...um...*thinks for a second* How about Believers?
Chris:What?
Chef:Total Drama Believers!
Chris:*sigh*Fine,we'll go for your idea.*faces the screen*Slight Name Change,it's now Total Drama Believers because Mr.Fussy pants has to have his way.
Chris pouted slighty,then continued walking until he stops at what looks to be a poorly made dirt road.Chef walked up behind him and gave him a weird look.
Chef:How exactly they' gonna get here?
Chris:Well,we couldn't exactly afford anything else,sooooomtheir coming da horse!
Chef:Right.And what are we gonna do with the horses?
Chris:......They go back to the trainer walking them here.
Chef:Damn
Chris gives Chef a startled look,then turns the other direction when he hears a noise.
Chris:Ah,here they are!
A line of cavalli stop and someone jumps off.
Chris:Alex,welcome dude!
Alex:Hey!So...uh,the others?
Chris:You were first dude
Alex:Right,I know this,but when are they going to get off?
Chris:Right now!Hey Elita!
Elita blushes,and looks another way
Elita:H-hi.
Chris:Yeah...Storm!Mizzie!Hey!
Storm glares at him.
Mizzie:Hi!
Chris:..Kay..Akward...Jacob!How's it going,dude!
Jacob:Hiya!
Chris:Bree!Lucy!What's up!
Lucy:Nothing.
Chris:...Ugh..Well heres-
Chris is inturupted da three boys arguing.
Boy 1:I detto I wanted to get off first!
Boy 2:It doesn't matter who gets off first,get get your culo off!
Boy 3:Just hurry up!My vodka's getting warm!
Chris:Yeahh...Zatch,Leeroy,and Mr.Fluffykins!You ruined your own Introductions!
Zatch:Sorry.
Leeroy:I told te to get off!
Leeroy spoke in a british accent,that made him sound way più sophisticated than Zatch
Chris:Yeah...Tak!Welcome!
Tak:Yeah...hi...
Chris:...Why is everything so akward here,people!Come on!
Alex:Well,I don't know,maybe because you've gathered a bunch of -
Chris:Up-ba-p-pp!Shh!!!The audiance doesn't know yet!
Storm:Does anybody even watch this show?!
Chris:Yes!!!!Anyways,last,and hopefully least,are Buddy and Buster!
No one got off.
Chris:I detto BUDDY AND BUSTER!
Buster:Hold on,dude!Buddy fell asleep,and I can't wake him up!
Chris gave them a dirty look,and pulled out a blow horn.
Chris:Leave it to me.
Chris walks up to the horse Buddy's on,and the blow horn goes off.
Buddy:Gah!I'm awake!I'm awake!
Zatch,Mr.Fluffykins,and Buster all laugh at him while the others give them weird looks.
Bree:Um...kay?
Chris:Well,now that everyone's here,it's time for a tour!
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To be continued :3
Duncans POV:
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Did te want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell te this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell te its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
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Did te want some thing princess?
Courtneys POV:
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YEs Duncan I dont know how to tell te this but...... Im pregnent but...... its not your baby.
Duncans POV:
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Whos is it I mean who would do this to you?
Courtneys POV:
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Its.............I cant tell te its to painfull he raped me a I was powerless Im so sorry Duncan please forgive me it was a mistake.....
Hello everyone. I'm going to rewrite TDR because i don't like how they are adding so many new characters. well anyways since we don't know where TDR will take place i decided to have it take place at a Roller coaster/fair/circus type thing called Mclain Land. The returning cast will be
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if te can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please commento with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if te like to write commento me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank te and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would Amore it if one of te could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK te SOOOO MUCH!
Heather
Alejandro
Cody
Zeke
Dj
Izzy
Gwen
Tyler
Owen
Trent
Duncan
Bridgette
Geoff
Lindsay
Noah
Sierra
Beth
Courtney
LeShawna
and 2 new "Campers"
also i will need a very good artist to draw pics for this story. so if te can draw (and i mean VERY VERY well then please commento with some of your work) also i might need a few people to come up with some dialgue, so if te like to write commento me about that. And this is not a post your OC thing, and i dont need challenge ideas i already came up with them. Thank te and i would like an artist as soon as possible and i would Amore it if one of te could get a hold of Escorte on deviantart! THANK te SOOOO MUCH!
I loved Total Drama Island when it first came on "Cartoon Network", I loved how everyone had a unique personality, how Chris was cruel to the campers, and I thought the mostra had good character and relationship development.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the mostra all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.
But then, Total Drama Action premered, and I was not that Impressed. Any character development that had occured, was erased from the mostra all together, The contestants became annoying as hell(especially Geoff and Trent), And all the good couples were destroyed(but I don't like the GwenXTrent couple at all). The Geoff and Bridget couple was just awful, she needs to ditch him and go with DJ, and I thought that "Teletoon" and "Fresh Tv" had decided to get rid of any words like crap and screwed so there wouldn't be so many edits.
I wont even mention the abomonation that is Total Drama World Tour. They shouldn't sing at all. But I will say one thing about the two new contestants, they were created to annoy the hell out of everyone.