I decided that this series will be diviso, spalato into different points of view. So, here we go!! If te see something like this, *sadness-Jacob,that's the emotion that someone is feeling and Jasper is sensing.
Renesmee had left to France this morning, and I think that everyone would miss her cheerful, happy go lucky demeanor. I know I would, and I could sense that Jacob would.
*sadness-Jacob* The waves of sadness coming off Jacob was almost unbearable. He was really, really upset. I went over to talk to him. But before, I tweaked his emotions a bit. I made him feel like this was a good opportunity for Renesmee, and that she wouldn't leave him. But I managed to slip up, I didn't call her Nessie. Jacob whirled round and glared at me.
"Jasper, did te do that?"
*embarrassment- Jasper* "Yeah. Your emotions were putting a damper on everybody, Jacob. And anyway, Renesmee will be back soon. It's not the end of the world."
"I guess you're right. Just please don go messing with my emotions again, it still scares the crap out of me that te can do that."
I laughed, and it seemed to cheer up Jacob. After our little conversation, we ended up dancing with Alice and Rosalie, and my eyes may have deceived me, but I'm sure that Jacob held Rosalie's hand.
*amusement- Rosalie* "Jacob, are you..." she was cut off but Jacob's sudden feeling of embarrassment and shame.
*embarrassment, shame- Jacob* "Sorry, Rose, te just dance in the same way that Nessie does...." he trailed off. I knew better than to tweak his emotions. Emmett ended up dancing with us too. That was a miserable failure. Emmett, the dancing bear, Alice, the pixie, Rosalie, the sleepless beauty, Edwqrd, Prince Charming, Jacob, the wolf, Bella, the heroine, and myself, the mind reader. We should be in a fantasy novel.
Renesmee had left to France this morning, and I think that everyone would miss her cheerful, happy go lucky demeanor. I know I would, and I could sense that Jacob would.
*sadness-Jacob* The waves of sadness coming off Jacob was almost unbearable. He was really, really upset. I went over to talk to him. But before, I tweaked his emotions a bit. I made him feel like this was a good opportunity for Renesmee, and that she wouldn't leave him. But I managed to slip up, I didn't call her Nessie. Jacob whirled round and glared at me.
"Jasper, did te do that?"
*embarrassment- Jasper* "Yeah. Your emotions were putting a damper on everybody, Jacob. And anyway, Renesmee will be back soon. It's not the end of the world."
"I guess you're right. Just please don go messing with my emotions again, it still scares the crap out of me that te can do that."
I laughed, and it seemed to cheer up Jacob. After our little conversation, we ended up dancing with Alice and Rosalie, and my eyes may have deceived me, but I'm sure that Jacob held Rosalie's hand.
*amusement- Rosalie* "Jacob, are you..." she was cut off but Jacob's sudden feeling of embarrassment and shame.
*embarrassment, shame- Jacob* "Sorry, Rose, te just dance in the same way that Nessie does...." he trailed off. I knew better than to tweak his emotions. Emmett ended up dancing with us too. That was a miserable failure. Emmett, the dancing bear, Alice, the pixie, Rosalie, the sleepless beauty, Edwqrd, Prince Charming, Jacob, the wolf, Bella, the heroine, and myself, the mind reader. We should be in a fantasy novel.
Hi everyone, I'm back. I just thought I would leave a little note for everyone about my story.... so ok this wasn't my best work. though I'm glad that te read it, I gives me a feeling of appreciation thank you.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the più mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titolo of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope te will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope te enjoy this,see ya.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the più mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The titolo of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope te will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope te enjoy this,see ya.
Hi!
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If te were/are interested I have news.
If te are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if te HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If te were/are interested I have news.
If te are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if te HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)