i wasn't planning on putting this up yet, but what can i say, te persuaded me lol
i hope te like it, ive tried using a larger vocabulary so its sounds più like Edward.
im not sure when the successivo one will be up, ive got kinda a break from homework, but i have a HUGE SAT (school assesed task) coming up and it is going to take loads of time, so i'll do this when i can.
im not sure when to end this story and im not sure if i want to, but unless i keep going for eclipse and breaking dawn too i think i'll be stopping soon.
if you've got any idea about where i should stop leave it in comments. thnx :)
She was my one true love, my life, my soul.
Her breathing was deep end even and her dreams seemed serene and peaceful, a slight smile raising the corner of her mouth, ever so slightly. Time seemed to sposta in fast forward, speeding up the journey back to her house, but instead I wanted it to slow down, prolong my time with her.
She shifted slightly in my arms, her smile becoming più pronounced. For the millionth time I wanted to know what she was dreaming about, what she thinking. Was she dreaming of me? Probably not. It doesn’t look like she’s having a nightmare, I thought bitterly.
The successivo time I looked up we were almost halfway there. I wanted us to stop driving, but I knew it wouldn’t be right. Bella needed to get home and sleep. It was already selfish enough of me to wish for più time. I didn’t deserve it.
Pain extended through me, through my cold, still heart. She was too good for me, too pure, too kind. I knew I should leave her the first chance I got, but I couldn’t. Firstly I wouldn’t put Bella through that kind of pain again. If I had known...
I flinched. I would never forgive myself for leaving her. Not if I lived for all eternity. I looked down at Bella’s calm face, and the secondo reason I could not leave her held me strong. I couldn’t leave her because I wasn’t strong enough to. I cringed at the very thought.
I sighed very quietly. Neither Rosalie nor Emmet heard me, as the sound was drowned out da the gentle thrum of the engine.
I shouldn’t be wasting my last precious moments with Bella thinking such foolish thoughts. It was not helpful to anyone.
minuti passed but they felt like seconds. I was dreading the time when I would have to leave her. I was sure she wouldn’t want me to stay with her. I was utterly convinced that she didn’t Amore me anymore, not after what I put her through. I still managed to hold on to a little hope. It was the only thing keeping me together.
I was still wrapped up in my thoughts when the car slowed. I looked up, shocked. We were at Bella’s house already.
I hesitated for a diviso, spalato second. I didn’t want to leave her, but I knew I didn’t have a choice. I lifted her gently out of the car. A crease appeared between her brows, and I could see she was waking up.
I was so engrossed in Bella’s face that I didn’t notice Charlie until his loud and rather angry voice reached my ears.
“Bella!” he shouted front the front door.
“Charlie.” Bella breathed, shaking her head slowly and trying to wake up.
“Shh,” I whispered. There was no need for her to wake up. “It’s okay; you’re home and safe. Just sleep.” I reassured her.
“I can’t believe te have the nerve to mostra your face here.” Charlie thundered. I caught the anger in his thoughts and the tail end of something else. Relief?
“Stop it, Dad.” Bella groaned. I was the only one that heard her however, and Charlie yelled again.
“What’s wrong with her?” Charlie roared.
“She’s just very tired, Charlie,” I assured him quietly, soothingly. “Please just let her rest.”
Charlie was too furious to even listen to what I said. I understood perfectly.
“Don’t tell me what to do! Give her to me.” He demanded. “Get your hands off her!”
I tried to comply but Bella clung on to my camicia with stubborn, obstinate fingers.
“Cut it out, Dad.” Bella muttered with più volume. Charlie was standing close enough to hear her this time. Her eyes opened and she struggled to focus.
“Be mad with me.” She finished, her mouth setting in a tight, stubborn line. Her eyes flickered up to the sky. It was so cloudy it was hard to guess the time of day. At least it wasn’t raining.
“You bet I will be.” Charlie promised, but there was still relief in his thoughts. “Get inside.” He muttered, rage clear on his face.
“Kay. Let me down.” She sighed.
hope te like it and please comment. i Amore to hear what te guys think :)
i hope te like it, ive tried using a larger vocabulary so its sounds più like Edward.
im not sure when the successivo one will be up, ive got kinda a break from homework, but i have a HUGE SAT (school assesed task) coming up and it is going to take loads of time, so i'll do this when i can.
im not sure when to end this story and im not sure if i want to, but unless i keep going for eclipse and breaking dawn too i think i'll be stopping soon.
if you've got any idea about where i should stop leave it in comments. thnx :)
She was my one true love, my life, my soul.
Her breathing was deep end even and her dreams seemed serene and peaceful, a slight smile raising the corner of her mouth, ever so slightly. Time seemed to sposta in fast forward, speeding up the journey back to her house, but instead I wanted it to slow down, prolong my time with her.
She shifted slightly in my arms, her smile becoming più pronounced. For the millionth time I wanted to know what she was dreaming about, what she thinking. Was she dreaming of me? Probably not. It doesn’t look like she’s having a nightmare, I thought bitterly.
The successivo time I looked up we were almost halfway there. I wanted us to stop driving, but I knew it wouldn’t be right. Bella needed to get home and sleep. It was already selfish enough of me to wish for più time. I didn’t deserve it.
Pain extended through me, through my cold, still heart. She was too good for me, too pure, too kind. I knew I should leave her the first chance I got, but I couldn’t. Firstly I wouldn’t put Bella through that kind of pain again. If I had known...
I flinched. I would never forgive myself for leaving her. Not if I lived for all eternity. I looked down at Bella’s calm face, and the secondo reason I could not leave her held me strong. I couldn’t leave her because I wasn’t strong enough to. I cringed at the very thought.
I sighed very quietly. Neither Rosalie nor Emmet heard me, as the sound was drowned out da the gentle thrum of the engine.
I shouldn’t be wasting my last precious moments with Bella thinking such foolish thoughts. It was not helpful to anyone.
minuti passed but they felt like seconds. I was dreading the time when I would have to leave her. I was sure she wouldn’t want me to stay with her. I was utterly convinced that she didn’t Amore me anymore, not after what I put her through. I still managed to hold on to a little hope. It was the only thing keeping me together.
I was still wrapped up in my thoughts when the car slowed. I looked up, shocked. We were at Bella’s house already.
I hesitated for a diviso, spalato second. I didn’t want to leave her, but I knew I didn’t have a choice. I lifted her gently out of the car. A crease appeared between her brows, and I could see she was waking up.
I was so engrossed in Bella’s face that I didn’t notice Charlie until his loud and rather angry voice reached my ears.
“Bella!” he shouted front the front door.
“Charlie.” Bella breathed, shaking her head slowly and trying to wake up.
“Shh,” I whispered. There was no need for her to wake up. “It’s okay; you’re home and safe. Just sleep.” I reassured her.
“I can’t believe te have the nerve to mostra your face here.” Charlie thundered. I caught the anger in his thoughts and the tail end of something else. Relief?
“Stop it, Dad.” Bella groaned. I was the only one that heard her however, and Charlie yelled again.
“What’s wrong with her?” Charlie roared.
“She’s just very tired, Charlie,” I assured him quietly, soothingly. “Please just let her rest.”
Charlie was too furious to even listen to what I said. I understood perfectly.
“Don’t tell me what to do! Give her to me.” He demanded. “Get your hands off her!”
I tried to comply but Bella clung on to my camicia with stubborn, obstinate fingers.
“Cut it out, Dad.” Bella muttered with più volume. Charlie was standing close enough to hear her this time. Her eyes opened and she struggled to focus.
“Be mad with me.” She finished, her mouth setting in a tight, stubborn line. Her eyes flickered up to the sky. It was so cloudy it was hard to guess the time of day. At least it wasn’t raining.
“You bet I will be.” Charlie promised, but there was still relief in his thoughts. “Get inside.” He muttered, rage clear on his face.
“Kay. Let me down.” She sighed.
hope te like it and please comment. i Amore to hear what te guys think :)
1.Erin is part of the Volturi, but she is half human-Spoiler!
2.not everything will be exactly like the books,it will be dramatized a little.
3.Erin is my best friend in real life, so I try to make her as realistic as possible.
4.This one is più about me:I don't like cussing in my stories because I don't cuss a lot in real life, but it makes my stories funnier,agree?
5.We might make a movie out of this when we are done-Spoiler!
6.Erin was telling me about one of her friends, Danie, and she might be in a few chapters-Spoiler!
7.Erin tries to kill Alice later in the story-Spoiler!
The 22-year-old Twilight stella, star recently sat down with E! Online and dished on the upcoming film and what exactly he thought was weird about it all. “Sometimes te feel uncomfortable Leggere this thing [the book] and I think a lot of people would feel that it is…and in the same way it’s kind of voyeuristic. It’s kind of like a sick pleasure…It’s really honest, really, really honest and that’s kind of what’s weird about it.”
OK EVERYONE IS LIKE TOTALLY HEAD OVER HEALS FOR EDWARD AND WHEN ALL COMES DOWN TO THE FACTS EDWARD JUST LEFT HER WITHOUTH THE APPROPRATE GOODBYE. JACOB WHOS WAS THERE FOR HER ALL THOSES MONTHS EDWARD WAS GONE. THE PROTECTED HER AND LET HER IN ON HIS WEREWOLF SECRET WHILE MAINTAINIGN A REALATIONSHIP WITH HER EVEN THOUGH HIS lupo PACHK detto NO. THATS TELLS ALOT ABOUT WHAT KIND OF FRIEND JACOB IS AND THEN OUT OF NOWHERE EDWARD COMES BACK INTO HER LIFE.WAT A LOOSER. AND THEN BECAUSE OF THE TREATY ITS LIEK EDWARD EXPECTS BELLA TO JUST STOP BEING JACOBS FRIEND. EDWARD JUST NEEDS TO TRUST BELLA I MEAN WATS CHANGES NOW SHES KNOWN HIS SECRET SINCE BEFORE EDWARD CAME BACK AND THEN SOME.
ciao ladies! Ok, I wrote this the other giorno while I was at work. I had my head down on the desk, sat up, wrote it, and put my head back down. lol I ask that te don't use it without my permission, as it is my original work. But here is a little poem I wrote, that I thought te Twilight obsessed fan might like. I kind of pictured Edward after I wrote it and reread it. There are lots of people (including people who te might be dating right now) that this can apply to. Enjoy and tell me what te think!
Young girls think of Amore and picture a prince.
Women, who have loved and been hurt see not a prince but the truth.
Just a man, imperfect and unsure.
But it's those memories of Prince Charming that make them keep loving, even without hope.
Taleah Elizabeth Cox
April 12,2008
Young girls think of Amore and picture a prince.
Women, who have loved and been hurt see not a prince but the truth.
Just a man, imperfect and unsure.
But it's those memories of Prince Charming that make them keep loving, even without hope.
Taleah Elizabeth Cox
April 12,2008