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Jasper’s POV
“I don’t know Alice” I detto for about the thousandth time this morning. “You could go hunt again if it makes te feel better?” I shook my head but smiled at her. I had been hunting about four times in the last two days, so if she thought I was going hunting again now, she had another thought coming. “I don’t get it Jazz. Why are te so worried?”I sighed. “This will be my first time of going through school. It’s a little different to the rest of the family who have gone through before. I’m not sure I have the self restraint to...” Her small hands covered my mouth. “Now te listen to me Jasper Hale. te will be fine and don’t te think any different.”She removed her hands from my lips placing them on her tiny hips. “Yes ma’am.” I detto ducking my head. She smiled and turned back to look through the massive wardrobe, that was basically all hers, other than the small section at the back which belonged to me. I sat on the letto watching her graceful movements. She eventually decided on something to wear and then started dusting down our room which was spotless already. “On secondo thought maybe I will go hunting.” I laughed. We both knew that I wasn’t really going hunting, but just getting away from her overly tidiness. I walked past Emmett and Rosalie’s room to see Rose, brushing through her hair sighing to herself. Yes, Rosalie was very pretty, but she didn’t appeal too much to me now. “Morning Jasper” She said. Wow Rosalie, in a good mood, make the most of it, I thought to myself. “Morning Rosalie. Are te looking inoltrare, avanti to today?” I asked striking up small talk with her. “Its school. It was only Alice and Emmett who wanted to go. I’d rather stay at home. We follow the same routine, at school everyone regards us as weird, we come home, and we leave on ‘camping’ trips.” She detto making quotation marks in the air with her fingers. “Then we sposta places and Carlisle wants us to start in another school and it’s all the same again.” She scowled. I nodded. No doubt she was right, I had watched them all go before, including Alice, who had offered to stay with me, but she liked school, so I told her I was fine and basically shoved her out the front door every morning. “How about you?” She asked. “I really don’t know” I detto truthfully.
Emmett’s POV
I had just finished my favourite meal ever. Grizzly bear, I loved those things. I headed back towards the house, smiling to myself. I didn’t mind going back into school, I liked it. Especially some of the expressions the humans wore when they saw me. They would always stay clear of us, which was a shame because half of them couldn’t be that bad. “I can’t believe te and Alice talked us all into going to school” Edward called from where he was sat in his car. I laughed as he rolled his eyes at me.
Jasper’s POV
“I don’t know Alice” I detto for about the thousandth time this morning. “You could go hunt again if it makes te feel better?” I shook my head but smiled at her. I had been hunting about four times in the last two days, so if she thought I was going hunting again now, she had another thought coming. “I don’t get it Jazz. Why are te so worried?”I sighed. “This will be my first time of going through school. It’s a little different to the rest of the family who have gone through before. I’m not sure I have the self restraint to...” Her small hands covered my mouth. “Now te listen to me Jasper Hale. te will be fine and don’t te think any different.”She removed her hands from my lips placing them on her tiny hips. “Yes ma’am.” I detto ducking my head. She smiled and turned back to look through the massive wardrobe, that was basically all hers, other than the small section at the back which belonged to me. I sat on the letto watching her graceful movements. She eventually decided on something to wear and then started dusting down our room which was spotless already. “On secondo thought maybe I will go hunting.” I laughed. We both knew that I wasn’t really going hunting, but just getting away from her overly tidiness. I walked past Emmett and Rosalie’s room to see Rose, brushing through her hair sighing to herself. Yes, Rosalie was very pretty, but she didn’t appeal too much to me now. “Morning Jasper” She said. Wow Rosalie, in a good mood, make the most of it, I thought to myself. “Morning Rosalie. Are te looking inoltrare, avanti to today?” I asked striking up small talk with her. “Its school. It was only Alice and Emmett who wanted to go. I’d rather stay at home. We follow the same routine, at school everyone regards us as weird, we come home, and we leave on ‘camping’ trips.” She detto making quotation marks in the air with her fingers. “Then we sposta places and Carlisle wants us to start in another school and it’s all the same again.” She scowled. I nodded. No doubt she was right, I had watched them all go before, including Alice, who had offered to stay with me, but she liked school, so I told her I was fine and basically shoved her out the front door every morning. “How about you?” She asked. “I really don’t know” I detto truthfully.
Emmett’s POV
I had just finished my favourite meal ever. Grizzly bear, I loved those things. I headed back towards the house, smiling to myself. I didn’t mind going back into school, I liked it. Especially some of the expressions the humans wore when they saw me. They would always stay clear of us, which was a shame because half of them couldn’t be that bad. “I can’t believe te and Alice talked us all into going to school” Edward called from where he was sat in his car. I laughed as he rolled his eyes at me.
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if te have any ideas tell me
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I detto under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't te let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I detto giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I detto under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't te let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I detto giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
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Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? o later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? o later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now they don't say where they went they don't really exclain why they went AND people say Leggere can't hurt you! I got a huge head ach and i am a little dizzy. LIVING PROOF! I now know how brittanie spears felt when she didn't know what to do.I can't really think about anything più for this- see ya tomoorow! te think i ended it bad ? well least it isn't like sapranos where they stop in the midlle of a sent- .....
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(ps. don't worry i am nothing like the sapranos! and my successivo articolo will be longer!)