~twilight~

End of Chapter 9:

“Its fine Love, Let’s get back and figure this out. Love, te know te can talk to me about anything right?”
    “Yes I know. I just needed time to think without having to worry about Jasper felling my Emotions o Everyone looking at me and I think the family needed te and Neisse needs te to pick her up so I thought te were needed there più than here with me.”
“Okay but don’t be scared to ask to talk. Let’s get home until Neisse gets very worried and Alice and Emmet come looking for us.” He detto with a make shudder .I laughed.
    “Okay....

When te really think about it, Twilight consists of 50% talk about how hot Edward is. 30% of the word "chagrin" and 20% other. Even my English teacher detto that it's written at a 5th grade Leggere level, to which I completely agree. Bella and Edward aren't "in love" all they're experiencing is lust, obsession, infatuation. What good does Edward do to Bella? The whole time te hear about how perfect he is. It's easy to make a perfect character, anyone can do it. Besides, according to SMeyer, Bella is an "independent woman." Well, how is she independent? All of her decisions are based on Edward...

[BPOV]

"finally" i said

i finally finished buying all the things i will be needing tomorrow.i walk toward my car,opened the door and got inside.i started the engine .i am driving to the house now.i looked at my wrist watch,it is already 5:04 pm.i sighned.i thought i could finish the shopping trip before 4:00 pm.the road is already dark.i am driving very fast to get home fast.

i arrived at the house after a few minutes.i walked towards the house and open the door .i went inside and walked around finding the house empty.

"where could they be?"i asked myself.

i started walking to my room now.when i...

Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella te finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see te vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend o something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella te were sleeping here for 100 years!and now te finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...

Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I detto and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how te do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm colori like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my...