Ok, so I wrote this a long time ago. I think it sucks! What do te think? Please comment, I know it's bad but please don't me mean. I probably wrote it when I was about 12 o 13. If te have any suggestions I would Amore to hear them. But like I detto please don't leave mean comments. If te are wondering what it's about....I have no idea. It was just a random thing I wrote in about 5 o 10 minutes.
Melting Hearts
Your cuore melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
te feel dead on
the inside
te can hardly breathe
te fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
te have no
hope left
te hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around te going
through hell
Do te care?
Melting Hearts
Your cuore melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
te feel dead on
the inside
te can hardly breathe
te fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
te have no
hope left
te hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around te going
through hell
Do te care?
