castello [xy xx] Runaway while te can

I decided to make my first fan fiction about castello and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." castello detto looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" castello stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." castello whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." castello detto turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't te sleep with...