Is this a good poem and do te think più could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke o saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
te had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
o your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
te detto it was akward
And that te still Amore me
But I think I pushed te too far
What did I do
To make te push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want te in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for te even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if te want me back
Prove te won't hurt me again
Never again te will te hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
te fucked up









 MattxAliceNine posted più di un anno fa
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wolfgirl985 said:
That was good I dont think te have to add anything else its perfect :)
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posted più di un anno fa 
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Thank you. Im glad te liked it. i thought is was bad. sad i know
MattxAliceNine posted più di un anno fa
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your welcome it was sad, but it is good work :)
wolfgirl985 posted più di un anno fa
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Glad te liked it
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