Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have te ever been hurt da the one te love
Have te ever wanteed to change
Who te were, who te are, who te will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why te have the life te have
te have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt da the one one te love
Have te ever felt so betrayed
That te wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a cuore just da saying "hello"

Have te ever though te had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have te ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way o another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








 MattxAliceNine posted più di un anno fa
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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write più poems because te are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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