random

rispondi a questa domanda

random Domanda

Can te guys tell what do te think of it?

Call me wacko,call me " a weird one ",
i don't care,'cause te don't see...
te don't see the dept of my soul,
so call me what te want to...
When the sorrow tear my heart,
i hide my tears,i hide it from you,
'cause that's the way te can't see it,
the pain pulling me down and te don't feel
me the right way,the way i want...
Still the sorrow screams inside me,
that dark side of me te will never see,
te will never understand when i hush then
when i should say something,when i smile when i should cry...
*
I don't like poesia but well done!
Mrs-X posted più di un anno fa
*
Thank you. :)
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
 irena83 posted più di un anno fa
next question »

random Risposte

orangeturnip said:
a poem that sounds like a scream
a sadness inside ,
a message from your soul
a sad cry
but poems can be from the heart
can also be ...
from a position of empathy of anothers pain
either way i hope te can see
the sun is shineing (i wish looks likes its gonna storm)
any way i didn't want to write a short answer
i wanted to express that i loved it
but in doing so i
waffled and draged out my responce un neccercererly long and Lost my sence of spelling with the pain of brain freezing numbness

any hoos

this is for te
♥
and dont break it.
 select as best answer
posted più di un anno fa 
*
Thanks... I won't....
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
awwwh.
CullenProperty posted più di un anno fa
life_rehab said:
this is nice. really. i read poesia quite a lot and i'm a rather harsh critic but i do believe that this is pretty good. i mean, it's not Whitman o Shakespeare o whatever and you'll have to work hard and practise a lot to develop your talent, but this is 'you', te know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words and it is quite beautiful...if te polish it a little bit, it will be really good. nice job:)
 select as best answer
posted più di un anno fa 
*
Thanks a lot...
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
i hope te didn't mind my answer (i'm not sure if your commento is sarcastic o not...). really, that's just what i think... nevertheless, i like the poem and it shows great potential but you'll see that if te keep writing, you'll definitely evolve, you'll get better with every poem -- again, this doesn't mean that i don't like it cause, well, actually i do. anyway, i also wanted to say that it's nice to see other young people interested in poetry:)
life_rehab posted più di un anno fa
*
life_rehab; this ----> but this is 'you', te know, a little piece of your soul under the mask of words ... IS BEAUTIFUL! oh em gee
CullenProperty posted più di un anno fa
Vixie79 said:
"you will never understand when i hush then"

I Amore how te did this line, Amore the word hush too. ♥♥♥
 select as best answer
posted più di un anno fa 
*
:) ♥ thank you.
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
lol
CB4evaGiggles posted più di un anno fa
*
You're welcome hon ♥
Vixie79 posted più di un anno fa
CB4evaGiggles said:
wow, i think thats a really good, and about the soul poem, i like it!

 select as best answer
posted più di un anno fa 
*
Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
your welcome!! ur good!
CB4evaGiggles posted più di un anno fa
Pikafan32 said:
It's another beautiful accomplishment. Truly a fascinating write.
 select as best answer
posted più di un anno fa 
*
aw thank te so much. :)
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
:3 Your welcome
Pikafan32 posted più di un anno fa
clanbillr said:
Hi "irena83",
Thank te for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! te sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes Amore is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!!
So your neither wacko o weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of te and keep letting them out!!!
 select as best answer
Hi "irena83", Thank te for the awesome poem, "Again"!! We all get to wear our disguises because we don't want certain people to see how we're really feeling inside!! But those disguises end becoming walls so we don't get hurt again!! te sound like a truly loving and caring lady and someday the right person will come into your life!!! Just be aware that sometimes Amore is only there for a short while but it can feel like a lifetime!!! So your neither wacko o weird, it's just life!!! Your poems are from deep down inside of te and keep letting them out!!!
posted più di un anno fa 
*
Yes i agree with you,we all wear our disguises so those one's who can hurt our feelings easily can not see that. We try to cover that,our weakness.
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
Thank te and yes they are deep, i can say a cry of my soul.
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
We all have that same weakness inside of us!!!! I know it's your poem but we all cry in our souls!!!
clanbillr posted più di un anno fa
*
Oh yes we do.
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
CullenProperty said:
Pretty. Are te Scrivere it from past experiences from someone that hurt te o just because te can?
 select as best answer
posted più di un anno fa 
*
Well actually i wrote that from my personal experience. It did happen a long time ago, but i guess i didn't forget.
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
*
On one hand it's funny that we can't seem to forget those things! But on the other hand it's great that we don't so we don't have to repeat and go through them all over again!!!
clanbillr posted più di un anno fa
*
oh well, thats sadening & pretty cool at the same tim
CullenProperty posted più di un anno fa
NatyLy said:
I Amore it! good job! :)
 select as best answer
posted più di un anno fa 
*
:) Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted più di un anno fa
next question »
Cookies help us bring you Fanpop. By using Fanpop, you agree to our use of cookies. Learn More Got It!