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what do te think of this poem?

this is my first but just tell like it is. if te hate it just tell me.

every time i look at te i makes me want too cry.

every time i look at te it makes me want too scream.

every time i look at te it makes me want too die.

every time i look at te it makes me think of te and her lastnight.

so what do te think should i wright more?

lilred96 posted più di un anno fa

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dustfinger said:

this is not a poem. its a song. make it a song. i like it so far.

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posted più di un anno fa

ok thanks for answering ;)

lilred96 posted più di un anno fa

Mela1994 said:

i like it, u should write more!!! :D

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posted più di un anno fa

do te think people would read it?

lilred96 posted più di un anno fa

i would read it so yeah i think people would read it :)

Mela1994 posted più di un anno fa

sweet_n_silly said:

like dustfinger I think it would be a good song. It's pretty darn good too. there's some spelling issues though. te definately should write more.

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posted più di un anno fa

if u do decide to make it into a song, I could maybe write the Musica if u want

sweet_n_silly posted più di un anno fa

peterslover said:

Awesome☺ Like they said, make it into a song☺
successivo line could be:
every time I look at te I want to say goodbye

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TwilightSagaLdy said:

yeah its più of a song and its pretty good!!! and i think te should finish Scrivere it! i like it!!! =)

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