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I am incredibly proud of this peice ( I never though it was possible for me to write this much in a day!) let me know if te agree.
Twilightsauce

Training was hard but incredibly fun much to mum and dad’s dislike. Kate had helped me like she had my mum and Emmet and Jasper were teaching me tactics.
“Okay Emmet, I’m ready to go again!” I called after he had managed to floor me for the sixteenth time. As I slipped into a low crouch I flashed Esme a huge grin, I had hardly got to spend any alone time with her since we arrived in Denali, what with the sadistic vampire and me being...

chapter four
sry for the wait! i was just waiting for some feed back. i don't like Scrivere più chapters when i don't know if anyone liked my last one. hope te like this one.
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Jake's POV
Everyone had already pulled me and edward apart before anything went any further.the only thing i could think about was heavenly.
"edward why would te waste your time fighting off this mutt anyway?" asked blondie.
i couldn't help but let out a growl, she hissed back. everyone was trying to get passed this issue so we could talk about Nessie. why the hell should...

chapter three


"Now heavenly i don't know how nessie is gonna react to seeing te on my side." he warned me, i didn't care.
"is that what te call her?.... nessie? well maybe we could be friends."
"i doubt it. anyways, this house is filled with vamps. there is: bella, you've seen her. her husband, edward. there is alice, edward's sister and Jasper who is edward's brother. alice and Jasper are married too."
"eww! didn't te just say they were both edward's siblings?"
"uh.... no they are adopted."
"oh, ok sorry. keep goin'."
"ok umm.... Edward will be the prettiest of them all. Alice will be the...