Well I promised this tomorrow but I finished it and well here it is. It's Bree tanner in diegos point of view. Going from where he left her his final night with her. I wrote this fir fun and have only wrote this one. Here's the link about me explaining what I am doing: link
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun te first timers Leggere my fan fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my successivo project I am working on. So te will see this draft again at the end of his story I will write so many moons from now. But successivo time it will be very different. I am ninety six percent sure of that. Diego is one of my preferito characters of the twilight saga and I thought he deserved his own story and hopefully te can relate to him and learn to Amore him as much as I do. Well sorry for the long introduction. Umm please commento and critique I like that stuff well thanks for Leggere here's the story. Please remember not edited and I am sure it will be different the successivo time I put it up. So please don't be too harsh. Here it is
I frowned as I turned around an ran from Bree. I felt bad about tricking her, but I did know if this turned badly...well Riley wouldn't hurt me, but I didn't know about Bree. Riley trusted me. I would make it up to her later. I was about to turn around and maybe talk to Riley tomorrow. I thought about our new hand shake all giorno and couldn't wait to mostra her tomorrow...- "Diego?" Riley asked, interrupting my thoughts. Crap! He was with her. I looked in her deep red eyes, her expression menacing "I knew someone was spying on us! te there!-" she grabbed my camicia with her fist and yanked me up to her, her eyes only inches from mine-"What did te hear?! What did te see?!" she growled, her voice was still, high. Almost a shriek "n-nothing, I just wanted to ask Riley about some theories" I said, for the first time truly terrified, but she could tell I was lying. My voice was so shaken it gave away my lie. She threw me on the ground and turned on Riley "So, tell me Riley, te can always really distract them with thirst?" she growled. He looked at me quickly, then back at Victoria "umm..." he detto ,dumbfounded. I guessed "I thought he was, but he is almost a year...he-" "I guess te thought wrong" she detto interrupting him "you" she detto "get up!" she yelled and grabbed me again "your coming with us, te are going to tell me everything, and I will find out one way o another!" she said.
We walked...Until we got to the log cabina then we stopped inside, she slammed the door behind her. Then the lights came on, she glared at me for a long minuto "what all did te hear?" she said, I thought about all the things we saw and what I was going to tell her. She slammed me in the wall, hard "what did te hear!?" she yelled. I looked at Riley, betrayed. He looked at me apologetically while he did nothing to stop her "umm...well I saw those people in the dark cloaks. I was following Riley to tell him that I found out the sun didn't hurt. I didn't mean to" I said. She smiled at me, her grin harsh. She wasn't happy, she was menacing "oh...I think te did, and te will pay! Riley!" she yelled. She startled Riley "hold him down, I am going to get the truth" she said. Riley hesitated for a moment "fine then, but te either lose him, o me" she snapped. Then he slowly closed his eyes for a long minute. In that one minute, he turned to stone. He wasn't the Riley I knew anymore. He opened his eyes and they looked like actual rubies, hard and cold? Yes. The Riley I knew and trusted was gone.
He walked sullenly toward me. For one brief secondo his eyes looked apollogetic, but then went hard again. He held my arms down, pinned against the bacheca "now,what were your theories?" she asked "we-we can go out in the sun, w-without being burned...the sun doesn't hurt" I detto "but it does burn" she hissed picking up my leg with one arm, with the other she slammed her elbow into it hard. It felt like she set it on fuoco Riley shuddered, as I saw my unattached leg get thrown into another bacheca I screamed. "Riley" I screamed, why was he doing this. I struggled to get out of his grasp. He did not look at me. He looked at the ground while holding me. He did not react to my voice "was anyone with you, while te were listening?" she asked. I would not tell her about Bree, I would be killed a thousand times before, SHE knew. I shook my head "wait" Riley said, his voice cold "he was with one girl yesterday, all day. In one of his hideouts. I think her name was Bree" Riley detto "oh, well who is that? And what is this hideout?" she detto looking in my eyes for risposte "it's a cave, the sun was coming up, and I was trying to be responsible. I took her with me. She doesn't know about the sun, she doesn't know that I was listening. All we did that giorno was talk...about our walt life, before now. We became Friends and that's all. I even finished making our hand shake. But we decided to keep our distance when we got back and would want to hunt together. I even really, really like her. I have no clue about her but that's all. She doesn't know anything" I detto really fast.
I waited as she took that in slowly. She pulled off my other leg and threw it to another bacheca "what did te hear tonight?" she detto calmly, but the calm didn't touch her eyes "I heard everything the people in cloaks said, and before that. Nothing else. I was wanting to tell Riley about the sun, that's all" I detto but she didn't believe that I wasn't trying to spy she grabbed my forefinger and moved it around "and te weren't trying to spy on us?" she asked "no" I said. She ripped it off, the pain, the fuoco burning stronger. "Are te sure?" she asked "no" I detto again. She ripped off another one. I screamed and struggled. I needed to leave now, but Riley was stronger. Especially since I was weak. She ripped off three più "you were spying on us weren't you?!" she yelled and ripped off my other hand. I screamed and confessed "yes, I was curious" I screamed some more. She smiled "I knew it." she grinned bigger. Riley let me fall. I screamed in pain, she walked slowly closer to me and from the corner of my eyes I saw Riley mouth "I am sorry". She stopped less than an inch from me and detto "your services are no longer needed. Thanks for everything" she said. Then put both hands on the side of my head. Ready to rip my head off.The last thing I saw when I closed my eyes...before the blackness came over was Bree. I closed my eyes and waited for the final fire, the large amount of pain and burning to come to end. Along with my short secondo life as Diego.
Again not edited and please commento I hope te enjoyed this. Umm see te friday for those of te who read a lot of my writings
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun te first timers Leggere my fan fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my successivo project I am working on. So te will see this draft again at the end of his story I will write so many moons from now. But successivo time it will be very different. I am ninety six percent sure of that. Diego is one of my preferito characters of the twilight saga and I thought he deserved his own story and hopefully te can relate to him and learn to Amore him as much as I do. Well sorry for the long introduction. Umm please commento and critique I like that stuff well thanks for Leggere here's the story. Please remember not edited and I am sure it will be different the successivo time I put it up. So please don't be too harsh. Here it is
I frowned as I turned around an ran from Bree. I felt bad about tricking her, but I did know if this turned badly...well Riley wouldn't hurt me, but I didn't know about Bree. Riley trusted me. I would make it up to her later. I was about to turn around and maybe talk to Riley tomorrow. I thought about our new hand shake all giorno and couldn't wait to mostra her tomorrow...- "Diego?" Riley asked, interrupting my thoughts. Crap! He was with her. I looked in her deep red eyes, her expression menacing "I knew someone was spying on us! te there!-" she grabbed my camicia with her fist and yanked me up to her, her eyes only inches from mine-"What did te hear?! What did te see?!" she growled, her voice was still, high. Almost a shriek "n-nothing, I just wanted to ask Riley about some theories" I said, for the first time truly terrified, but she could tell I was lying. My voice was so shaken it gave away my lie. She threw me on the ground and turned on Riley "So, tell me Riley, te can always really distract them with thirst?" she growled. He looked at me quickly, then back at Victoria "umm..." he detto ,dumbfounded. I guessed "I thought he was, but he is almost a year...he-" "I guess te thought wrong" she detto interrupting him "you" she detto "get up!" she yelled and grabbed me again "your coming with us, te are going to tell me everything, and I will find out one way o another!" she said.
We walked...Until we got to the log cabina then we stopped inside, she slammed the door behind her. Then the lights came on, she glared at me for a long minuto "what all did te hear?" she said, I thought about all the things we saw and what I was going to tell her. She slammed me in the wall, hard "what did te hear!?" she yelled. I looked at Riley, betrayed. He looked at me apologetically while he did nothing to stop her "umm...well I saw those people in the dark cloaks. I was following Riley to tell him that I found out the sun didn't hurt. I didn't mean to" I said. She smiled at me, her grin harsh. She wasn't happy, she was menacing "oh...I think te did, and te will pay! Riley!" she yelled. She startled Riley "hold him down, I am going to get the truth" she said. Riley hesitated for a moment "fine then, but te either lose him, o me" she snapped. Then he slowly closed his eyes for a long minute. In that one minute, he turned to stone. He wasn't the Riley I knew anymore. He opened his eyes and they looked like actual rubies, hard and cold? Yes. The Riley I knew and trusted was gone.
He walked sullenly toward me. For one brief secondo his eyes looked apollogetic, but then went hard again. He held my arms down, pinned against the bacheca "now,what were your theories?" she asked "we-we can go out in the sun, w-without being burned...the sun doesn't hurt" I detto "but it does burn" she hissed picking up my leg with one arm, with the other she slammed her elbow into it hard. It felt like she set it on fuoco Riley shuddered, as I saw my unattached leg get thrown into another bacheca I screamed. "Riley" I screamed, why was he doing this. I struggled to get out of his grasp. He did not look at me. He looked at the ground while holding me. He did not react to my voice "was anyone with you, while te were listening?" she asked. I would not tell her about Bree, I would be killed a thousand times before, SHE knew. I shook my head "wait" Riley said, his voice cold "he was with one girl yesterday, all day. In one of his hideouts. I think her name was Bree" Riley detto "oh, well who is that? And what is this hideout?" she detto looking in my eyes for risposte "it's a cave, the sun was coming up, and I was trying to be responsible. I took her with me. She doesn't know about the sun, she doesn't know that I was listening. All we did that giorno was talk...about our walt life, before now. We became Friends and that's all. I even finished making our hand shake. But we decided to keep our distance when we got back and would want to hunt together. I even really, really like her. I have no clue about her but that's all. She doesn't know anything" I detto really fast.
I waited as she took that in slowly. She pulled off my other leg and threw it to another bacheca "what did te hear tonight?" she detto calmly, but the calm didn't touch her eyes "I heard everything the people in cloaks said, and before that. Nothing else. I was wanting to tell Riley about the sun, that's all" I detto but she didn't believe that I wasn't trying to spy she grabbed my forefinger and moved it around "and te weren't trying to spy on us?" she asked "no" I said. She ripped it off, the pain, the fuoco burning stronger. "Are te sure?" she asked "no" I detto again. She ripped off another one. I screamed and struggled. I needed to leave now, but Riley was stronger. Especially since I was weak. She ripped off three più "you were spying on us weren't you?!" she yelled and ripped off my other hand. I screamed and confessed "yes, I was curious" I screamed some more. She smiled "I knew it." she grinned bigger. Riley let me fall. I screamed in pain, she walked slowly closer to me and from the corner of my eyes I saw Riley mouth "I am sorry". She stopped less than an inch from me and detto "your services are no longer needed. Thanks for everything" she said. Then put both hands on the side of my head. Ready to rip my head off.The last thing I saw when I closed my eyes...before the blackness came over was Bree. I closed my eyes and waited for the final fire, the large amount of pain and burning to come to end. Along with my short secondo life as Diego.
Again not edited and please commento I hope te enjoyed this. Umm see te friday for those of te who read a lot of my writings
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie te know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... o with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e Pianoforte for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie te know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... o with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e Pianoforte for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" o "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" o "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude commenti about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
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there's a New Spot Made, it's The Leah and Jacob spot, so if te like their friendship/relationsip couple wise, feel free to join!
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unisciti TODAY!
where te can discuss their partnership, with other fans, make/find Leah and Jacob fan Art, and what te think over all of Jacob and Leah.
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